Author update:

Just an fyi to everyone. This was more of a rushed, one shot story. And even though I know a few of you want me to continue I just want this to be a one shot. I may right a different story, pertaining to them both, but we'll see

As for the ones that critized it, well I thank you. As I've said it was rushed, and I thought it turned out good, despite of that fact. So yes, my grammar and my sentence structure did lack its usual style. But at the time I didn't care.

And also I'm more of a roleplayer. I've rped since 2006, in many different eras. Maybe that's another reason I lack what some of you want. But that's okay, I always strive for perfection. But for now this story was only a one shot.

Maybe soon you'll see a new story, but once again thank you for the kind reviews. Even the negative ones.

Cheers!