This is my first story, so I really appreciate constructive critiscm. I'm not going to be one of those authors who keep asking people to review, but please do. I'll update even without reviews, but I'll only do it when I have time. So here goes:

Disclaimer: I don't own MR.

Chapter 1:

Max POV

This was my first day at my new school, Wilkinson High. I had transferred after my mom had moved to get a new job as a vet. So far it was just like any new school was, confusing and people kept looking at me weirdly. I just glared back at them, so they flinched and looked away. Then I remembered the promise I had made to Mom, that I would try to be nice.

So far I had made one friend, a girl called Jennifer Joy, but who preferred being called JJ, as I preferred being call just Max as opposed to my full name, Maximum Ride. JJ was about 5'6, shorter than my 5'11. She had brown hair, down to her shoulders (A/N: I forgot what she looked like, so I made up her description). She introduced me to her best friend, Nudge. I'm not sure if that's her real name or nickname, but everyone calls her that. She was mocha-colored skinned, and had talked more in our first conversation together than me in my entire life.

As I was going to my first class, which happened to be Math. Ugh, my worst class. I was in the hallway when I bumped into someone. As I lifted my head to apologize, I saw someone I hadn't seen in a very long time. Someone I had hoped never to see again. I finally acknowledged the person.

"Fang."

Sorry, I know it's short but I need just one review so I will update when I get one review.

-ACCflock ;)