Mortia. - First Member Review

looneymania- First not logged in Member review

Read my new story Hidden Tears! Hopefully you'll enjoy it like KNDNumbuuh3.4 did.

Footsteps sounded through the empty halls of Moon Base. Yet, the halls weren't empty at all. A short blonde boy shuffled through the halls whistling to himself.

"Mine, mine, mine." He started singing softly. "No one to stop me now." He picked up the KND ode Moduel and launched it across the room, it hit a wall sending pages fluttering everywhere. The boy walked past it. "Mine, mine, mine..." He continued singing. "Everyone's wondering how." He smiled. He turned into another hall kicking open a door and entering Numbuh 362's office. "Yet I still wonder how..." He opened random folders, spreading out the sheets within. "Mine, mine, mine..." His eyes scanned the page and he saw his name, his eyebrows slowly raised to his forehead. "The Knd...is mine now." He trailed off.

"Wallabee Beatles, a.k.a Numbuh 4 of Sector V, has disappeared on this day. His current whereabouts are unknown, and he...is..." Numbuh 4 paused. "Family?" Numbuh 4 tried reading Rachel's scribbly handwriting. "Family misses him dearly...Numbuh 4 is thought to be a-as-asso-." Numbuh 4 glared at the chicken scratch before him. "...associated with the recent murders. KND code cams have caught sight of a blonde boy with an orange hoodie, who brutally slaughters his victims." Wally said. "Wow, she knows a lot of big words." He ripped the paper to shreds.

"Mine...mine...mine..." He picked up his tune as he pulled a knife out and put the point to his finger and the bottom on the finger of his opposite hand. "I'm the strongest in the KND." He slightly winced as a drop blood fell from his finger and landed on Rachel's desk. "Mine...mine...mine..." He said. "No one will ever step up to me." Of course thought he couldn't be a perfect leader...there wasn't a KND anymore...all parents would probably never let their children out of their sights again after the tragedy that took place at the school. "Mine...mine...mine..." Wally thought about the mistake he made... "I didn't kill Numbuh 3...I didn't kill Kuki...I did kill her just because...that cruddy Sheila loves me-." Wally choked on his words. He let his head rest on Rachel's desk and sighed.

He chuckled, raising his head and stretching...He walked back out and picked up a page of the code module with EVERY single operative's name and sector on it.

"Fine, Fine, Fine..." He sang. "I'll kill her when I get Sector V."

One word...

Sequel...

Three words...

Title: Unfinished Business

...Transmission Ended...