CHAPTER 1
She knew exactly what is happening. Ian Doyle, had kidnapped her in order to get to Emily, but she's not going to tell him, no matter what he's doing to her she's not going to crack, and will keep Emily safe. She wondered if the team knew she was missing. She tried to ignore the aching pain in the back of her head.
Her thoughts were cut off, when someone opened the door. She knew it was Doyle and that he will ask her where Emily is. She tried to prepare herself for what was coming. As Doyle grab a chair and sat against her he looked her right in the eye and said.
"Tell me were Lauren – Emily Prentiss is and I'm not going to hurt you, or you're family."
"I don't know." she replied, and was hoping that he's not going to hurt her family.
"Wrong answer." he said, as he hit her hard in the stomach. He's hit was so hard that she felt sick. He asked her again. "Where is she?"
"I don't know." she said, as she waited for him to hit her again.
"Don't lie to me, I know that you're her handler, and that you know were she and my son are." he said with his cold voice.
"I don't know what are you talking about, I don't know where is she or you're son" she lied, hoping he would believe her. "All I know, is that they are safe." she added
He smiled, as he pulled out a small syringe. Her eyes grow wild, as he got close to her and untied his belt, so that he can put it on her hand, and then said. "You think you can fool me." She began to struggle against him, as she realized what he's going to do, but his grip was stronger and he injected the syringe into her veins. He watched, as she tried to fight the drug, he smiled and said. "Jennifer you could've avoid this, but instead you decided to protect Emily."
Before he got out of the room, where he held JJ, he turned and said "I will be back sunshine, and I hope you're going to tell me were Emily and my son are, for you're sake."
He left her alone, beaten and drugged in that small room. She tried to fight the drug, but soon. It took toll and she passed out, he had injected her with something strong, but she didn't know what.
I'm reposting this story, because, I think it will be easier for me to continue it this way.
And I hope this time there aren't so many grammar mistakes.
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