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Once again I thank all you wonderful reviewers!  :)   Your thoughts and comments are absolute gems.  The new regulations kind of confused me, but I'm pretty sure I'm allowed to put reviewer responses as the bottom of the page.  (I guess I'll find out soon, won't I?)

*looks over precipice*  Well, there's no going back now…

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~ Chapter 18: One Shall Pass ~

Bergil gasped in shock.  He had not expected the corsair to strike so quickly. 

Bitaliel twisted frantically as she was dragged to her feet and bound.  "What has happened?" the woman demanded, her voice pitching slightly in panic. "Tell me!"

Bergil blinked several times, his mind attempting to make sense of what he had just witnessed.  His eyes fell upon Legolas and he was at once alarmed to see the look of horror upon the Elf's normally calm visage. 

Following the gaze of the Elf lord, Bergil looked down. 

His eyes widened in disbelief.  He was surprised to find himself cradling his abdomen.  And even more surprised to find the knife protruding from it.

His body shuddered.  There were sounds of scuffle upon the sands, and then the sharp threat, "One more move and the Dwarf dies, Elf."  A pain unlike anything Bergil had ever experienced rushed from the knife and through his body like liquid fire.  The earth began to spin.  He doubled over with a moan, feeling his legs give away. 

Suddenly the grinning face of Mortsdil was before him.  The pirate clasped him by the shoulders and drew him in close, as though intending to embrace the young guard.  His sea-colored eyes glinted with an unholy light.

The corsair plunged the knife deeper and then upward, grinning all the while.  A scream tore itself from Bergil's lips.  His cry mingled with Aragorn's roar and the frightened shriek of Bitaliel.

Mortsdil's grin curved downward into a feral snarl as he withdrew the knife, feeling it scrape against the young guard's ribcage.  Warm blood coated his hands like paint.

He shoved Bergil backwards and the young man sank to his knees, choking and gasping for breath. 

It was almost funny, the faces people tended to make while amidst their death throes.

"Bergil!"  At Aragorn's hoarse cry, Mortsdil turned his attention away from the writhing figure at his feet.  The King of Gondor was struggling mightily against the two corsairs who held him at bay.  Standing aside, Mortsdil motioned for the men to release Aragorn.

Aragorn immediately flung himself to Bergil's side.

"Bergil?  Bergil!  Bergil, can you hear me?"  He placed an arm underneath the young man's head and drew him upright, urgency causing him to handle Bergil with uncharacteristic roughness.  'Hear me, son of Beregond!  Your time is not yet come.  Not yet!'

Bergil coughed.  There was blood in his mouth.  He had always hated its taste; the iron saltiness caused him to gag.  "My… Lord…"  He gasped, unable to draw a full breath of air.  Something was wrong; he could not breathe.  And there was a look in Aragorn's eyes he had never before seen.  What was it?

It was fear.  Aragorn was frightened.

'He is afraid!  My Liege is afraid!'  Bergil whimpered as his own panic began to rise.  How badly was he hurt?  He could not die, not yet—no, his king would not let him die. 

The liquid fire increased in heat, causing him to double into himself.  "It hurts…"  He moaned, unable to hold back the tears now coursing down his cheeks.  "It hurts!  Please, My Lord… please… the pain…" 

"Hush Bergil.  Hush.  All is well."  Aragorn clasped the young man's hand within his own, ignoring the blood that poured forth in seemingly endless streams.  Bergil's knuckles turned white, so hard did he clench Aragorn's hand in reply.

Bitaliel dropped to her knees and scrambled towards the duo.  Aragorn reflexively shielded Bergil as she unintentionally flung sand upon the two in her haste.

"Boy?  Boy, where are you?"  Bitaliel's bound and trembling hands found the tear-stained face.  She began to repetitively stroke away the hair from his forehead, repeating Aragorn's words as if by doing so would make them true.  "All is well.  All is well.  All is well…"

Bergil spasmed, clenching Aragorn's hand so tightly the blood covering them squelched in protest.  He arched his back in desperate attempt to gain air, only to conversely cough and double over as the feat proved too painful.

"Bergil!"  Aragorn's voice came harsh and unnatural.  Bergil opened his crimson-stained mouth in muted plea of agony and stared back at the King of Gondor.  

Aragorn had knelt beside too many fallen companions to not immediately recognize the unnerving way Bergil stared directly through him.  A choked sob tore itself from the young man's lips.  "Son of Beregond, do not wander!  Remain, Bergil.  Your King commands it of you!"  

But even a King was not capable of dismissing Death.

Bergil's body jerked once before going stiff and rigid.  The once-lively grey eyes widened and extinguished; the face that so often bore the easy-going smile froze in final agony.

Bitaliel threw back her head and howled.  Her scream carried long and far down the shore, causing seagulls and sandpipers to take to the air in alarm.            

And thus did Bergil, son of Beregond and loyal guard to King Elessar of Gondor, pass beyond the realm of Middle-earth, never again to see the White Tower of his beloved home.

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*despondently shuffles feet and sighs*  Oh I was so fond of Bergil.  Curse you Writing Muse!  Curse you to Morgoth's Void and beyond!!!

~THANK YOU~

Lamiel-  Yes, this chapter's very short, but I guess it doesn't need to be too long to get the point across.  Gimli deserved his moments of Dwarven Warrior (even if it didn't end up favorably).  I originally had Legolas getting caught in a fisherman's net, but then realized considering his location, it probably wasn't too plausible.  If there were severe undertow, there probably wouldn't be a lot of fish…  And it's a nice little reminder to him that he IS being watched.  (And to stop feeling sorry for himself.)  Mortsdil + Silmaril = Very Bad.  Thank you for the review, oh she of Writing Greatness!!! :)

Nightwing-  Well, in all honestly, I guess some of the grammar was a bit skewed.  But ah, "each to his own," as the saying goes.  Keel-hauling is nasty, isn't it?  I was doing some pirate research for Mortsdil & Co background info (that, and I have always wanted to be a pirate…) when I came across it.  Let's hope Gimli's neck is thicker than the average Man's.  My thanks for your get-well wishing (they tell me the scars are supposed to fade, and I'm hoping cocoa butter does the rest).  And thank you for the review! :)

WeaselyTwinsLover1112-  Yes, exactly—Legolas must go to Valinor with Gimli, so he's not in any danger of being knocked off.  I'm only stretching canon.  ;)  Thank you for the review!

kayloo-  I hoped Ulmo would add a bit of lightness to the whole thing before it got too dark.  He certainly doesn't have any sympathy for Legolas.  And I suppose Legolas was feeling sorry enough for himself.  Thank you for the review!! :)

fliewatuet- It occurs to me I have a nasty habit of ending on cliff-hangers.  For some reason they seem to work well with this tale, though.  Thank you for the incredible email, again, by the way.  :)  Oooh, there's more Kingly Aragorn for you in later chapters… Well, next chapter, anyways.  The French town sounds gorgeous.  I've only ever been to Calais (and then drove through via bus)—no crystalline moments of beauty to be had in that.  Thank you for the great review!  :)

SpaceVixenX-  Oh I completely agree.  Thank you for the review! ;)

Sheleigh- *shuffles feet in embarrassment*  It was high time for an update, wasn't it?  I suppose I got caught up in other things and whatnot…  I work on it whenever spare time permits.  :)  Thank you for the wonderful review!

Templa Otmena-  Perhaps set aside, but never abandoned.  I vowed to finish this tale if it kills me!  (Which, hopefully, it won't come down to that…)  Thank you for your kind words!  It really was not my intention to become so busy or so ill.  And I'm rather convinced someone is lurking about with a "Let's Give Bryn Strange Afflictions" voodoo doll.  (Just wait until I find them…)  I'm so glad you found Aragorn's reaction fitting.  That's been one of the hardest aspects to write—the conflict between his anger and his loyalties.  *grin*  I'm also thrilled you enjoyed 'Out of the Frying Pan.'  :)  That was my first fic and I've never had so much fun writing.  I've got a similar-genre piece in the wings, but I think Ithilien is going to kill me if I post any more stories without finishing this one.  Thank you for the magnificent review!!!  :)

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