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This is my first 5.0 fic, hope you all like it and leave me a review with anything you'd like to see happen and I'll see if I can fit it in. I have a few things planned so I hope you stay tuned in.

Sadly I don't own any 5.0 characters but Jeni is my own

Chapter One

Crash

"Will you slow down, you maniac!" Detective Danny Williams hated when his partner Steve McGarrett would go over the speed limit and in his car. He wouldn't be surprised if they were in an accident one day with the way that Steve likef to speed and only because he could.

"What?" Steve asked sarcastically, wondering why his partner was complaining about his driving again when he had always been a very careful driver, and of course would never intend on doing anything to annoy or hurt his friend, but that was debatable.

"I'm telling you to slow down, Superman, before we end up upside down when you try to turn a corner"

"There's nothing wrong with my driving, stop being so paranoid, Danno," Steve knew he could wind up his partner easily and it was fun to see him being so nervous when it was his turn to drive, as it was most of the time.

"Paranoid? I'm not paranoid, you're just an insane driver", Danny almost felt like he had to cling to his seat belt with the speed Steve was going at when they were on another run to talk to a potential suspect on their latest case. Steve wasn't going to let this suspect get away quickly or easily and only smirked when Danny called him an insane driver which left his partner a little more annoyed that he couldn't seem to get through to this man.

Speeding down the main street, dodging several cars on their way, Steve could tell they were still a few minutes from the address they had their minds set on when his cell started ringing. He thought it may be Chin or Kono with more details on the case but instead he smiled when he recognised the name of his beautiful girlfriend, Jennifer, of the past two years, pop up onto the hands-free screen in the middle of the dashboard of the car.

"Was that a smile? Really? Well aren't you going to answer it lover boy?" Danny could barely believe that it only ever seemed to be Jeni that could get Steve to smile properly but he was glad that his partner seemed to be human under his tough disguise. Steve waited for a few rings of his cell until he slowed down a little more so he could talk to Jeni properly without having to worry about the road.

"Jen, what can I do for you, babe?" Steve answered his cell, hoping that this was an important call as he had a suspect to be catching, he loved his girlfriend, she just called at the wrong times but then she could never tell where he would be and would often catch him at a bad time.

"Oh, I think there's a lot you could do for me, Sailor, but I'll keep that for later. I just want to see what you're up to. I'm on break here and I miss your voice," Jeni smiled as she spoke to her boyfriend, not realising that Danny was listening in too.

"Up to? Kind to chasing after a suspect at the moment, it's not the best time again Jen. Promise I'll make it up to you later," Steve could hear Jeni sighing quietly on the other end; it never seemed to be a good time. Danny too could hear the pause made by Jeni on the other end and felt bad for her.

"Jeni, while you're here you could tell your crazy boyfriend to slow down before he gets us both killed," even though Steve had slowed down to talk to Jeni he was still speeding. It barely registered with Jeni that Danny was in the car with Steve too and felt a little embarrassed now when she mentioned that Steve could do plenty for her later on. She knew Danny would know what she meant, they weren't stupid.

"Oh, Danny. Should have guessed you were there too. Steve please slow down before your man crush makes a mess of the car," Jeni knew of the Bromance between her boyfriend and Danny, she thought it was adorable how they got along one minute and seemed like bitter enemies the next.

"Man crush? I've heard it all now. I love you Steve, really, but not quite in that way. You've got your woman, I've got mine, that's the way it should be," Danny couldn't help but laugh slightly, but hoped that Steve would listen to Jeni.

"Hey, first, it's not a man crush. You'll be the death of me, Jeni, and two, I only love you," Steve smiled again when he started admitting his feelings again, it was a strange concept to him but Jeni had brought a lot out in him that he didn't think he possessed.

"Right, enough with the soppiness. Steve we really got to get this suspect if you would care to make up to your lady afterwards," Danny hated to be a party pooper but the more Steve slowed down the more time their suspect had to get away and Jeni got the message that this was a bad time to call. She hoped to catch Steve on a good time to call soon and have a real conversation with him over the phone one day.

"Right... sorry, Jen; got to go. Talk to you later, love you", Steve started to speed up again, the air whizzing through the open windows and continually speeding up to fifty five miles per hour and then close to sixty.

Too busy with saying goodbye to Jeni, taking on Danny's comments and looking to his partner he failed to notice the unmarked crossroads that he was heading up to and continued to keep his mind on getting to the address of the suspect that was only a few streets away now and with a HGV lorry coming their way.

"Alright, Steve. I'll talk to you later, love you too, hopefully you'll be home soon. Or I could stop by your office. Anyway, I'll see you later. Nice talking to you too Danny," Jeni hoped that Steve and Danny would take care of themselves, she hated seeing the injuries either of them gained from some missions and cases and will always try to patch him up but there's only so much she could do.

"See you, Jen. Enjoy the rest of your...," Jeni didn't know what happened when Danny's voice cut off but clinging to the edge of her cell she listened closely to the incredibly loud noises on the other end, the crunching of metal and the smash of glass and then nothing. Nothing. The line had died.

"Steve! Danny! Answer me, please! Steve!" Jeni almost screamed down her cell to get either of the men in the car to answer her but there was no response.

The HGV lorry at the crossroads had just kept on coming while Steve continued to speed past. The lorry hit Steve and Danny heavily from the side, on the driver's side, and sent the Camero screeching down the street as it tumbled several times and finally came to a dead stop, glass and metal surrounding them. Both Steve and Danny lay unconscious, the eerie silence between them was deafening with the extent of their injuries unknown. Jeni continued to call down her cell for a response from them, tears in her eyes. It was never like them to hang up on her without finishing their sentence and with the things she heard before the line died; it shook her to the core. She could feel herself shaking in fear of what she thought had happened. She didn't know what to do. She felt numb for a moment before she quickly decided to call Chin and Kono, the only other people she could trust at a time like this.

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