Chapter 14 reviewer's + Q&A:

Splendora C.A.M McGonagall

Peace Pink Seddie

Call Moi Crazy

The One You Never Suspected

One thing I would say about your writing is that is lacks detail. Other than that it is great!

I always try to add more detail but I end up getting straight to the point... Maybe it's because I'm too excited to post. Thanks for the suggestion!

BunnySwag101

Hey btw, could you mabye put some action?

Yes! There is some action at the end of this chapter. Thanks for the suggestion!

Zach Goode's Girl xxx

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Thanks for reviewing!

MONDAY AFTERNOON

Macey's POV

Tonight, everything is going to be so interesting. I really hope everyone saw what I highlighted in my notebook this morning. "Prepare for the worst and surprised for the best". There is no way they are going to reject the guys, not at this stage at least.

Now I got to make sure everything goes according to plan. Liz is suppose to work with Jonas very soon somewhere outside because it's nice out. As soon as she's done, we're having dinner. Jonas and Liz will present their idea to the whole school. If everything goes okay with Jonas, they'll both be confident and happy with each other. It's perfect. Now there's a chance that Bex will notice both of them beet red in the face. No one's going to comment on it because we'll all know why. Except her, and she hates being out of the loop. That's when Grant will offer to work out with her to burn off all the 'fat' they have eaten. From there it's all up to him.

If everything works out, Bex will come back with a smile on her face. I will bug her about it, then Liz. Eventually we'll all find out what's happening. Everything should be fine.

Unless it doesn't go according to plan.

Liz's POV

Okay Lizzie, this is your moment! Tonight you complete all of this with Jonas and maybe, just maybe reveal that you like him. Only if you're sure it wouldn't make the friendship you already have with him, awkward.

I walk into my room ready to grab my stuff when I notice the window is open. A light warm breeze enters the room making me stop and stare outside. It was beautiful out there.

"Jonas said that it's too nice to be inside. He said he'll be by the Gallagher Lake, under a tree waiting for you." Macey said from the other side of the room. That's when I notice the pile of clothes on the floor.

"Okay and why are you putting our clothing in a... luggage bag?" Now I was confused. Sure the break was less than a week away but why was she packing mine and Bex's clothes too?

"I'm trying a new method of organizing. You guys need new clothes anyways so being the thoughtful person I am, I'm organizing everything in the luggage bags so I don't have to use the whole room. That way you, Bex, or Cammie can come in and get what you need without ruining the piles of clothing I made. We're going to town on Friday anyways." She finished with a smile. Even I thought that was pretty clever.

"Okay... well I'll be back for dinner!" That's when I left with one thought in my mind. Was she really telling the whole truth?

*Time skip*

"AND... WE'RE DONE!" I pretty much yelled at him. I was so excited. Not only was I going to be able to communicate with him over the break, I could customize my phone to add new features.

"YES!" He said and did one thing I would never forget. He hugged me, nice and tight.

After we finished hugging, we were both red in the face. Carefully we sent our digital copy of our project for approval to C.I.A. We then quietly packed up our things. We still had 1 hour before dinner. We could talk, practice our presentation, or...

"Do you want to play would you rather?" Surprisingly I wasn't the one who suggested. It was Jonas. Don't freak out Liz. It's just a stupid, meaningless game.

"Sure." I replied with a smile. I've played this many times with Macey, Bex, and Cammie. I think I can keep him stumped for a while.

"Okay... umm... Would you rather commit adultery to save your friend or become a double agent then become handicapped after you save your friend?" This is easy. I thought.

"I would rather become a double agent. If I commit adultery, I'm going to be ruining a friendship with someone special. If I'm a double agent, It might take longer to save my friend but I'll still keep my friendship with the special person. If the special someone really cares about me, It won't matter if If I'm handicapped or not." I said that because It was true. Macey's knowledge of guys and relationships was really starting to make sense now.

"Okay, your turn."

"Um... Would you rather accept a mission you know you'll die in or accept a mission you don't know you'll die in?"

This continued for the almost and hour. Both of learned more about each other through our answers.

"This one's the last one. Um..." Jonas turned red. Then he took a deep breath and said "Would you rather spend your winter break at home thinking about me or come to Paris with everyone and be with me?" I gasped. He held out 2 tickets for McHenry Private Airlines. I didn't say anything for a while as I thought about my sister, parents and family. Then I took the tickets and gave him a hug.

"Yes!" I said and we embraced. After a while I said "So Macey was in this wasn't she?" I pointed to the fake airplane tickets.

"Yeah... Don't tell Bex though. She doesn't know yet."

"Okay." There was a 70% chance that we would have kissed but that 70% turned to 0% when we heard a little bing on the computer screen.

"Hey... We got it approved!"

"Awesome! And...We're getting the phones in 5 minutes!" Things just kept on getting better.

MONDAY EVENING

Bex's POV

I already tried scrunching my hair. I will not curl it. I guess I'll have to keep it straight. I sigh.

Everyone has someone to be with this break, Whether it's their boyfriend or family. Everyone except me. My parents are on a mission and can't visit me. I'm going to be stuck in a safe house for 3 weeks until Macey or someone comes to visit. Ugh.

I need to punch something.

I was on my way to dinner when Grant decided to walk beside me. He must of realized I was sad.

"Wanna throw some punches at each other after dinner?" He asked in a soft voice. I stopped to look at him. Then nodded. He then said "Boy, who ever made you sad must have done a good job. You won't even talk." I couldn't help it. I laughed.

"No one made me sad you idiot. I'm just lost in thought." I punched him gently on the shoulder. A second of pain flashed through his face before he punched me back, harder. "You're paying for that after dinner." I said. I needed to keep the conversation going. There was no way I was going to let him get away from me.

"Okay but I'm not going down without a fight." Grant said. He grinned. I could have slapped him but I didn't. Not yet at least.

*Time Skip*

"Okay everyone settle down!"said Professor Buckingham. "As many of you already know, Liz and Jonas have created something spectacular for not only you, but for another school too!" This caused everyone to continue talking.

"Liz is done?" I asked. I couldn't wait to see what she and Jonas made. I would finally be able to keep in touch with Grant.

"Yeah, she finished it this afternoon." said Macey.

"That's bloody awesome!" I said

"Well hello everyone! Jonas and I made the... BlackGal phone!" Liz said with too much enthusiasm. I saw everyone at my table smile. It's like they knew something I didn't.

"Basically the BlackGal is a chatting system for you guys with Blackthorne."Jonas said. He too was just as excited as Liz. "We set it up similar to Facebook so it would be easy for you to use."

"Each BlackGal can be customized to your liking. You can make it as big as an iPad or keep it as small as a Blackberry. The choice is yours. You all have a profile where you can write down missions you've completed or change your relationship status." Liz smiled at the last point. Actually, I think every girl in this room did. Including me.

"So each and everyone of you will get one. If you start to become a lazy spy or out of practice, your phone will be disabled until you get your marks back up. They're all the same size right now so if you want to make it bigger, or add stuff to it... you have to do it yourself." Jonas finished with a smile.

Professor Buckingham reached our table. She gave us all a BlackGal. It was black with the Gallagher and Blackthorne logo on the back.

Grant's POV

*Time Skip*

Come on Grant! Don't let her crush you. Must. beat. Bex!
"Come on Rebecca, you're not gonna let me beat you this easily. I thought I had a challange." I said as if this were easy. In reality though, I was struggling to keep up.

"First of all, don't call me Rebecca." Bam Right in the face. "Secondly, as far as I'm concerned, you're the one that can barely keep up at the moment because I'm winning."

"Oh no you're not." I pushed her, hard. She landed on the ground with me not far behind. I managed to keep her down as I fell into a somewhat awkward position. With both of us panting, we stayed in that position. I was on top of her.

"Fine. You win." she said still not moving from her position. Our eyes locked. Then as if doing a movie scene, I did one thing I've never done with a girl before.

I kissed her.

At first it was slow. I must have caught her by surprise. But after 10 seconds we rolled over, desperate to get more.

Then we stopped for air, panting even harder than before.

She seemed embarrassed and turned away from me. "Sorry..." She said.

Realizing how awkward things just got I said "Oh...um...It's okay...I started it so shouldn't I be the one apologizing?"

She was quiet for a bit, still turned away from me. Then she said "It's okay... I didn't mind." She turned around to face me. "I think I like you Grant. Not because we just kissed" She paused. "But because I've missed you. I haven't stopped thing about you."

I sighed. I'm used to girls saying these type of things to me. What I'm not used to is actually saying them myself. "I've missed you too Bex." She turned around to face me. "You're the only girl I've kept on the back of my mind everyday. I really enjoy your company and fighting skills. I always feel competition when I fight with you. That's why..." I pulled out the plane tickets. "You're coming to Paris with me... as my date."

I don't think I've ever seen Bex speechless. I handed her a ticket so she could have a good look at it. She frowned. "So this is what you guys been keeping from me..." She said. I smiled.

"Yeah... I wanted it to be a surprise."

"Looks like everyone's paying for this one... Especially you and Macey." She said.

"I'll take mine now but how was Macey in this?" I was a bit confused.

"ARE YOU STUPID?" Slap right in the face. "IT SAYS MCHENRY PRIVATE AIRLINES WITH A PICTURE OF MACEY'S JET!"

That's when round two began.

Authors Note:

Okay so I think this is the longest chapter I've ever written!

Now I have a BIG surprise for you guys.

I

am

done

this

story.

This is what ends up happening:

Liz and Bex break the news to Cammie and Macey.

They celebrate by 'borrowing' food from the kitchen

They still don't know about Macey's secret guy.

Or Bex's kiss.

The guys congratulate Grant for his success.

They start making plans for the trip to Paris

The rest of week they are followed by Tina and other students who are jealous.

On Friday night, they leave on Macey's Jet.

The Winter Break begins.

Now because you're still reading, You get to read the description of...

Dead End Paris (Unless I come up with a better title)

The gang arrives safely to Paris without injuries. They're all enjoying themselves until something goes wrong, someone has found them. Because of a huge blackout, they're at risk. Sequel to "The Week Before The Break"

So yeah, I might change the title or the description but I WILL put that it's the sequel to this story. Keep an eye out for that.

Paris is going to be full of suspense! I need real action so it's going to be a lot different than this story.

ALSO

In the future you might see this story pop up again. That will be because I feel like rewriting it to add more detail. So if this story does come back it's not because there's a new chapter, it's because I'm going to update it.

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