Ok i've had a few reviews saying that they didn't enjoy the ending or that Anidala doesn't belong in an Obidala story. I did get quite annoyed with one certain review that i won't repeat so here is an alternative ending which was the original ending i was going to use until i changed it for it just being a dream Enjoy :)


Alternate ending

The light pulled me in, white dreams blinding me as voices filled my head. Voices? The light slowed down and set me off on the ground as though I were a feather, my head resting on the soft ground like a pillow. I lifted my head high to see nothing but white 'had they escaped' the first thoughts that blasted into my mind. Of course they had, Obi Wan had gotten out just before the monster known as Vader had killed me without mercy. The sound of footsteps coming closer echoed around me, the wind rushing through my ears as I stood up quickly and turned to face the sound. Standing behind me, her gentle hands resting on my shoulder a young torgrutan stood watching me curiously. Her lekku resting below her breasts, the markings on her face twisted in a look of surprise.

"Senator!" she said, hugging me tightly. Me. I was in a faze of confusion, who was this again.

"Padme, don't you remember me?" she asked, her eyes filling with small tears. I shook my head towards her, seeing the small tears fall down her face.

"Padme, its Ahsoka"

I felt my face twist in shock and surprise. Ahsoka of course. How could I have forgotten her, her protection against Aurra Sing, her company and spirit. It all came back to me know.

"Ahsoka" I said finally taking her into my arms and hugging her tightly.

"I've been watching you Padme" Ahsoka said, pulling away from me and beckoning me to follow her. Cautiously I followed after her, watching what I now believed were clouds float below my feet and a continuous sound of screaming filling my ears.

"Ahsoka what is that screaming?" I asked her.

Ahsoka stopped and turned to face me, her young eyes staring into my own.

"That is the sound of death and happiness" 'Death and happiness in the same sentence?' I thought to myself confused by what she had said. This thought was answered by two children running past us, one of them tripping and falling to the floor. Her tears slipped down her little cheeks as Ahsoka moved over and rubbed of her knees, whispering something into her ear making her giggle.

"Who is that?" I asked watching her run of after the other child. Ahsoka sighed; this was apparently something she did not want asked.

"That was a youngling, Tia. Master Skywalker slaughtered her in the council chambers. I couldn't save her" Ahsoka looked away from me, the sound of a small tear hitting the floor sounded in my ears.

"Ahsoka how did you…"

"Die?" Ahsoka turned to face me again and began to walk. I ran to catch up with her, her long strides taking her further from me. She sighed and walked into a small hut and I followed. The stifling heat hit me first and yet the feeling of cool air blowing across my face was calming. Ahsoka made a gesture for me to sit so I did, waiting for her to take a seat in front of me. And she did, her legs crossed and her head held low.

"Hello there young one" the sound of a husky voice sounded from behind Padme as she turned towards the door to see a bearded man, his long hair twisted behind his back.

"Hello Master Qui Gon" Ahsoka said, a small smile etching on her face.

I jumped up at that name; twisting round and hugging him round his chest. Qui Gon smiled at me and placed his arms round my shoulders.

"My haven't you grown Padme" Qui Gon told me releasing me from his grip and my face still gob smacked by the sight.

"Qui Gon?" Ahsoka coughed and I turned to face her, settling myself to the floor as I went.

"Padme, I am now going to answer your question" Ahsoka began, her blue eyes focused on my own.

"I was with the younglings in the Temple at the time, I didn't know where Master Skywalker had gone but he'd just ran from me. Next thing I know is the sound of blasters being fired and people, children Padme just screaming. Then the sound of igniting sabres, I had to see so I told the younglings to stay inside of the council room and walked out myself" Ahsoka took a deep breath and I saw her cheeks were slightly wet from tears.

"I stepped out and saw all the clones shooting, murdering the younglings in cold hard blood. It made me sick. Then someone turned round with a sabre and swung it at my head" 'Anakin' I thought to myself.

"We fought, but Skyguy was always a dirty fighter and signalled for one of the clones to fire. That clone was Rex. And he got me, straight through the heart. One shot was all it took, and I still remember falling to the ground, hearing the screams of the younglings as Anakin cut them down then nothing. I died at that very spot"

I felt tears flow down my cheeks, many people had come inside to hear the tale but not one had cried, only me. I wiped my cheeks with my sleeve and sniffed.

"I know how you died. Stabbed in the heart by Vader" Ahsoka said, standing and walking over to me and placing her arm on my shoulder.

"Don't worry Padme, this war will be over soon I promise you and some day Luke and Leia will meet you up here and remember you as a great mother who gave her life for them" Ahsoka said, giving me a small hug.

My thoughts turned to Obi Wan, how could I just leave him with two children. He would cope. I could watch over him now, watch him grow old and grey without me. Watch as he battles his own fights whilst I battle mine.


I now watched as he was struck down by Vader, the blade connecting with his body. I watched as my twins ran towards the Millennium Falcon, watched as Luke cried out with sorrow. It was painful to watch. But he was coming, coming back to me. A flash of light brought me towards the gateway where many of my friends had walked through. Bail and Breha being one of them. I ran towards the gate now, my dress I had worn when I'd died still flowing round my ankles as I passed Ahsoka, whose face was twisted with confusion. Then there he was. Standing in the gateway was my Obi, the younger self of him looking round in confusion, watched the younglings run to him and hug his ankles. Ahsoka turned round and screamed, running towards him and placing her arms round his chest.

"MASTER OBI WAN" she cried out, tears streaming down her little face, his hand stroking her head.

"It's alright Ahsoka, I'm here now," he whispered to her, pulling from her grip. I stood watching him greet everyone, everyone but me.

"You didn't think I would forget you Padme" Obi Wan's voice rang through my head as he walked over to me, his arms stretched out. I ran towards him and let myself sink into his arms. His sweet breath breathing across my face, his warm hands round my shoulders. I was home again, home in warm arms that would keep me safe and happy for all of eternity.


Hope you enjoyed this better ending.