readsalot2002 Thank you, I will have to try to do that next time. As it was my first mass fight scene I did not really know what to do.

Notenufdakka thank you for that. I will most defiantly email you and ask for advice latter as this story goes on

Sorry it took so long I got finales coming up and have been studying like crazy to pass them.

Anyways I got three reviews and so will be writing many more chapters so long as I can get advice and ideas from you guys.

Chapter 4

Al woke up lying in the middle of the ally. He was scared out of his mind. He had just seen this giant rip apart his friends with a furry, which he had never seen. The whole time shouting, "FOR THE EMPORER, or DIE HERTIC!" as he cut though his friends as they tried to stand up. Even the ones who tried to run away did not get too far before their bodies being reduced a bloody pulp worse than what an American Barrett could do and at so close range. The gun he carried was wielded like a pistol. However, had enough power to match a military grade machine gun.

Then the giant spoke. His voice booming and echoing though the alley. "Heretic, tell me where is your base of operations!"

With that, Al wet his pants and fainted. The sight of this monstrous human and his booming voice being too much for his mind.

"Brother Razor we have massed movement heading our way. It seems that the local authorities heard our exchange and are heading in. Suggest we retreat to better place and lay low. They seem to have primitive helicopter's loaded up with men in cameo with red berets," Anvil said loud enough for Razor to hear but not loud enough for anyone else to hear who might be around.

Razor looked at the carnage that was on the ground and said a prayer of thanks to the God Emperor before responding to Anvil's suggestion.

"I concur but we need to know where this bastard's base of operations is at. Where is Brother Vision? If he can rip it from his mind we can hid out there. After we clear it of course."

Vision had over heard the conversation going on between the two. He sensed that the force moving in was much bigger than a few helicopter's with what appeared to be battle hardened men. Well that was what he had gathered when he reached out and read one of their minds, " I am here brother's. I concur and will do the mind scouring on this wretched scum's mind. For he doesn't deserve the God Emperor's gift of life. However this may take some time and if they get here before I am done you may need to hold them off for me to finish. However, do not shoot to kill just keep them pinned down."

"Why?", Anvil and Razor asked at the same time.

"These men who come are not from this gang but are from this places military and are trying to protect the civilians here. We will not fall victim to our flaw."

"Roger that Brother Vision.", Razor replied.

With that the two marines took up defensive positions on end of the alley with a man hole behind them for a escape. As Brother Liberian started to scour the scum's mind in front of him the helicopter's were closing in.

Lt Col. Vain started his com check, "This is alpha 1 all team member's check in."

"Red man checking in"

" Commie scalper checking in."

Vain listened to all his team member's check in. This operation was sent earlier than it was suppose to. They had been planning on taking down this gang for about a week. They were waiting for their spies to reveal their base of operations. However when some locals reported a huge gun battle going on in the area they were sent end to deal with it Since when they sent in a SWAT team to deal with it they were brutally killed and the heads sent to Buckingham palace. After that the queen herself assigned the SAS to deal with them.

"ETA 4 minutes", the pilots voice sounded over the radio.

"Vision I hope your almost done. They are goanna be here in just a few minutes!", Razor shouted.

"Hold on I am almost done!", Vision shouted back.

With that vision turned back and redoubled his efforts. He had already gotten the location of their safe house. However what eh was looking for was the location of the girl. Dam you vision thought to himself. Who ever this guy was either was great at trying to though up false information or was confused on everything he ever did. Vision was guessing that it was the latter rather than the former.

"30 Seconds", the pilots voice sounded again over the radio.

With that Vein's men loaded their first round. They knew they were going to be jumping into the lions den on this one. However, they did not care. For each had already deployed more than once and to different hell holes on the planet.

"We are at the location, ropes away go, go, go!", The pilot said into the radio set.

"There here!", Razor shouted. So that way Vision could hear him.

"Hold on a second I have almost got the information needed. Hold out for 3 minutes then ill be done."

Just then flash bangs started going off all around Razor. Razor laughed at them. His eyes had been genetically enhanced. No flash bang could hurt his eyes. Then he stood up and unleashed a salvo of bolter shots in the direction the flash bangs had come from. He heard the impact of the rounds on a human body. Razor licked his lips at the sound of that.

"Pull it together brother!", Anvil shouted towards him "Do not lose your self to the thirst. We must remain level headed if we are to get this done right and get out of here!"

Razor immodestly snapped out of his trance he had gone into once he heard some blood being spilt. He could not lose him self. He had to control the thirst. Then he heard bullets hitting the wall he was against. Yet another flash bang was thrown his way.

Vein could not believe it. They had thrown 15 flash bangs. Any human should have been blind as a bat in the day, but these guys were able to shoot and not only shoot but hit his men as well. "Commie scalper fire the dam Grenade launcher already!"

"Sir I thought explosives were not authorized for this mission. Too much collateral damage."

"Well I am saying use them. Fire the dam thing!"

With that commie scalper open up with his M203 and kept firing it as fast as he could reload it. He fired to where he though the man was at.

The explosion the building causing some of it to fall all round them. Then a decent size chunk fell off and landed on Razor's foot. With a cry of "For the emperor!" he begain shooting at the figures. These men where trying to kill him and by the emperor he was going to shoot back.

The rounds started coming back at Vein. When ever one of his men were hit they would turn into a fine pink mist almost as if the rounds that were being shout at them were explosive. He looked over at Red man just in time to see a bullet enter his skull mashing both brain and skull together splattering in all over the ground before his head and most of his upper body exploded. Thus coving himself in a fine coat of blood and guts from his head to his boots. The furry of the bulletes that were coming at him sounded more like a American Abrams shooting that assault rifles. Then as he was about to tell Commie scalper to get down, he was almost hit in the arm. The bullet passed right by his arm. In doing so peeling away a good part of his skin on it. AS he lay on the ground ,trying to bandage up his still bleeding wound, he heard a cry that shook him to his very being. The cry that would haunt him forever.

"FOR SANGAUNIOUS!"

"Brother vision you about done yet?" anvil shouted.

Just about I am wiping this guys memory clean of us. When they find him he will tell them that his buddies here were the one's shooting at them and that they hoped that wall over there and ran away. He will also not remember where his hide out is or that they held a girl hostage.

"Well take your Emperor dam sweet time." Razor retorted at Visions response to Anvils question

"There, I am done! Into the man hole NOW!"

Here is chapter 4 guys. I hope you like it a lot better than the last 3. Once again a big thanks to Notenufdakka for his helpful advice.