yeah! finally finished! i got lazy alot while doing this so i wonder if you can spot the changes! you probably can, but whateve's


"your Alice!" Yelled Peter as his frustration had finally reached it's peak. His face turned red at the thought of her rejecting the facts he was so desperately telling her. Why won't she remember? Is she faking? Is this a joke? Before saying another word, Vine jumped up with a scowl on her tan face. It seems that she had enough at the apparent deadly glare scaring her eyes.

"Fuck you! I don't need this and I surly don't need you!" screaming at the top of her lungs, she lunged after Peter. Violently grasping the collar of his shirt she could feel a slight tug on her baby pink dress. Turning to look with anger still blinding her, she quickly calmed down as the Swedish man looked her straight in the eyes.

"P't h'm d'wn..."

"..."grunting, she shifted her attention back on the boy. Looking into his terrified eyes, she through him down before jumping back in her seat. "...All I came here for was to see if the stupid white rabbit was here..."

"Wh'te rabb't?"

she could see the surprise shinning in his expressive eyes as she mentioned the rabbit bastard...and what he had done to her.

Getting back into the conversation while sticking close to Berwald for protection, Peter asked her questions while still annoying the crap out of her.

"did he...give you anything...?"

"Hm? Yea, some potion or whatever..."

feeling tension in the air, she stopped talking, thinking that would at least do some good. Even if the silence of thinking was slowly killing her.

"What's going on? Why do I feel like someone is leaving me out of the mix? Tell me what that potion was!"

Glancing back at each other, Berwald nodded at Peter as though something that was about to happen was just approved. But what?


"So that's the story then, right?" Confirmed Vine as she sat on the edge of her seat. "Then all I got to do is go to the lady and tell her to let me out of this hell whole! It's easy!"

Laughing as though she had solved one of the worlds most challenging questions, Peter and Berwald sat there in silence.

"Are you stupid or something? If it was that "Easy" then do you think there would be more than one chapter in this fanfiction!"

Not listening to a word he just said, she jumped up from the bed and walked out of the door.

"I'm gonna go find the Red Queen!"


A Dark figure emerged from the darkness while leaving a trail of what smelled of hamburger meat in his wake. Moving slowly into the lite part of the Queens Door way, he stopped in his tracks. Only to see his Higher authority bending backwards for his beloved queen with not a shred of dignity left in his massive body.

The Queen stood tall in her bloody red Throne while humming her favorite anthem of her people's loyalty to her. Feeling coy as Ludwig greeted her in his normal fashion of bending one knee in honor of her and lightly kissing her hand. You could smell the desperation in the air as he carefully maneuvered his self not to, at the slightest, anger her an any way.

"Mein Queen, I have headed warning that Bruder has given the girl the potion."

"Is that so?" Innocently Smiling, The Queen almost jumped out of her Throne in joy. "I am so glad~! I can't wait to meet her!"

"Mein Queen...I am happy to hear that."

Pausing for a minute, The Queen Clapped her hands as she thought of something she had almost forgot.

"That reminds me! Have you sent my Alfred to go fetch her yet...?"

"..."

Alfred...Alfred...!that name didn't sound good coming from the queen. Especially when that could be the name of the demise coming Ludwig's way from forgetting her absolute orders. It's not like she didn't know he forgot and it's not like he didn't show it by the silence in the room.

"AHAHAHAHA! I COULD'T TAKE ANY MORE OF THAT SHIT!" bursting into the room was a slightly Annoyed Alfred as he loudly laughed his usual tune.

"Alfred!" Thinking quick, Ludwig did the unexpected. He tried to lie with the situation given to him to save himself. "J-Just in time Alfred! Would you like to give a report of how well your hunt is going?"

"WAIT? HUH? WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?"

Trying his best to save his ass, the Queen gave a devious smile in his direction.

"Alfred, you do know there is someone I would like you to track down...don't you?"

"UM..."

before giving him a chance to speak, she moved toward Ludwig with her smile only growing wider.

"Of course you do! That's Basic information is it not? I would like for you to bring her here. She should smell like the garbage you eat, now go!

Leaving on his way past Ludwig, Alfred heard a silent "I am sorry" Push it's way from Ludwig's lips. Closing the door to start his job, he ended another. Alfred just seemed to screw with Ludwig today...

"...Why must all my toys Defy me?" Sighing, the Queen locked the door to the outside leaving just her, Ludwig and her anger inside alone. "You lied to me...!"

Running toward him with tears in her eyes, she grabbed hem violently in to a hug.

"How dare you Lie to me!"

"Mein Queen...I..."

"Of all people, your the least I would want to lie to me.."Deepening her grasp on him, she layed her head on his chest. "I...I HATE LIERS!...but I don't want to hate you."

Staying quiet, he cherished the couple of minutes he had to be this close to the Queen with blush covering his whole face. It was times like these that made him proud to serve her even though they were scarce.

Tugging on his uniform, she looked up at him with blood lust in her eyes.

"I'll make you never lie to me again!"

Punching him square in the face, she heard a squeal from the pained figure as his guard was down for the punch. Giggling disgustedly by his pained cry, she licked the blood off of her bloodied fist.

"I Love your accent, but it's even better when your screaming for mercy~!"

She was in another of her dominance fits again, but what was Ludwig to do? He could never fight her. No, no he loved her too much to ever physically hurt her. And when like this, reasoning was out of the question. All he could do was take it. Take it and hope he would be well enough to greet her in the morning to see her peaceful, happily sleeping face...after all, this was his punishment for lying...


some how this became more about the queen and less about the main character...better fix that!