a trade i'm doing with my friend, vine. i make her this fiction, and she makes me a Germany Lemon! a win-win for me..if only i weren't so caught up in school most of the time... anyway! i remade the first chapter of wonder, and made it even more awesome! hopefully more to come if i don't get lazy from school. and if you read vine, you have to make the 2nd chapter since i remade this; it should count for 2! :P
Walking to her room after a long day of school, Vine was caught by a faint dizzy spell. Rocking as she put one foot in front of another, she could hear a light voice of some sort in the back of her head.
Getting louder, she put her hand in her black curly hair. Feeling sick she grabbed for something to keep her balance while slowly getting closer to the door. Grasping the handle, she could hear the bone chilling voice getting even louder. She froze in place. Her eye sight starting weaken... (Hey, did you know...?) Confusedly searching for the owner of that wretched voice, she forgot that the only person there was her...
"what's going on...!" tired and uneasy, she could feel her body get heavier and her voice start to fade... (Game's always have rules...) dropping to her knees as the temperature started to drain from her body as she was turned into a vegetable.
"Why Can't I move..!" Vine could only lay there in shock as the voice continued on... (It's decided from the beginning...) feeling her eyelids start to close and her consciousness fade away, she got a sense of relief... (But you knew that already, Right?)
"...ce...Lice...Alice!" Rocking her lifeless body, a young man with the purest of white hair shook vine furiously while yelling her so called name to awaken. Letting her go, the man tidied his now disgracefully dirty clothes.
"Seriously!" he fumed looking at her seemingly uneasy face as she slept. "You are supposed to catch me, not the other way around! What will the Queen make of such a horrid sight!"
Hearing a slight groan, his ears perked as she slowly opened her dark brown eyes. Glancing around sluggishly, as her eye sight was still hazed; she could feel a sharp pain coming from the back of her head. Touching the sore spot as a sign of déjà vu, the rabbit man rushed to her aid.
"My deepest apologies, milady... Are you all right?" Dazed, she unwittingly took the man's hand as she glanced at his softly smiling face. "Where am I?" with unfocused eyes, she began gazing at his blood red orbs in utter confusion. Still somewhat ill, she got the feeling that time had stopped. Losing his carefree smile, his eyes sharpened. "This is Wonderland..."
"HEY~!" a voice shouted from the distance interrupting the soon to be opening speech. The voice sounded rather deep and raspy as quickened footsteps came closer. Thuds like a tribe of elephants suddenly broke the dreadfully awkward silence. Taking her attention off of the albino rabbit, she could only focus on another rowdy rabbit with a certain cute yellow chick on his white head.
"The Queen sent a message!" The man yelled as he looked in vine's direction. "She said that it's gonna be a Hetalia cross over now, and for you guys to get lost!" painting a triumphant smirk on his face he pointed to the captured group of Heart no Kuni no Alice characters to show him where to go. Laughing at the devastated Peter White, Vine took a glance at the rambunctious male.
He wore an all black suit with purple trimmings and black leather gloves. He had long pure white bunny ears like the other, but it looked more like a sick prank or hobby on him. His red bloody stare could make you feel cold to the touch. His skin looked like glass, as he laughed so heartlessly to the point that she felt as if she were to quickly look back, she could see the dark wings and tail on his back. To her, He reminded her of a sexy demon.
"But why…? This cannot be...My Queen..." muttering to himself in a frightful daze peter thought about a thousand things as he slowly walked to the wagon of doom.
"Yep!" he agreed happily "she said t'Hell with you since you're not any fun now." Sitting down, the white rabbit thought of a hundred more things that could have made the Queen... so angry at him... but then again, she was a very short tempered woman.
"She's found a new boy toy now too, so there's no need for you." stating the facts, he looked up at the sky, as though this has happened so many times over. "You know that bloody cockroach and her toys~...!"
"How Dare you..!"
"What? You expect to win some sort of meddle for protecting the honor of the Bitch that's declared you dead?"
Silence filled the thickening air as the white rabbit averted his gaze to the ground. Grasping his clock he got from the queen, his ears flopped down as though he was an abandoned pet. Even though he didn't want to admit it, he knew what he had done. The worst criminal act of all time…pitying the Queen.
Smirking, the young man smoothly walked past the now dead rabbit. Standing over vine as he held his black gloved hands, his smirk turned into a slight grin of lost hope.
"m'names Prussia, little Alice." he quickly introduced "why don't we restart..." taking in a big breathe, he laughed again but even louder. "Willkommen to Your wonderland…"
Looking at his face as he smirked, she noticed the pain in her head getting more and more unbearable. Feeling another dizzy spell, she fell out from the pain of being knocked in the head a little too much. After all that's happened, the questions roaming around in her are aching at her head...Who the hell is Alice? What's going to happen to the White Rabbit? What was the Rabbits name? Just who is this Queen? What is going on...? the only thing that rang clear in her head was...(Welcome to your Wonderland)...
Footsteps echoed from the castle halls, as big red doors creaked open to reveal a dark figure with two strands of hair popping out of the shadows of the dark room sitting on a Red crown throne. A blonde male, kneeled on the ground at the presence of this powerful dark woman.
"It seems Prussia was able to find and locate Alice successfully mein Queen."
"Oh, That's quite the wonderful treat~! Make sure that he brings her to me immediately!"
Almost jumping out of her seat from excitement, she almost didn't notice the grim look on the German man's face. As soon as she noticed, however, her big playful smile turned into a deadly glare.
"…Do you wish to disobey me?"
"Of course not mein Queen…But it seems that Peter has 'welcomed' her a little farther than away from the castle than we thought…"
Sensing a disagreement, the Queen's attitude changed from happy excitement to dark and demanding.
"Then send Alfred!"
Desperately screaming her command with much dominance, she startled the gracefully kneeling man into a stir. Having the Queen Angry would be like a death sentence with just one word. She was the type of person that if was threatened, would kill herself; be it for love, attention, or acceptance. She was like a innocent puppy that only wanted to be loved even though she mauled a child. A loose cannon. Ludwig knew what consequence would take place if he disobeyed… but it's not like he ever would. His loyalty to his Queen was stronger than that of the rabbit peter. He unlike Ludwig, betrayed her. Peter white. The one who will live no longer.
"She is African American right?"
"Yes mein Queen, but..."
"Then Send Alfred! I am sure that if she is American, she should at least have the faint scent of hamburgers; and if that's true then he should be able to bring her here in about a day to a week."
Slowly climbing off her throne, she walked toward the man with a sly grin. Gesturing him to stand up; she cuffed her hand onto his face while gazing dagger's into his eyes.
"You know I hate it when my toys are out of place, Ludwig…And it's certainly no fun when they leave me alone for too long…"
Sliding her hand down his blushing cheek, she purposely scratched him drawing blood.
"Now go do your job!"
sending him away, the only thing she could do now was hope that Alice would come to free her of her everlasting suffering.
i think i did pretty good considering the first try! i hope to at lest try to start on chapter 2 but no promises~! but don't let that stop you from updating my friend~!^^