You guys can't imagine how guilty I am for making you wait this long, I'm very sorry :(
So to make it up to you guys, here is the first 618 words of the story, don't worry I'll try publish the real story within this week or next week
Feel free to point out any errors that you see or things that you just don't like and I'll make sure to correct it before I publish the real story
Try NOT to sugar coat it
I love you guys
It was another boring summer day for Alvin, the house was quiet as usual, and not that peaceful quiet that most would like, it was that boring and almost depressing quiet, Jeanette was reading a book although he didn't care, Simon's doing God knows what, Theodore and Eleanor were upstairs just hanging out probably not doing anything of interest.
His only salvation from his boredom was Brittany, his 'girlfriend' (Or so he likes to think)
"Brittany!" Alvin called
"What?!" she yelled back from another room
"I'm bored!" he complained out loud
"And what do you want me to do about it?" asked Brittany walking into the room
"Make me…. Not bored" said Alvin
"Just shut-up Alvin I'm busy right now" Brittany said, Alvin had to admit, that hurt a little, him and Brittany haven't exactly gotten along with each other lately, if you didn't already know you probably wouldn't even be able to tell they were best friends, or friends at all.
"Busy with what? Are you cheating on me in there? Is that why I haven't seen Simon all day?" he teased.
"Shut-up, I'm not you're girlfriend" she said trying to hide the smile on her face
"Is that a yes?" he said trying to keep her in the room as long as possible
"Just stop already Alvin, I know what you're trying to do and it won't work" Brittany claimed trying to act as annoyed as possible.
"C'mon Britt I know you love me, you know you love me" Alvin said flashing his award winning smile, trying to wrap his arms around her, even though she keeps pushing him away
"Alvin I'm going to punch you if you don't stop!" Brittany said failing to contain her laughter
"C'mon Britt let's hang out, just for a little while, please?" Alvin pleaded putting on his best puppy face
"N-… fine, whatever" she sighed as she watched Alvin basically dancing in victory
"Yay, how b'out we outside?" Alvin offered
"I don't care, I just want to get this over with" She said, it's not that she didn't like Alvin, she loves him to death (Although she doesn't plan on telling him that), but she just wasn't in the mood for his sudden overexcitement, "what do you plan on doing anyway?"
"Kiss me"
"Excuse me?"
"I'm just kidding, c'mon" she rolled her eyes, motioning her to follow him, which she reluctantly did, but halfway out the door came Theodore eyeing them with curiosity
"Where are you guys going?"
"Nowhere, mind your own business" replied Alvin
"Okay jeez…" sighed Theodore as he slowly walked away
"You didn't have to be so mean" said Brittany
"You didn't have to be so mean" he countered
"…..Good point" she admitted.
Alvin then just bolted out the door with Brittany behind him.
"Hey let's play tag, you're it!" he said backing away
"I'm seventeen I'm not playing tag with you Alvin" she said crossing her arms
"Aww, don't be like that Britt" said Alvin
"Alvin it's nothing personal it's just that don't you think we're a bit too old for that?" She asked hoping it would want to make him want to stop all of this.
"Fine, what do you want to do?" he asked
"I want to go inside"
"How about we… how about we-"
"We what?" She interrupted
"….Ugh…. how about we… campout?!"
"Camp? Outside?"
"Yeah all of us can set up a tent and-"
"And no, I refuse to do that" she interrupted again
So watcha' think?
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