Hi again... thanks for the extra 2 reviews... I know I've been away for a while but i had to finish my other story A Life of Lies? And now I have, so I'll be continuing with this and you'll be seeing updates more regularly so like always I'll quickly reply to those two reviews...
Jake Miller- Yeah I'm not sure where Ian Clock came from but I had to think of something and clock was the first thing that came to my mind, but I'm glad you liked it: D
Reish95- the amount of reviews this has been getting is a bit sad, and I'm quite disappointed, so thanks for reviewing because it really means a lot and hopefully once this kicks off, some more will be coming in.
Okay so now that's over the way, I give you chapter 3 of my Squeakquel...at long last lol...remember to leave a review, I reply to all in my chapters (if I can :p)
The next morning, the girls were awoken to the sound of a truck. Brittany, Jeanette and Eleanor all jolted up and looked around confused, until they noticed where they were.
"Are we there yet?" Eleanor said with a groan, they all looked around but due to the packaging they couldn't see anything, but just then the package started jolting up and down making the girl fall over everywhere in the package.
"We need to get out of here and see where we are" Brittany announced, Jeanette and Eleanor agreed and just then they all pushed through the package to make a hole, big enough for all of them to fit through. Brittany went first and she helped Jeanette when both Brittany and Jeanette helped Eleanor. Once they were all out of the package they looked around...they were on a delivery truck. The wind on their fur felt so nice, since they had been stuck in a little package for hours. The truck then drove past a road sign that said "LA" on it, when the girls all saw it they gasped with excitement, the trip flew by...they were happy they listened to Lily and Louise when they said to just sleep... it surprisingly worked.
"I-i can't believe they did it so quickly...I can't believe that we're actually almost there, living our dream at long last" Brittany said with wide and hopeful eyes.
"Don't jinx it, we're not there yet" Jeanette replied, snapping Brittany out of her fantasy world.
"Yeah and how are we going to know where to go, we may not even find the Chipmunks" Eleanor stressed; Brittany rolled her eyes and walked over to her little sister placing her hand on her shoulder.
"Elli, don't worry, everything will work out I promise" Brittany said. Eleanor smiled and then Brittany started to sing quietly, until she gradually got louder, once Jeanette and Eleanor had picked up on the song, they joined Brittany in harmony.
Tell everybody i'm on my way Tell everybody i'm on my way So tell everybody I'm on my way I'm on my way
New friends and new places to see
With blue skies ahead, yes i'm on my way
And theres nowhere else i'd rather be
Jeantte and Eleanor joined in with the chorus
Tell everybody i'm on my way
And i'm loving every step i take
With the sun beating down, yes i'm on my way
And i can't keep this smile off my face
It was now Jeanette's turn and she took the next verse
Cause theres nothing like, seeing each other again
No matter what the distance between
And the stories we tell, will make you smile
Or really lifts my heart
They all joined for the chorus again
So tell'em i'm on my way
New friends and new places to see
And to sleep under the stars and could ask for more
With the moon keeping watch over me
finally Eleanor took the next verse
Not the snow nor the rain, can change my mind
The sun will come out, wait and see
And the feeling of the wind
In your face can lift your heart
They all joined together as the perfect sisters they are for the rest of the song
Oh... theres no where i'd rather be
Cause i'm on my way now
Well and true
I'm my way there
I'm on my way now(x3)
I just can't wait to be there
With blue skies ahead, yes I'm on my way
And nothing but good times to share
And I just can't wait to be home
With the sun beating down yes I'm on my way
And nothing but good times to show
Yes, I'm on my way
They finished in perfect harmony and they all stared at each other in silence for a few seconds.
"We...are...AMAZING!" Brittany bellowed, Jeanette and Eleanor giggled when Brittany then looked back into the package and realised she forgotten something, she crawled over to the package and pulled out the little photograph, with her sisters, Lily, Louise and their number on the back, seeing this made a small tear come to Brittany's eye, they were the reason they got anywhere, they did most of the work, creating the look, name and where to go...now all Brittany and her sisters had to do was make it happen, and Brittany was determined to, she wasn't going to let anything get in her way and she wasn't going to disappoint anyone. Brittany looked around on her clothes and there wasn't any kind of pockets at all, just then something caught her eye, it was sticking out of a different package that must have split open or something, Brittany scurried up to it and pulled it out of the bag, it was a little locket. Brittany looked back at the photo and with her sharp nails, she managed to carve the photo into a perfect heart shape, being careful to not cut any of the phone number off, she then put it into the sparking, silver locket. The locket was obviously too big for Brittany to wear so she tided a huge not in to the chain and wrapped it around, making it a perfect fit for her chipmunk size. Brittany looked at her reflection in the locket and was pleased, it looked very nice on her and she then scurried back down to her sisters who gave her odd looks.
"Wow, Britt that looks really nice on you" Eleanor complimented, Brittany smiled in response when she saw Jeanette's glaring face, Brittany immediately went red...time for...the talk, Brittany prepared herself for the worse and made a deep sigh after sitting down.
"Okay Jeanette I'm ready, you can now bore me with your long speeches on what I've done wrong" Brittany moaned, but Jeanette only rolled her eyes and sat next to Brittany on the floor.
"Britt, you know stealing is wrong, someone will be expecting that locket, it may be for something important, how do you think they're going to feel once it doesn't come?" Jeanette asked, Brittany carried on sulking, she knew they Jeanette was right, she always was, but this was something she really liked, and she knew that Jeanette would make her give it back but just then something else caught Brittany's eye, it was a poster on the side of a building...it was of the Chipmunks, Brittany gasped with excitement and jumped up.
"We're here, come on, we need to go... I can smell the stardom waiting for us already!" Brittany said going into fantasy world again. Forgetting about the convosation they just had, they all jumped up and waited for the driver to stop, which was after another 5 minutes outside a little cafe. The girls jumped off the car and the smell from the cafe caught their attention straight away, they all went off in a trance and it was then that they realised just how hungry, thirsty and tired they were, and they needed to get some help...fast, Brittany licked her lips and snapped herself out of it.
"Come on guys, we have to keep on moving, once we're famous we can have all the food we want!" Brittany said, lifting the spirits, this was music to all of their ears, all they wanted was a nice sleep, some water and food.
The sun was so intense...typical they could use a bit of rain...or even just shelter, they had been walking forever and they were so exhausted, they weren't used to this kind of heat... in Australia they always had their cool and shady tree to protect them from the sun, but this...they were walking in straight daylight, and their fury chipmunk bodies didn't help...if only they had some kind of sign. Right that second, there was a woman walking by, she had long blond hair, high heels, bright red lipstick and she stood up straight as she walked down the road.
"We need help, we've been walking forever" Jeanette moaned.
"And I'm still hungry" Eleanor added.
"And I look like I've just been pulled out of a rubbish bin" Brittany concluded, it was then that they spotted the tall woman and Jeanette pointed at her and Brittany and Eleanor nodded, going through with the plan.
"Erm... excuse me... Miss?" Jeanette said walking up to the woman. The woman looked down oddly then when she saw the girls her eyes widened.
"AAAAAA, RATS!" She screamed, the woman took her bag off of her shoulder and started swinging it around at the girls. Brittany, Jeanette and Eleanor started legging it with fright, but the woman just kept on chasing them, they turned a corner and the girls hid around the side of the alley and watched as the woman ran by, their hearts were beating and they were shaking, all they wanted was some help.
"Well, that went well" Brittany joked, Jeanette rolled her eyes and they all got off of the wall when they all heard something, it sount like...music.
Brittany, Jeanette and Eleanor walked up the road and followed the music, as they got closer, it became louder and clearer, just then they all stopped, looked at the arena in front of them and listened.
"It sounds like..." Eleanor started.
"Us" Eleanor finished, Brittany was confused, how would there already be?... then it hit her and her eyes lit with joy as she spun around to face her sisters.
"THE CHIPMUNKS! Come on let's go, there must be a way in somewhere" Brittany ordered, as soon as Jeanette and Eleanor too heard the news they beamed off close behind Brittany. They looked around at the side of the building and saw that there was a window open, they all scurried up to it and helped each other inside, they could hear the chipmunks voices very clearly now and the girls managed to sneak into the venue, from behind the security guards. Once they were in there they couldn't believe their eyes.
"They're even cuter in person" Eleanor cooed as her eyes got stuck onto the small, chubby and cute chipmunk on the right. They all smiled and then got lost into the chipmunks show, until the song finished and the red clad chipmunk came to centre stage.
"Shh, Alvin's speaking!" Brittany ordered.
"We didn't even say anything Britt" Eleanor replied, Brittany rolled her eyes and the whole arena went dead quiet.
"Thanks for coming to our show; you've been a great audience!" Alvin called out into the arena; he gave a cheeky grin and started walking offstage when the whole arena started screaming.
"ONE MORE!"
"BAD DAY"
"ENCORE"
People were shouting, just then Alvin stopped and Simon and Theodore shot out of the floor and stood on tall podiums as the arena cheered even louder and watched the last performance of the night.
I told the witch doctor I was in love with you (Chorus:) I told the witch doctor you didn't love me true (Chorus:) Now, you've been keeping love from me My friend the witch doctor, he taught me what to say (Chorus:)
I told the witch doctor I was in love with you
And then the witch doctor, he told me what to do
He said that ...
Ooo eee, ooo ah ah ting tang
Walla walla, bing bang
Ooo eee, ooo ah ah ting tang
Walla walla, bing bang...
Ooo eee, ooo ah ah ting tang
Walla walla, bing bang
Ooo eee, ooo ah ah ting tang
Walla walla, bing bang
I told the witch doctor you didn't love me nice
And then the witch doctor, he gave me this advice
He said to ...
Ooo eee, ooo ah ah ting tang
Walla walla, bing bang
Ooo eee, ooo ah ah ting tang
Walla walla, bing bang...
Ooo eee, ooo ah ah ting tang
Walla walla, bing bang
Ooo eee, ooo ah ah ting tang
Walla walla, bing bang
Just like you were a miser
And I'll admit I wasn't very smart
So I went out and found myself
A guy that's so much wiser
And he taught me the way to win your heart
My friend the witch doctor, he taught me what to do
I know that you'll be mine when I say this to you
Oh, Baby ...
Ooo eee, ooo ah ah ting tang
Walla walla, bing bang
Ooo eee, ooo ah ah ting tang
Walla walla, bing bang...
Ooo eee, ooo ah ah ting tang
Walla walla, bing bang
Ooo eee, ooo ah ah ting tang
Walla walla, bing bang
"WE CAN'T LOSE THEM, COME ON!" Brittany bellowed, the girls then started running off into the audience to find the Chipmunks, but just then from out of nowhere a giant hand was reaching out for them and grabbed them all by the tails and shoved them into a brown, cotton bag, what on earth was happening now?
And there's chapter 3, hope you like it remember to review and I'll see you all shortly! xxx