Author's/Note: This is the Second Part of the Three-Part RSVP Saga. If you have not read RSVP I: The Fellowship of the Ron, you should stop and read that first.
(2020 Update) After a nearly 6-year absence, the author has returned and is currently re-reading and editing the chapters in this story and they will be reposted as soon as each one is finished. Check back soon…
...and check the New Author's Challenge at the end of this chapter!
Required Disclaimer:The author of (this) fan fiction does not, in any way, profit from the story and that all creative rights to the characters belong to their original creator(s). – from the Wikipedia Fan Fiction Disclaimer (generic boilerplate)
Chapter One – On Your Marks…
Kim Possible ducked as another plasma bolt sizzled through the space her head had occupied just a few seconds before.
"Hold still, damn you!" the long-haired villainess snarled.
"Really?" the twenty-year-old former cheerleader queried as she swept her opponent's leg. "All sorts of opportunities to do the obligatory banter, even snark about my hair, or taunt me about my long absence…and the best you can do is whine because I won't just hold still and let you win?" She bounced away as concrete floor of the lair's basement was scorched by an orange plasma burst.
"Just one shot!" the woman in the cat-suit roared. "Just one good shot and you're toast!" She followed up with a half-dozen bad shots as her target emulated a stainless steel bearing on a pinball table.
"I was gone for the better part of a year," Kim continued, executing a hand-stand and turning it into an inverse split, "and this so-called Mastermind gathered the largest gang of super-villains ever assembled. So where's the world domination?" She cart wheeled away from a succession of fiery projectiles. "Where's the evil empire? I don't even see your ex-boss—or you, for that matter—on any wanted posters."
"We were getting around to it!" the older woman growled. "Phase One: Eliminate Team Possible; Phase Two: Take over the world!"
Kim flipped over the next barrage and noted that the plasma bursts were smaller now and coming farther apart. "And yet, here I am."
"Team Possible, Kimzilla. The plan was to eliminate both of you."
Kim was all lined up for her kill shot, springing off of a mound of rubble and flying down at her opponent with a forceful axe-kick. She faltered as she processed the last sentence and only succeeded in grazing her target's cheek. "You—you took down Ron? Is that why—"
"Relax, Sweetcheeks; your boyfriend is alive and kicking," the villainess cooed. "Aw! Wondering why he hasn't come looking for you?" She laughed nastily and flung another wad of orangey flames at the former redhead. "Last I heard, he'd not only moved on, but had collected himself a regular harem in the process! I'll bet Shego's chasing him all over town right now!"
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Shego had been chasing him for two miles, now.
Bad enough.
Worse: the sun was only now peeking over the horizon! She was not a morning person.
And it was galling that this—this—kid—was making her look…old!
But the absolute worst thing about this embarrassing debacle was that she really didn't have to do it at all!
According to him.
She caught up to him at a pedestrian crosswalk where he was waiting for the light to change.
"S-st-stop-able," she wheezed, bending down to grab her knees and re-inflate her oxygen-starved lungs.
"Go home," he said kindly. "I'm paying you to be my Chief of Security, not my personal bodyguard."
"At least," she wheezed, "let me book…the Global…Justice…indoor…track. More secure," she said as she imagined keeping a secure eye on her employer from a more restful vantage in the bleachers.
"No."
She grabbed his arm as the light changed to keep him from jogging off again. "Why?"
"Running round and round in circles? Well, technically, ovals: bor-ing!"
"It rained…yesterday…"
"Wasn't that great?"
She was on the verge of a non-verbal answer that involved lighting up her hands when he continued: "Fresh air, an occasional cool-down shower, communing with nature—"
"Communing…with traffic…" she grumbled.
"Shego, I'm not training for a sports competition. There's added value in adapting to the changing terrains and surfaces as I go from sidewalk to street to empty lot to cutting across the Upperton campus. If I have to run toward a threat—"
"Or…away…from it," she wheezed.
"—I'm better-adapted thanks to the changeable obstacle course out here than some climate-controlled ovoid with a flat, even, non-skid surface," he continued, ignoring her jibe. "I can take care of myself. And I'd feel better if your formidable skills were being used to keep my little sister safe."
"Kyoko Yoshiko…is more than qualified…to play nanny and bodyguard…for Ninja Toddler—she was covert…Global Justice…agent for God—" Ron shot her a sudden look. "—gosh sakes!" Shego finished smoothly. "As long as…they're in The Bunker…there's no need for…special precautions..."
"The 'bunker,' as you so picturesquely call it, is a long way from being finished as is the rest of the building," he said, watching for the crosswalk signal to cycle around again. "Besides, you're going to hurt yourself if you try to keep up with me."
The light changed and he was off and running before she could come up with a comeback. Shego ran across the street but stopped as she realized that he was already a block away and her side felt like it had more stitches than the Frankenstein monster.
She turned back toward the warehouse and pulled out her GJ communicator.
"How's it coming?" Dr. Director asked her a moment later. "Have you learned anything new?"
"Just that he's even more annoying…since he stopped being The Buffoon…" Shego rasped.
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Dr. Director clicked off her cell phone and looked up at the GJ Medical team from behind her desk. "I'm sorry. You were saying?"
"Well, as our tests have previously established that Dr. Anne Possible, her niece Jocelyn Possible, and you Madame Director, have been—well, for want of a better term—biologically adjusted in age to a shared median."
"In other words," she said, "all three of us are roughly the same age."
"I wouldn't say 'roughly,' Ma'am. Genetic deep scans all the way down to the measurable lengths of your telomeres indicate that your biological—even genetic—ages are identical!"
Betty steepled her fingers under her chin. "So we're all approximately twenty-five years old?"
"Calendar age is different than biological age," the doctor clarified. "One twenty-five-year-old woman may differ greatly from another twenty-five-year-old woman, even if they share the same birthday. Aside from the fact that each of you differs in terms of your mental age—assuming that you have retained the knowledge, memories, and cognitive experiences from those years that have been physically erased—"
"I have," she interrupted emphatically.
"Yes…well…given Dr. Possible's mental—"
"Back on point, Doctor," she warned.
"Well, as I was saying…I can't speak to the issue of either of the Possibles matching up to a precise generic calendar date that would coincide with biological norms: there is no generic maturation scale—no 'one size' fits all."
"But?" she prodded.
"The three of you are biologically and genetically identical in terms of the physical genetic markers of aging. The telomeres in your cells, for example, are identical in measurable lengths."
"I'm not sure I understand," the head of Global Justice said. "I have been physically regressed, by my best estimations, to the body I had back when I was twenty-five. Anne and Joss Possible would seem to have been—ah—biologically adjusted to the same age. You say that our ages are now identical yet you say that biological age differs in different people so there is no conforming standard on the calendar."
"Well, yes. And you and the Possibles may still vary in terms of what Dr. Possible was when she was twenty-uh-five and what her niece would be, were she to age normally to her twenty-fifth year. As opposed to your own estimates of returning to your twenty-fifth year…"
"Still not getting your point, Doc."
"Each of you—advanced or returned—to the normative for each of your twenty-fifth year of existence—would not share the exact same markers on the biological or genetic levels."
"And?" she arched an eyebrow.
"And yet you do. It is as if you were all matched to a single, optimal template for your biological and genetic clocks AND matched to a single standard and setting. While you are all still different, physically and, for the most part, genetically—your age markers are identical in ways that should be statistically impossible!"
Dr. Elizabeth Director sighed and rubbed her temples. What the specialists were saying in so many words…
So. Many. Words.
…was that whatever had caused Joss to age and Dr. Possible and Betty to de-age, had matched them up to a precise, shared, biological bookmark that counted as "25" on the human calendar. The fact that it was taking them so long to circle the point suggested that they knew next to nothing else.
"Are we stuck?" she asked.
"What?"
"Are we aging forward from this point? At the normal rate? Faster? Slower? Frozen in time? Are we moving backward—de-aging?"
"I-I don't know," he admitted. "Only time—if you'll pardon the expression—will tell."
"What about more tests?"
He shook his head. "Some—er—time—will need to pass before the next round of tests in order to allow for some kind of measurable progress. It would be helpful if we knew what circumstances the three of you shared or what unusual factors may have come into play…" The entire medical team looked at her expectantly.
Oh no, she thought, looking back at them with her best poker face, there's no way I'm discussing Mystical Monkey Powers or a fragment from a stone idol called the Tempus Simia. I'm on thin enough ice as it is…
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"Awww," Kim mock-sympathized as a few squirts of yellow lights fell off of her adversary's protective gloves, "plasma generators all empty? Guess you'll have to finish me with your hand-to-hand skills. Ohhhh!" She smacked herself in the forehead with her hand. "That's right! You don't have any real combat skills!"
The blonde in the red and black catsuit peered at the moodulator chip, now embedded even deeper in Kim Possible's forehead. It still flashed red and black. "Do that again!" she half-taunted, half-hoped. Maybe she would change the setting again. Or knock it loose, please God!
"What? Hit myself in the head? I guess that would only be fair since the only glove that's gonna get laid on me is my own!"
Adrena Lynn circled without taking her eyes off of her old nemesis. "Don't know about that, little girl, but I don't plan on hitting you in the head. I'll only aim for your vital spots!"
"Oh, ha-ha. I always wondered what had happened to you since I whipped your ass in that amusement park over four years ago and I guess the answer is not much: you weren't amusing then, and you're not amusing now."
"I don't have to be amusing," the former teen stunt girl retorted, as long as I have the last—" Instead of finishing the sentence with the word "laugh," she launched herself at Kim hoping to catch her off guard.
Kim didn't appear to move out of the way but, suddenly, she wasn't there anymore. Adrena Lynn went sailing through the space she had occupied just seconds before and stumbled over more rubble from the blast that had killed Mastermind a few days earlier. When she staggered about to look behind her, Kim was standing in the same place she had occupied when the blonde had started her move.
Only she was four inches tall.
"What? Where? How?" she stuttered, staring at the former redhead as she grew back up to her former height.
"It's my staff!" Aviarius wailed from the sidelines, "The little bitch has part of my shattered gemstone!"
Kim grinned evilly and lifted the bottom of her shirt. There, nestled in the whorled recesses of her belly button, were the glittering facets of a multi-colored crystal. "Guess you could say," she taunted, "wherever I go…Mego!" And then she laughed a truly un-Kim-like laugh. More than one of the villains in the room shivered as they saw a look on their nemesis' face that they could have never imagined in their darkest nightmares. The laugh and the grin were bad enough. The blacker than black hair with just a few streaks of scarlet transformed the package into something truly disturbing for those whose image of teen hero Kim Possible had always been the ideal of youthful innocence.
More than a few of them had been conscious enough to hear what she had said about Ron Stoppable as she emerged from the shattered Attitudinator.
And—with the exception of the dead-blonde-walking wearing the now spent plasma generators—no one wanted to make her any angrier than she already was.
And Kimberly Ann Possible was very, very angry—thanks to a massive misunderstanding and a hideously overloaded moodulator chip.
Shego might have made comparisons to Zorpox and been somewhat anxious...
...but Tara and the other former cheerleaders would have been truly frightened: with the removal of all moral restraints, Kim was finally channeling her inner Bonnie…
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"…Rockwaller? What are you doing here?" Monique plopped down on a chair across from her and leaned her crutches on a neighboring chair.
Bonnie looked up from the stack of contracts she was vetting while seated at one of the new tables that had just been delivered to the warehouse. The rest were out in the truck, parked on the backlot, and couldn't be unloaded until more of the interior space was finished. Even with triple crews working around the clock, that would take another week, at least.
"I'm going over some of these contracts and order forms that Stoppable has already signed off on," she answered with a frown. "Someone needs to tell him that asking me to look over his paperwork after he finalizes it, is like closing the barn door after the horse gets out."
"Have you tried talking to him?"
"He's never around when I drop by."
"He's probably out for his morning run," Monique said. "He should be back within the hour."
Bonnie shook her head and closed her briefcase. "My first class starts in another thirty minutes. I won't have any free time until after six, tonight. And that's when I need to hit the campus library and work on my paper. The boy needs a real lawyer for business advice, not a pre-law student who's still taking Economics, PolySci, and Business Accounting."
Monique shrugged. "Baby Boy has his own way of doing things. And I have to point out that he seems to be doing well, these days."
"Is he?" the former Queen B of Middleton High asked. "Some weird shit has gone down this past year. First the Lowardian Invasion—did you know I'd forgotten all about Ron throwing those giant aliens halfway across the city? It's still all over the internet and those cell phone videos on YouTube. But I didn't remember any of it until I was looking something up this morning and…there it was! It was like something had messed with my memories of the past year!" She saw the look on the black girl's face. "Oh my god! You too?"
Monique nodded slowly. "I kind of thought it was related to my being shot. But, girl, there's more to it than that. Kim and Ron both disappearing last summer. Ron turns up recently but Kim's still MIA. And now Wade Load is missing from the hospital, as well!"
"Lots of people missing," Bonnie agreed. "Liz and Jessica disappeared about the same time as the explosion and fire that killed Ron's parents and Kim's dad and brothers. No one ever found a trace of their bodies among the ashes. And that kid in the wheelchair—I hear his mother and girlfriend disappeared with him as well."
Monique leaned forward and rested her arms on the table. "And then there's the whole time-travel sitch with Kim's mother. And her cousin. Don't tell me that that's a coincidence. Still, the weirdest thing is that I'm living here with him—"
Bonnie's eyes widened. "You're living with Stoppable?"
"No. Of course not!" She looked momentarily flustered. "I mean, I was crashing here, in this empty warehouse. Crystal's dad is the realtor and she got me the keys so I could be close to campus while I got back on my feet—economically, that is. Then I get shot at that party—"
"Not exactly a party, Mon. It was a seudat havra'a, the first meal for Ron's Shiva."
"Yeah, well, everyone was there—even two Kim Possibles!"
"Neither of which was the real Kim."
"Thank goodness! I'd hate to think that the real Kim shot both Wade and me—and almost killed Ron! What?"
Bonnie had reached across the table and was gripping Monique's arm. "Another thing I had forgotten about until just now! What else have I forgotten?"
"Well, I'm still trying to remember how I got here."
"You just said you were crashing here, thanks to Crystal and her dad, until you could get on your feet."
"Well, yeah. But, all of a sudden, Baby Boy owns the place, is remodeling it, top to bottom, and has plans for a restaurant and a mini-mall. More to the point, he's putting in upstairs apartments and has told me that he's setting me up with my own store in the mini-mall! He's financing me as a business partner and letting me stay here, rent-free!"
Bonnie smiled but it felt forced. "Maybe he's got the hots for you."
She shook her head and almost looked…disappointed? "I don't get that vibe off of him."
"Take it from somebody who knows a lot about men, honey. Guys don't do things for girls except they expect something in return."
"Yeah? So tell me, B: what did Ron want in return for going to rescue your sisters when they were kidnapped?"
"I-I don't know." She frowned. "But he's paying me good money to look over his books and contracts when he could pay a professional to do a better job in half the time and, thereby, actually save money in the process."
"And?"
"I'm just waiting for the other shoe to drop."
"You just can't believe he's helping you out financially because he's a nice guy?"
"Nice enough to take his time," Rockwaller scoffed. "I figure he's got to be majorly horny with Possible out of the picture for so long."
Monique stared back at her with an expression of disbelief. "And if that were true, you think he's biding his time to put the moves on the one girl who treated him like dirt all through high school?"
Bonnie shrugged with extravagant nonchalance. "Some guys dig the 'tude. There are some very successful men who pay dominatrices a great deal of money to humiliate them in private."
"As opposed to getting it from you for free in public?"
"I'm just saying he was Possible's lapdog for all those years. He's probably looking for someone to fill those shoes and I've got a pair of stiletto, slingbacks…"
"So," Monique pounced, "you are interested!"
"Ewwww, no! Just saying, it's inevitable. No man can resist these!" Bonnie cupped her legendary breasts suggestively.
Miffed, Monique grabbed her own considerable bosom and shot back: "Well, what about these?"
"Morning ladies," Dr. Vivian Porter's voice announced cheerily as she passed by on her way to the espresso machine. "Is Ron around?" She stopped and took in the—er—face-off. "Oh, is it Breast Cancer Awareness Month already? I never trust those self-exams, myself; I should probably make an appointment…"
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Kim pulled the plasma generators off of Adrena Lynn's limp wrists and slid them onto her own. Giving the unconscious blonde one last kick, she turned and glared at the nervous group of villains who had once sworn their allegiance to Mastermind.
"Anyone else?" she asked coldly. "Or are you ready to get down to business?"
ABOUT THE TITLE: Well, it's the start of another "marathon" and what better way to start things off with the old instructions to runners for generations: "On your marks…"
Author's/Notes 2:
AGAIN: The Two Powers is "Part Two" of the "RSVP Saga." While I've tried to work the story for those who haven't read "Part One," I do recommend that you read the previous work, "RSVP I: The Fellowship of the Ron"—though clever and careful readers may be able to pick up enough back story from the narrative in The Two Powers.
Still, you'll be missing out on a lot if you skip Part I...
If you're having any difficulty in finding RSVP I: The Fellowship of the Ron, go to my Profile Page for the link.
And here's a little oddity I've recently discovered: some readers are able to post a second review to the chapters that I have previously taken down and reposted. Don't go crazy, now…
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Author's/Notes 3: (July 2020)
Wow! I can't believe it's been over 10 years since I originally started this story…and almost 6 years since I stepped away to…well, do a lot of stuff. But that's another story. My To-Do List is still pretty full and I'm having to relearn how to use the FanFiction site tools, but I'm hoping to get the RSVP Saga back up and running in the days and weeks ahead. I'm just curious to see if my readers are still out there and how many of them are willing to forgive me for being away for so long.
A lot has happened since I stepped away, most significantly (for this part of the FanFic Universe): Disney+! Now we can binge-watch KP as much and whenever we want, plus the live-action movie, for what it's worth. As long as it's been, I may need to do more research before I'm done...
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And, P.S., YES, I have taken down the subsequent chapters in RSVP I, RSVP II, and RSVP III for re-reading and re-editing. They'll be back up just as soon as I finish each one. I'm assuming that no one is reading this ancient relic right now but I sincerely apologize to you if you are. I should be caught up in the next month or so. Check back often!
(2020): There is currently a Reader Challenge on the board: visit my Profile Page for details…
ORIGINAL REVIEWS FOR CHAPTER 1
A little history: I originally posted the first few chapters of this story as separate from Part One, then went back and folded them back into the original (RSVP I), scrapping the plan to split the story up. Rather than lose the reviews that were posted for the chapters at that point, I copied them to the end of the chapters as I didn't want them to just disappear after the readers had made the effort. So, you'll see some older reviews at the end of this and the next several chapters as well as any new reviews that get posted to the regular reviews section—even though I've reverted to the original plan of posting Part Two separately again. I hope that doesn't confuse things too much…
Grin-Grin chapter 1 . Oct 5, 2011
yes...
yes...
very good,
my Minion
MHUAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Dude, you're scaring me!
And when you say "Minion" are you referring to those little creatures from the "Despicable Me" movies that look like tater-tots?
;-)
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Dragonblaze66 chapter 1 . Oct 5, 2011
update soon!
We aims to please! And the more reviews, the faster I work! Thanks!
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Pavelius chapter 1 . Oct 6, 2011
hmmm?.. i thought you would be on hiatus?... not that i am complaining, just confused...
Anyway... good to read the sequel and i am wondering... who will be Gollum?
Keep it up
Pavel
You're right, Pavelius; I am supposed to be on hiatus. I'm just weak. I need to find the inner strength to put this on hold and get my other stuff done, first.
As to the role of Gollum? Gil's just too easy. Ron Reager has the eyes for it.
But maybe Bonnie's personality…
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CajunBear73 chapter 1 . Oct 7, 2011
Ron's tipped the balance of 'the Force' with his last wish and may just cause some really wild mystical/hormonal/mental explosion here. He seems to be making the same mistakes someone would make with a bottled genie in order to push away something he never wants to face again.
It could be costly.
Now Kim's the embodiment of all those things that were done to her previously, but that chip may be the undoing of the grip on her mind here. If it could be safely brought down, she may just live to see Ron and not have him killed.
Astute analysis here, CB.
I don't know about bringing Kim down carefully, though: handling un-chipped redheads is dangerous enough.
And, yeah, Mama Lipsky, while more competent than most of the other Team Possible villains, still falls victim to the overly complicated villainous plot syndrome.
And maybe a little of the Kim Factor, too.
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JayNine chapter 1 . Dec 3, 2011
As first chapters for a lengthy (or at least, 'shaping up to be lengthy') 'fic go, this hits the ground running full speed, in addition to being absolutely hilarious.
Best line of the chapter has to be this gem of Vivian's near the end:
"Oh, is it Breast Cancer Awareness Month already?"
Fan-tastic! :D
Keep up the great work!
It's always a challenge to write the opening chapter of a sequel: introducing the new readers to the story without boring the old readers—thanks for the big thumbs-up!
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NEW REVIEWS (Post Separation) FOR CHAPTER 1
CajunBear73 chapter 1 . Mar 6, 2012
Ya know, it must run in the family...The coming up with this great master plan, with all the bells and whistles of buildup, execution and so forth and the follow through of all this going to hell just because what was created wasn't going to be controlled by the creators... Yeah, it runs in the Lipsky family.
Now the ladies are really scrambling to see why they're so 'attracted' to so last year memories of Ron.
CB73
Whew! For a moment I thought you were talking about my master plan going to hell instead of Mastermind's…
;-)
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Pavelius chapter 1 . Mar 6, 2012
Ah... it feels good to be able to review normally ...
Anyway... i am missing the giant eye thats watching over Mordor... err... wrong plot...
So Ron is training for his face-off with Mastermind, the flying seat of Mastermind is getting occupied by someone new (we all know who) and the ladies are trying to remember ...
My concern is Yori (i will stick to her till the end!)... has she forgotten Ron too?
And some humor like at the end is surley refreshing...
Keep it up
Pavel
You do know that the original plan was for her to die in the tsunami back in Chapter Six of RSVP Part I: The Fellowship of the Ron, right?
(Curse you meddling readers—always interfering with my beautiful plans…)
Well, as to whether your devotion to Yori will pay off? Only time will tell, my friend…
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Sentinel103 chapter 1 . Mar 7, 2012
Oh where do I start...it's going to be fun playing with someone's brain...LOL
So little Kimmie has outlived Master Mind...nah she croaked too easy, however Kim ya done good with the blonde, I preferred heal stomps though.
Good to see the girls are finally getting over Ron and he is getting over them...I mean there could have been some real mayhem going on if all that kept going.
Larry (Sentinel 103)
Ah, if it could only be that easy.
Ron will learn, just like Mastermind, that nothing ever unfolds the way that you want it to.
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Batamut chapter 1 . Mar 20, 2012
Ron is such a prude :p or repressing as his libido is acting out (does he know that denying base insticts make them come out in different ways, which is different than acknoldging it exists but not acting on it.)
Good story tastefully done
Yeah, the headshrinkers could have a real field day with our Ronnie.
And, as you know, the harder and deeper you repress something…
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Mr. Aanonymous chapter 1 Sep 30, 2012
question: i havent read everything yet but are there any lemons in this fic? and if so which chapters and with who? also you up for a challenge?
Lemons?
Yes.
With who?
It's complicated.
You'll just have to keep reading to find out.
And then read some more…because it gets more and more complicated.
As for challenges? This hairy bugger of a multi-part tale occupies too much of my free time for the moment.
And I suspect that, once I'm done—I may really be done here.
We shall see…
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Some Dude chapter 1 . Aug 29, 2013
Kim is a bad ass bitch!
Oh yes.
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loganhunter2 chapter 1 . Jan 13, 2014
I'm back ...so kim can't fight the moodulator even though she fought a Super charged one in the show...yes you have forced me to do homework I'm in the 4th season already. .
Well, she's not only fighting a Moodulator chip (black market version) but there was an Attitudinator and the Anubis Pendant in the mix, as well.
love the story glad for some light hearted stuff also hope I made to the polls this time around rongo votes
Rongo is clearly a front-runner in the polls!
And in my heart…wait! Did I say that last part out loud?
Drat!
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BartWLewis chapter 1 . July 26, 2014
Oh shnap...things are getting interesting.
I can't wait to see how the lasies react when they find out that Ron wiped their memories of him.
Ron did what? (Shakes head) If that really happened, then why don't I remember that...?
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Laserai chapter 1 . July 28, 2014
Well, so it looks like through what could best be described by an accident on the job, Kim has now not only joined the darkside but intends to wreck shop as its leader. Interesting. Its a possibility I never thought could be possible but you arrayed the elements for the setup quite nicely. In the meantime, the girls are starting to draw their own conclusions about Ron and it appears they may fall for him all over again. Except this time, it will be of their own choice which will definitely put the screws to his overall solo act plans.
Well, as I tried to warn everyone in Part I, Mastermind was only the warm-up act for a more dangerous super-villain. But Ron's biggest challenge may lie "closer to home."
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cybercorpsesnake chapter 1 . Sep 29, 2014
Great chapter. Very nice scenes with Shego. Keep up the good work.
Thanks! More Shego goodness to come!
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PyroNagus chapter 1 . Oct 18, 2014
Sorry for not picking up on the story earlier. It's soooooooo long and confusing that I need a considerable amount of energy to merely click the story title. (I don't skim when it comes to stuff like this so ya...)
Please and thank you! A lot of readers miss so much when they skim or rush through this story. All kinds of things are happening even when it seems like almost nothing is happening...
Anyways, wow...wow...wow. That scene with Kim. was. amazingly. outrageously. outstandingly. CHEESY... ahh *rubs the bridge of his nose* really Kim?... "wherever I go...Mego" *sigh* coming up with lame smack-talk is Drakken's job. Git yer head in da game, guuurl.
Well, she's adjusting to her evil reprogramming. Takes time, ya know?
Wonder what happened with the missing characters... ya know, I'm talking about Wade, Jim and Tim, what's-her-face-that-rescued-them (don't remember her name, too lazy to check).
Justine Flanner...you know, that super-smart girl who worked on a science project with Kim in the series where they opened a portal to like a Tyrannosaurus Rex...
If i were to be guessing I'd say they are teaming up and working under the radar until the time when their reappearance makes a big impact on the story (Maybe when the bad guys are winning and their help is last-minute-crucial or something like that).
Have you been talking to Pavelius? You guys are not supposed to be figuring this stuff out, yet...
For now popping their heads doesn't make much of a difference. For the time being everyone is on the edge of their seats because of the alien assassin...
They'll be "popping up" eventually. One of the story's elements of "Mystery." But you're right. Something...crucial...
Oooh, I was really meaning to ask you why the hell you thought the story is supposed to be categorised as romance/adventure. Don't cha know mystery readers are waiting for a good one out there. Maybe that's why your story doesn't get good ratings. Js
Hmmmmm...or maybe I should just set it back to something generic: don't want to filter the searches too much. Suggestions, dear readers?
Anyway nice job, keep 'em coming, even though you've jumpy with the update button recently. CX
I know, I know... you've been re-re-editing and re-posting old chapters. I haven't been living under a rock or anything...
But at least there's a bunch o' chapters already posted ahead of you so you don't have to wait!
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shtharchapter 1 . Jun 23, 2020
What did happen to mego?
Good question! I seem to have misplaced him!
Stand by for a few chapters till I get him sorted out…
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TheKellHound86 chapter 1 . July 9, 2020
*sniffs the air* I sense a change in the winds…. interesting days are ahead! Come Watson! We have SCIENCE to covet and demons to dispel!
Oh, yes! Truer words have not been spoken!
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Guest chapter 1 . July 10, 2020
Always wanted Ron mystic martial arts master, Zorpox supergenius, ring tower of muscles
Have Frugal Lucre, Hank Perkins, maybe Jack Hench work for him
Multiracial harem
Well, Ron's in pretty good shape, now, without that super-steroid-ring. As for Zorpox? He'll show up eventually. Most of the "minor" villains will find employment in the chapters ahead. As to who they'll work for? Keep reading (once I get the chapters re-read, edited, and re-posted).
And what is this word "harem" that everybody keeps talking about?
;-)
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