Hey so, I've pretty much been told by a person close to me that I'm a bad writer and drawer (artist is too generous) and have therefore decided to not continue this story. There is only so much needless criticism a person can take before they decide to give in.

I'm keeping my account and if you want to continue this story yourself PM me. I know this person would probably enjoy your version more.

I guess I should say thanks for sticking with this story and sorry that I just feel this is the only way to make said person happy...bye