Info you need to know for story

Gohan and Goten's mother has passed away a few months after Goten's birth. Gohan is 17 and Goten is 3 ( yes I know the ages are wrong but you will see or I just wanted it to be unusual). Gohan went to school to meet people his age. Bulma is the guardian of each of them but they don't live with her. Gohan is not acting or dressing like a nerd! Also he is a Super Saiyan and hair looks like when he battled Cell.

Chapter 1

"Gohan wake up" Goten said as he was jumping on his brother's stomach as much as he possibly could.

"Goten get off" Gohan said as he swatted his brother off and hit the wall laughing.

"It's time for school" Goten reminded after he finished laughing.

"Goten it's 6:00 AM how early do you wake up"

" I don't know but I want breakfast, I'm hungry"

Gohan slowly got up to make breakfast for him and his brother. After he finished he placed it on the table to soon be devoured by the two saiyans. Gohan then got up to get him and his brother ready for school. After Gohan looked at the clock realizing he could be late for school grabbed Goten and flew to West City. He then entered Capsule Corp with Goten in his arms. As he walks to the kitchen he finds Bulma who happily takes him so he could make it to school.

As he flew through the air he ran his hand through his blonde hair that looked the same as when he fought Cell. He soon looked down to see Satan City underneath him. He then lowers down till his feet meet the ground. He looks around to see if anyone saw him. Soon after looking to see he started to run off to school. As he entered the school and went to his classroom. When he sat down his home room teacher Mr. Panda came in with a huge smile on his face. As he got to the middle of the room he called for every ones attention. As soon as every one looked he stated.

"Well class I have some good news for you all we are going on a 2 month field trip to 4 different locations"

Everyone in the class cheered except a few people not naming names here. But then Mr. Panda made a motion for every one to quiet.

"Now be quiet so you can hear where we are heading, first place we are going to go to is Master Roshi's island, then Capsule Corp, then the famous Goku's house brought to you by Capsule Corp, then finally the Cell Games area. Oh and its mandatory the details will be given in a few minutes.

Everyone cheered except Gohan as he banged his head against his desk. Then a few minutes later every one quieted to hear the details.

"Ok what you have to do is bring 1 or 2 people younger than you with so they can learn with you." said Mr. Panda. "We will be leaving Monday morning class dismissed"

It was the end of school and Gohan is giving the permission slip to Bulma. When he got there he got tackled by two little half saiyans. After recovering he stood up with the two half saiyans holding onto him. He then goes to Bulma and shows her the form.

"Can I bring Trunks and Goten with me" asked Gohan

"Yes that's fine" Bulma answers as she continued to read the form and looks up after she finishes reading "Oh, I didn't realize that was your school and the Cell Games area well thats not going to end well." Bulma stated

"Ya I know" said Gohan "Oh and its next Monday so it's in two days"

"Well ok I'm going to get your boys stuff and bring it to Roshi's this weekend so just drop it off." said Bulma as she left

Gohan then proceeds to put Trunks down to bring Goten home.

So how is the revised version I think it's a lot better. Please review.