Hello there guys… and ladies, it's been quite awhile. I've been perfecting my writing skills. I fixed my grammar/spelling, formatting, and character development, and research. Hell, I even learned how to shoot a real assault rifle and sniper (not joking either) just to get a feel of what it's like. It's really fun, and when I'm airsofting with my buds I can get the feel of what it's like to be in battle (sort of).
But enough about that (I don't want to get off track ;). My point is that after learning all of this new stuff, I reread this story and realized something: THIS IS CRAP!
I honestly didn't give any information at all about Scarlet and her past (leaving you guys in the dark), and I kept putting the word 'as' in it which is really annoying. Not to mention that each sentence doesn't have good definition to it. And I think I could have made the romance story a little more romantic, and gathered more information about the army. I know women can't be in the Special Forces but since this is fan fiction, I can bend the rules and do whatever the hell I want to.
So I'm going to rewrite the story and fix everything. There may be a few new things I'll add, but other than that it'll basically be the same, except laid out better.
It won't take long to start rewriting, probably a week or so I'll post the rewritten first chapter to the story. You'll understand it more when I repost it, so just look out for the story.

P.S. I won't delete this one unless I get a bunch of rude reviews (for some odd reason)