Okay, so I got pretty positive feedback for my fic "An Enemy Among Us," so I decided to write and post another poetry fic. This one is going to be a tad bit different, however. For starters, it's going to focus on Miroku and Sango. Mostly Sango. I dunno, I just find it easier to get inside of Sango's head than Miroku's. But I'll do my best and we'll see how it works out, but most of the chapters will probably be from Sango's POV, but we'll see. Oh, and I might include an Inu or Kagome POV chapter every now and then. Another thing is there isn't going to be a song of the day or quote of the day. And I'm not going to set that strict guideline of "Only one chapter a day" like last time. I might post more than one chapter a day, some days I might not post at all, it just depends on how things are going for me. But with every chapter, I'm still going to include a quote, it'll just be called "Quote of the Chapter," instead of "Quote of the Day," but no songs, unfortunately. Sorry! And I think that's about it so... enjoy!
Quote of the Chapter: "Comparing Rowling to Meyer, is like comparing a work of art that appeals to the majority of the population to a turd with glitter thrown on it."
Disclaimer: I do not own InuYasha.
Sango
Recuperating in Kaede's village
Is usually uneventful.
We heal
Kagome and InuYasha argue
Kaogome sits InuYasha
Kagome returns to that
Strange world of hers
InuYasha sulks
Miroku acts lecherous
I slap him -
Totally uneventful
And completely normal.
Or at least,
That's how it usually goes.
But one day
Muroku
Really pissed me off,
So I decided
To take a walk
Around the outskirts
Of town to
Clear my head
And put some distance
Between me
And that pervert -
He was so insensitive!
Always flirting
And womanizing!
Why any woman
Would fall for his stupid
"Will you bear my children?"
Line
Or found him charming
Or even gave him
The time of day
Was way beyond me!
They were all such idiots
And floozies
And I for one -
"Somebody help me!"
I froze in my tracks
Grabbed onto Hiraikotsu
Ran in the direction
Of the yelling and
Came upon a young man
And two little girls
Cornered by a group of demons.
I ordered Kirara
To get in front of them;
As I threw Hiraikotsu
She transformed
And began fighting off
The demons
That managed to avoid
Hiraikotsu.
In a matter of minutes
The last of the demons
Were defeated.
I caught Hiraikotsu in my hand
Threw it over my shoulder
Then ran over
To the boy
And two young girls,
All of whom
Were staring at me with
Wide eyes.
"You guys okay?" I asked
Kirara transforming back
And jumping up
Onto my shoulder.
The young man
Stood up
Met my eyes;
His were
Filled with wonder
And amazement.
The girls stood up
Distracting me
From his...
Well,
Hotness.
He had black hair
And icy blue eyes -
I had never seen eyes so blue before!
"Yes.
Thank you so much miss!
I was just taking my sisters here
To see our grandmother -
Our parents just passed away
You see - And all these demons...
They just...
Ambushed us;
Caught us off guard.
We would have been dead
If it wasn't for you.
Thank you ever so very much, miss!
I'm Keitaro
By the way.
And these are my little sisters
Maeko
And Maemi.
And we are forever in your debt." he exclaimed
Bowing down on the ground
At my feet.
I blushed
As the two little girls
Said their greetings
And did the same.
They were so cute!
I quickly brushed them off
They owed me nothing,
I just happened
To be in the right place
At the right time,
I assured them
Asking them all
To stand up.
"But please
I must at least know your name."
I smiled,
What harm
Could it possibly do?
"Sango.
I'm Sango.
And this is Kirara."
"Sango.
Such a pretty name...
For such a pretty young woman..."
Anyone else here picturing him as a Miroku wannabe with a creepy pedophilic mustache and smirk? Just sayin', that last line sounded more than a little Miroku-like. Creepy. But he's not like that. Or at least, he's not supposed to be. Keitaro is supposed to be... Eh, you'll get it soon enough. Anyway, that last line was more than a little bit... Out there. Did anyone here catch Sango's fatal mistake? The one thing she shouldn't have thought? Anyway, I hope you guys all had a great holiday, whatever it is that you celebrate.
Be sure to let me know what you think!
Peace out,
~Hisa-Ai~