Author's Note:
So uh hi! This is my first story just so you guys know, I'll try to do the best I can and update as soon as I can but I won't guarantee anything at this moment. I'd also like to point out that I don't really like flames but I will take suggestions and such, just so long as they're not horrible and mean. This story is CGI and takes place five months after the Chipettes and Chipmunks meet, it doesn't follow the plotline of the movies or anything like that, and if the characters are a little OOC I'm sorry and will gladly change them if you think so. Thank you for taking the time to read my Author's note and please R&R and tell me what you think.
Rain beats down on the city of Los Angles drenching its residents to the bone, cars honk and screech on the highway a few miles from a small suburban neighborhood, however a little ways back from the small cluster of safe dry homes lies a forest, tall and dark.
Everything is green and wet dripping and dropping in the heavy onslaught of the pouring rain, suddenly a blur of red shoots through the calm tranquil undergrowth freeing the plants of the heavy H2O, racing at an inhuman speed.
The small red creature shoots through the forest, something larger and heavier crashes through the plants barely just 20 feet behind and closing in fast. The blur of color skids out from the cover of the leaves; it's small body heaving up and down quickly as it struggled to consume oxygen.
The animal sprints flat out across a small open field heading for a small rather quiet road when it suddenly trips and goes bouncing over the wet earth, finally coming to a rest near the side of the road.
A car roars past its bright neon white headlights casting a pool of light on the small creature, wide golden eyes dart side to side behind limp wet tangles of russet fur. The small rodent's ears twitch backwards on top of his head at the distance yet nearing sound of heavy paws, the chipmunk scrambles to all fours his once red hoody now stained brown from the muddy earth underneath him.
In a instance he's darting across the wet asphalt nearly escaping his death as a decent amount of cars roar over head, he stumbles over the road before landing on the solid earth again. A long row of hedge stretches as far as the eye can see just a few feet from the small back road, indicating that a small neighborhood lay rest behind them.
A distance all to familiar screech of tires on pavement assault his sensitive ears, his head whips around his eyes widening as he watches the massive shadow collide with a oncoming truck, sparks dance up into the raining night sky as more vehicles join the carnage.
Without a second thought the rodent bursts through the hedge collapsing in a heap on the other side, he lays there panting quickly in the glow of a overhead streetlight, the orange rays catch the drops of water adorning his russet coat, but a darker liquid seeps down his sides pooling under him.
The back side of his hoody lay in shreds that hang limply off his form, wet open flesh glistens on his back, four long gaping claw marks decorate his back, starting at the back of his neck and traveling down the length of his body finally stopping at the base of his tail.
The chipmunk slowly pushes himself up onto all fours swaying slightly, his small teeth gnash together as wave after tidal wave of pain ripples through his veins traveling throughout his body. A pitiful whimper escapes his lips as he practically drags his aching body towards the glow of the houses where he knows his family is waiting, where they might find out.
He swallows at the thought, pulling himself up onto his hind paws he leans heavily against a nearby tree as a familiar house enters his field of vision, a heavy sigh rumbles in his throat as he staggers forward a huge yellow A glowing almost neon in the dark.
Sooooooooooo, what'd ya think? Review please if you want to read more! Also thank you for taking the time to read the first chapter of my first story and I hope it wasn't a waste! R&R!