The Demon of the Elemental Nations
Authors notes - This is my first story, so go easy on the flaming. Don't like harems don't read!
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Disclaimer – I do not own naruto.
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"speaking"
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Chapter One – A new beginning
A five year old boy was living a life, that no kid should ever live. He was being beaten,stabbed,burned, you name it, it has already been done. The boy was on the verge of dying if help wasn't on the way.
Mindscape
Hitomi was furious with the villagers she had seen his life when he was three, and those mere memories had hurt her more than anything she has seen. "Hitomi I don't think your chakra will heal me this time" said Naruto, however Hitomi had an idea.
Naru-kun I want you to rip part of the seal off" that statement had surprised Naruto, before he voiced his thoughts, "Hitomi I thought you told me that ripping the seal would kill me" Hitomi smiled at his confusion,No Naru-kun I said part, not whole", Naruto had been quiet for a few seconds before finally speaking,"Hitomi what will you do? Hitomi smiled at Naruto, "When the seal is ripped a large amount of my chakra will be release, when this happens i'm gonna use it to teleport you to my home" that statement made Naruto go wide eyed, before a grin formed on his. "Alright Hitomi i'm ready" Hitomi smiled and nodded.
Outside
The villagers were about to hit the final blow, before a large amount of red chakra blasted from Naruto's body, scaring the shit out of some of the villagers. "Finish him off" yelled one of the villagers, but before that villager could land the finishing blow, Naruto's body suddenly vanished.
"Oi gaki" Naruto groaned as he sat up, he blind a few times before noticing a tall standing in front of him. "Who are you" the man seemed surprised to see the boy awake, after seeing all those stab wounds, and scorch marks, "my name is Sussano, what is your name gaki"? Naruto blinked before answering him " my name is Naruto Uzumaki" Sussano seemed surprised the boy was answering so freely. After a few minutes of silence Sussano spoke up, "Naruto why do I feel demonic energy surrounding you"? That one statement scared Naruto, he wasn't sure how to answer that question, he didn't need another person trying to claim his life.
Mindscape
"Hitomi-chan should I trust him" Hitmoni just smiled and nodded, however Naruto didn't understand why she would trust this one guy. "Hitomi-chan do you know him"? She grinned, "Yep, that person Naru-kun, is my older brother" that statement cause Naruto's jaw to hit the ground,"what the hell, you never told me you had a brother" Hitomi couldn't help but laugh at Naruto's expression. After finally calming down she spoke up, "i'm sorry Naru-kun, but it was hard to tell with you being beaten on a daily bases".
Naruto understood why she would forget something, she worries about him so much she forgets things,"its ok Hitomi".
Outside
"So your Hitomi-chan's brother" that made Sussano smirk at the chan suffix used in his imouto's name, "yes Naruto I am, it seems you are close to my sister, am I right" that little question had Naruto sputtering, what he didn't know was Hitomi's face was a vibrant red.
After Naruto had finally calmed down, he had nodded his head to answering Sussano question, "Naru-kun ask him to train you in chakra control and all the five arts" Naruto blinked a few times at Hitomi's suggestion before asking what Hitomi told him to ask. "Can you train me in the ninja arts" that caught Sussano by surprise, before he counted that it had Hitomi written all over it.
'She must be really worried the kid might not survive where ever he got those stabs and burns marks' thought Sussano, "fine Naruto I will train you for the next nine years" that made Narutos mouth drop to the floor, 'nine years but why, that would mean I would stay away from the village most of my life' thought Naruto. "Naruto the reason i'm gonna train you for nine years is cause each of those years your gonna learn something for each of those years" Sussano held up nine fingers before naming each of them, "first year you will train in chakra control" Naruto nodded at that plan. "second year your gonna learn taijutsu", Naruto nodded in agreement again, "third year your gonna learn kenjutsu" that caught Narutos attention, "why would I need to learn how to use a sword"?
Sussano sighed "Naruto there are people in the world that could kill you in a instant with a sword, without even trying". Naruto gulped at that, and decided to listen to what the rest of his training was gonna consist of. "Your fourth year will be genjutsu, with the chakra training iy will be possible for you to make powerful genjutsu". Now for your fifth and sixth year you are going to learn ninjutsu and fuinjutsu, after that I want you for the next two years to explore the elemental villages and do missions for them, you can make powerful allies by doing this Naruto".
Well that's it for the first chapter.