Story by XDanny7

◄Mom and her Sexy Friends►

◄Chapter 6►

◄Encounter with the Past►

Disclaimer: I DON'T OWN NARUTO

Story info: Alternate universe, more modern story. CONTAINS INCEST, PLEASE READ AT YOUR DISCRETION. M RATING.

Uzumaki Penthouse

Naruto ate his large order of miso ramen with gusto, and threw away the package it came in. It was another of his guilty pleasures that despite his relatively healthy lifestyle as an athlete, he would indulge in some ramen. It didn't matter to him if it was 2000 calories from large orders, if anything it pushed him to burn those calories. And tonight wouldn't be any different.

No sir, if anything, Naruto prepared his stamina with high-calorie nutrition. Though now he had time to kill, 3 hours to be exact. It was quite boring really, considering Naruto always had something to do like go out with his friends but he had been neglecting them the past two days. He had gotten several messages about inviting him to brunch or hang out, though he ignored them. Not because he was busy.

Not at all.

It was the opposite, and having found a new set of goals to accomplish, he didn't want distractions. Though that would truly hurt his reputation as a sociable and liked person. It would also seem out of the ordinary because he would socialize a lot prior to last night. Sighing, Naruto knew that it would bite him in the ass if he did not go out like he did before, but he could technically pull himself out of that situation by slowly declining invites every day.

Shrugging, Naruto began answering texts from Sasuke and Kiba who were nagging him about going out to a mixer tonight. It was something they partook at least once a month to meet new girls and hopefully bang em, get into relationships, or simply become friends. Have a good time really. Though that interfered with his planned time with Kushina, and had to decline for "homework reasons".

The Three Cucks (group chat)

sasu-gay (1:48 pm)
Fuck do you mean you won't join us? It's our tradition man, you can't break that shit for homework..

mutt (1:50 pm)
sasu-gay is right man wtf, can't do us that dirty. It's literally once a month and you chose to decline it smh

mutt (1:54 pm)
Look he's ignoring us now, too good for us now. real.

dick tank (1:55 pm)
Lay off you fucks lol, i'm trying to eat my ramen. and it's rly fucking important for me what i'm gonna do

sasu-gay (1:57 pm)
Oh yeah? like what? banging a new girl all night that you'll be bedridden till monday morning?

dick tank (1:58 pm)

PRETTY MUCH LOL

mutt (2:00 pm)
...I think he's bullshitting us

sasu-gay (2:01 pm)
Cmon kiba, give him the benefit of doubt. What if he's telling us the truth?

dick tank (2:03 pm)
Ight fuck you two, don't come pick me up because I won't answer. if you do waste your time, I warned ya LOL

mutt (2:06 pm)
I see how it is dick tank, fuk u too. you're driving the next time in yo fancy ass car alright?

sasu-gay (2:07 pm)
I second this too

dick tank (2:10 pm)
If it's getting me out of your stupid mixer this time, hell yea :')

Naruto sighed. He had successfully made it out of his commitment at a pretty good cost too if he did say so himself. Replying to them was relatively time consuming and basically sped up his day by 20 minutes just texting, really not too shabby. He chuckled at the stupid antics his friends and he had in their group chat, something he felt blessed to partake in this modern age. Phone was alright too but he couldn't necessarily do that with multiple people unless he had gone on some application that allowed that. Meh, too much hassle.

He thought about hitting up some friends for a quick hangout like driving around and seeing a movie or playing video games. Something to waste 2-3ish hours that he would end perfectly by the time he needed to be home. Naruto still unsure went on to reply to more of his friends, some asking for homework pictures or just casual conversations. There were more invites to hang out to a movie or mall, though Naruto wasn't feeling the latter since he had just gone to the mall not so long ago. He decided however, to take on the movie offer.

It was from Ino surprisingly. Not that they weren't friends, or didn't talk either. She was just the last person he would expect to invite him aside from Hinata. Both were similar in the sense of shyness or inexperienced with guys, and to be invited on a date by either of them was questionable. But he gave her the benefit of doubt, I mean she could've gained some experience when it came to guys.

Ino was a weird one. She was very flirtatious and playful, but when it came to the real deal, she was lost for words. It was almost a fake personality she put on to be social, but she was shy and inexperienced underneath. It was an eye-raising paradox for people who saw through her façade, but still accepted her nonetheless. Said people consisted of Sakura (duh), Hinata who was part of the trio of friends, and Naruto himself. Meh, there wasn't anything he was losing by going with her. In his mind, Naruto felt like she was asking him on a date and he wasn't going to refuse either.

It could be fun he supposed. In a sense, he wasn't truly obligated to be loyal to his women since he was getting more and that would be hypocritical. Naruto would end up breaking his promise to be loyal again and again as he expanded his harem, so the least thing he figured was to seek for their approval on the new women. Though that would have to be when he united Kushina, Mei, and Anko first. After all, he did have his way with them already.

"Hehe," Naruto laughed similar to a child, it was just incredulous.

Having his mind made up, Naruto replied to Ino by accepting it and would see her at the movie theater closest to her house. Ino replied with a yes, and that was his cue to change into a more casual outfit than his casual formal one. Naruto figured a white button up shirt with a small orange design of anchors repeated throughout the shirt would be a good top. It was certainly cold out, so he put on a thin black jacket to compliment the dark colors. Naruto figured he could continue the switch-up of dark colors with a pair of black ripped jeans, and white classic vans. It was an interesting combination, black white black white but shrugged, he liked it, just for the orange detailing on his shirt.

All that was left was some good smelling odor, so he brought a pocket size cologne for the moment to keep the scent fresh from being wiped by the air. Naruto called downstairs for his car to be ready in order to avoid wasting time again, and had his tip in his pocket for even less waste of time. He was truly a good anticipator of what would happen after experiencing this situation for the many years he lived here.

Naruto left and locked the door behind him, calling the elevator up. It wasn't a long wait for it to get there but the way down was gonna be rough. So he pushed in a special code for penthouse owners for an uninterrupted ride to ground floor if they were in a rush. He really wasn't though, but Naruto was determined to get to the house before Kushina did.

He checked his phone and it was barely becoming 2:29 pm so he could arrive by 2:45 and watch an hour and a half movie with her. It would be enough time to come back before 5 so he wasn't sweating too much anymore.

4,3,2...Ground Floor

With the stop, Naruto walked to his car, brought out the tip for the valet parker and thanked him briefly before getting into his car. He took off almost immediately startling the valet parker.

"That's weird, Naruto-san is almost never in a rush to drive fast.." but shrugged it off.

Now that it was traffic hours, Naruto had to drive slower than the usual 35 mph that main streets usually allowed. He had 13 minutes to drive a couple 20 miles into suburbs where Ino lived. Those suburbs luckily had their own small mall but sufficient enough to bring in hundreds daily. It wasn't bad once he took the highways away from the city, and would be driving 35 mph again.

The scenery leaving the city was wonderful too, definitely more green and open than skyscraper after skyscraper and tall buildings. There was the occasional business here and there, but nothing more than 6 stories high. Fire county was known for the immense amount of landscapes, whether grassy, forests, or hills. This drive went through all of those but when Naruto less expected, he was nearing the mall which was visible by its billboard-sized sign.

Naruto began taking a right to leave the highway and descended from the raised highway which had a tunnel going beneath it for the exits and loop arounds. Then another right to the mall itself and he got there on time, 2:39. He didn't know why he was sweating it at first, but was relieved to be quick with his anticipations like tipping the valet parker immediately without taking out his wallet.

He parked his car in a lucky spot close to the mall buildings, and texted Ino for her location. A minute later, Naruto found out that she was already by the movie theater waiting for him, so they could enter quickly.

This was going a little too smooth, gnawing at Naruto's back of his head.

"Whatever, suits me," Naruto said and found his way to the movie theater. It was pretty fancy, 4-star most likely. It was a suburb theater after all, but respectable rating. He saw a certain curvy blonde in the distance, dressed quite gorgeous actually. It was one of her best attributes to always be fashionable, but this kinda took the cake.

Ino was in a cute pastel blue dress with small white flower designs, that ended on her upper thigh. Matching with this, she also wore a white cardigan for the slightly cold weather. On the bottom, she had adorable thigh highs that barely showed her skin, about 2 inches. These were pastel blue too, but no design, and looked thin.
And the shoes were white slip on Toms for a flat design, not making her taller since she was already a good average height.

All in all, it was pretty adorable and had a similar match of colors like Naruto, except the black was a blue color. He assumed it was to match her blue eyes, instead of her favorite color, purple. As he walked closer, Ino recognized him and was slightly paralyzed. She couldn't handle how attractive Naruto looked, even after having dated him for a solid 7 months before it ended.

"Goddamit Ino, get out of your stupor and act pretty like you practiced all morning! We can't make a move if he finds us weird!" yelled the inner Ino, a far more confident and driven personality in comparison. It was actually this personality that came out when Ino was "flirtatious and playful", but would fail to rescue her in these times. Ino's kryptonite was handsome guys and Naruto was just the pinnacle of such pyramid in her eyes.

FUCK. ACT COOL.

"Hey handsome, I still can't get over how great you look," Ino barely began in a confidently regular voice. She wanted to show improvement on her confidence and maybe it would mean a fresh start with Naruto. That's what her true goal was behind this "hang out", besides spending time with her ex and good friend. Naruto did see through her original façade at school but this personality was her true self, reinforced by her inner confident self.

Naruto took the cue, and decided to go along with this flirt between them, with a grin of course.

"I know right? Look at this hella swole bod. You can touch of course," Naruto playfully bantered. To add emphasis, he poked his own chest to which Ino giggled to. It was one of the qualities she enjoyed about him, his ability to make her laugh at even the stupidest things. One could argue that she was biased by having a crush on Naruto, therefore everything being that much better.

It really didn't matter to Ino though.

"No but you're really pretty today Ino, I like your choice of outfit today," Naruto sincerely complimented with a genuine smile that punched the air out of Ino. He was just too much for her, leaving her breathless for a second at how sweet Naruto was. Ino did know that he was this way to many but that didn't change the fact that he was being genuine right here, right now, and only to her.

"T-thank you Naruto," she replied slightly looking away blushing. Naruto slightly ruffled her hair, which was lifted up and hungover in an arc, covering her right eye and the other piece of hair hanging like a bang on her side. (Basically Road to Ninja Ino with her right piece of hair like Boruto: the Movie). It sorta irritated Ino because it took a while to fix her hair but she got that done as they walked to get their movie tickets. Once the irritation passed, she did find it cute so it was all good.

"Two tickets to insert movie" Naruto asked politely to the cashier, and paid with his credit card too. The guy working slid two tickets through the narrow glass hole, and called next customer. The blonde duet went on to the actual entrance since the ticket purchasing area was outside. Ino hung her arm inside Naruto's whose was in his pocket, almost like a couple but playing it safe was fine too.

"So what'cha been up to stud? I haven't heard from you lately but I got you to come here late notice," Ino curiously asked as she tilted her head upwards and towards Naruto who was slightly taller. In this angle, she saw the chiseled, smooth jaw she liked from Naruto. He was just too godlike in her eyes at this point and she didn't give a single fuck what people thought of it.

"Y'know, business. I've been busy getting internships for companies so I get some experience. I probably won't be so available next time like this unfortunately," Naruto blew air out of his mouth as if upset about the fact. Though it was more of moving his hair slightly while being serious about not going out as often. Ino took the first interpretation and felt compelled to work her way quickly, since it sounded like her last chance.

"Well we'll have a lot of fun today, so don't blow me out just yet out of your ~business life~ooo" Ino playfully said with a smile, she did have something special planned today. Naruto raised his opposing eyebrow away from her view at this, it sounded like she was..

Nah.. right?

All Naruto could do was wait he supposed, couldn't just assume something weird right away.

"Alright, I'll take on your offer today little cutie," Naruto winked as he gave his tickets to the admittance person to enter the movie theater. Ino didn't say anything, or more like couldn't with a blush on her face. Luckily no one really saw it since she dug her face into his body. Both moved in and got a small popcorn, since neither was really too hungry for even a medium.

Ah the smell of crisp buttery popcorn.

The movie they picked out was relatively old and was in its last few weeks of airing on a movie theater before they got shelved. Knowing this, both blondes knew there was little people, if anything it should be empty. When they went in, they couldn't see anyone inside, 99% sure it was empty. Who knew, maybe there was someone inside and they were all the way towards the front or the other wall. This just struck an idea inside Ino's head, to which she smiled deviously.

They walked up all the way towards the top row and sat right smack in the middle. Talk about renting out an entire movie theater to themselves. It was basically Netflix & Chill, scaled up 100 times with a big ass screen and surround sound. The movie was barely starting on time, since they were "late" but only to the commercials playing 5 minutes before the movie.

It was barely 3 o'clock, and the movie ran for an hour and forty-five minutes, it was pretty much squeezing into his schedule for tonight. The two ate popcorn here and there, and the movie was interesting, though with the boring parts here and there. It went relatively okay, Ino leaning her head on Naruto's shoulder and the occasional cliche hand touch when they reached for popcorn.

Not like neither minded it. It was a small spark.

"You know what'd be more fun than this movie Naruto?" Ino whispered out of nowhere, a tone he couldn't put his finger on. It didn't match with Ino's usual tones.

"Hmm?" Naruto nonchalantly answered, curious but didn't show it. His eye bulged as a hand touched the body part he least expected.

"What the fuck"

Naruto's eyes darted at his lap where a hand was doing grasping motions, painfully slowly. Ino was groping his crotch from an extended hand to a pointy one at the center, and repeated for the next slow minute. Naruto glanced to his side wher

e Ino was casually watching the movie but with a glint of mischievousness.

It really caught him off guard, she was inexperienced when he last had sex with her and that was well over 2 years ago. Well putting two and two together, it was stupid to think she would remain naive to how to pleasure a man.

"Ight motherfucker you wanna play that game? I'll play too"

Naruto slithered his hand inside Ino's unsuspecting panties and this yielded a yelp from her which she quickly muffled. Naruto didn't know why since there was no one here but he noticed a worker just checking in to see if the movie was playing correctly and walked off a minute after.

Taking this as a cue, Naruto slid in a finger and touched on a sweet spot.

"Eep!" Ino let out a small moan out after and strengthened her resolve.

"I'm not losing to you!" she set strong determination and continued to unbuckle his belt top slowly and the button from his pants without sound. At the same time, Naruto moved her panties to the side exposing her warm snatch and juices to the cold air of the movie theater. It spread goosebumps as Naruto's finger interacted with her innard caverns and chill surrounding her private areas, all which queued intensified muffled moans.

Ino did finally reach the warm rod of flesh under Naruto's clothes and pulled it out of his underwear to the chilly air as well, a mischievous glint from her eyes for putting him on even grounds. From there, her slender fingers rubbed against his aroused member, nails threatening to do serious damage from the slight sharpness to them but almost soothingly didn't. It was a paradox of good feelings. Then came the goddess' hand that wrapped around his shaft and slowly but tightly stroked it, with intentions to milk him for all he had stored.

"Not so fast there," Naruto smirked, he was by no means a fast shooter. If anything, he would outlast Ino. No, he WILL outlast her. It was a fact, and Naruto was confident in himself to not go down to a girl his same age. Only milfs truly felt like goddesses of sex, the true deities of pleasure.

To keep up with her pace, Naruto started to speed up his rubbing on her flesh caverns trying to explore them in detail. They were tight and each push from his fingers caused more tightening, rinsing and repeating. It was orgasmic, and Ino had to bite down on her own teeth from letting out a loud moan. That was the first orgasm of that session, and Naruto wasn't done yet.

Oh not yet.

But before he could do more, Ino took the cue of her orgasm to get him back on hers. She pulled her body away from his hand, though forgetting that his fingers were still inside her vagina and made her shiver from the already sensitiveness she felt. Ino then squatted in front of Naruto's open legs and she pulled his underwear a little downer to have more work space for the blowjob she was about to perform.

"Don't disappoint Ino," Naruto smirked, with a shady glint on his azure eyes. Ino didn't notice, and only strengthened her resolve to improve on her personality. She no longer wanted to be a naive, inexperienced girl anymore to Naruto. Ino wanted him to acknowledge her new self and possibly pick up from their past relationship after.

'Poor girl, she thinks she matches up to milfs, but I'll give her a chance I suppose,' Naruto mused in his head. He barely noticed the feelings of euphoria from Ino's stimulation on his penis with her slender pink tongue. At first, it was licks as if Ino was licking a fleshy lollipop, but improved with actual wrapping around the penis head trying to pleasure multiple areas at once. It was how she would imagine guys liked it, and just sexual innuendo guiding her.

Naruto couldn't lie, and it showed with his grunts. Ino was doing alright, and it didn't help that she would look up occasionally with innocent yet lustful eyes. To add to the pleasure, Ino went from the base sucking with her lips now, to the top and engulfing the head fully; only the head. Then with a popping sound, she pulled back her lips and repeated from the base.

Goddamit.

The technique was good, Naruto admitted, but after several minutes of grunting, it felt stale. It was like developing some resistance and didn't feel as euphoric. Ino noticed as soon as Naruto motioned her up on to his lap. She was puzzled at Naruto not cumming from her blowjob but "figured" he wanted to finish big at the end course. Ino pulled up her dress from behind as she straddled Naruto's lap, still facing the movie theater screen.

"Are you ready Naruto?" Ino sexily wiggled her hole on his penis head.

"Of course you tease, but are you ready?" he replied, putting his hands on her waist to support her position.

"What d- mm-aaaah~" Ino moaned quietly, how could she not after Naruto pushed her hips down and subsequently her pussy to engulf his cock. She tightened up from the sudden action, getting a grunt behind her at least. Once Ino got adjusted to the sudden pleasure inside her hole, she placed her feet on Naruto's knees while he also slid down almost laying down on the seat to provide more surface area for her. From there, Ino began riding Naruto's dick slowly at first and tightening up here and there, all which caused grunts and moans from both.

Naruto wasn't a slouch either, he slithered his hands up Ino's dress and under her bra to squeeze Ino's incredibly soft breasts. By god, they were bigger than average and his fingers felt like they were holding melting silk. He guessed that was one thing young females had going for them, and delved in the bliss of touch from the breasts. Every squeeze and pinch of his fingers on Ino's nipples kept a steady moan sound train from her. And ever so often, he would push on them inside her sinking boob which would just bounce back within her bra. It was the best feeling of breasts, just soft silky and big.

'Fucking bimbos man, bless 'em' Naruto moaned inside his head, and wanted to move to something else. He kept one hand on her breasts but moved the other down her crotch and began fingering her into an amazing third orgasm. They both hoped there wasn't anyone else in the theater because Ino began getting louder with her moans from the multiple stimuli done on her sensitive places; yet both didn't actually care if they got caught. It was thrilling. The thought of being found doing sexual acts in a public place.

"Ah~ aH~ MMMM Naruto keep going please," Ino begged, it was so fucking pleasurable. She was referring to Naruto's fingers rubbing her clit to climax while drilling her hole at the same time. The sounds were so lewd, anyone could tell they were having hot steamy sex just by listening or even hearing. Poor cleaners.

"C'mon Ino, you can do a better job begging sweetheart," Naruto whispered hotly in her ear. It spread a huge blush from ear to ear, Ino being glad Naruto couldn't see in the dim lighting.

"Please ram me harder Naruto, my pussy can't wait anymore," Ino moaned out each syllable over the minute Naruto was slowing down on the thrusts upward. At the time she finished, Ino's eyes were lost in all the euphoria, similar to ahegao (weird sexual face, go google it). Then another wave of pleasure began and Ino's eyes rolled to the back of her head as Naruto rammed harder as per her request.

"Ahhh~ AHHHH~ M-AHHHHHHHHH-" Ino's moans came louder and louder, and Naruto had to muffle her mouth with his own hand to keep their activities in secret. Though he felt like someone must've already known at this point if they were in the theater as well. To add suspense, Naruto halted altogether, leaving a confused Ino frustrated that she was nearing another climax but unable to experience it.

"Mou, why did you stop?" Ino asked quietly while turning her head, until Naruto wrapped his arm around and hand on her neck. To that, Ino let out a sexual gasp from the feeling of suddenly not being in control, furthered by Naruto bending her over as he stood up.

"I'm going to teach you to be a good girl," Naruto whispered behind her ear and rammed her slowly and rough, enticing sudden loud moans that were muffled by Naruto's grasp on Ino's neck. Unfortunately Naruto couldn't see the lewd face Ino was making, almost sticking her tongue out from the sheer rhythmic pleasure.

"MM-mm Naru-toooo~ te-ach me plea-seee" Ino barely moaned out, interrupted by each plunge from Naruto's dick on to her tight wet pussy, squelching each time. It left small trails of Ino's juices down her legs and even drips onto the movie theater floor.

Naruto took the approval and gripped a little tighter on her neck whilst his other hand was holding her wide hips, god that ass was so clear and soft, spotless and just squishy. His thrusts caused it to jiggle but it still retained its rigidness from her being slender, it was entrancing.

"mmm-ahhhhhhh~ pant pant" Ino moaned out quietly into the seat she was barely holding onto in front of her. Naruto felt the tightness it was causing around his dick and he had to let out grunts from the amazing feeling. While not exclusive to younger women, there was something authentic about the tightness of girls his age.

'But nothing could beat the sex of older women, nah.'

He lost himself staring at Ino's body, not noticing she got tighter around his cock and ultimately cumming silently. However, her face was indescribable, just lost in cloud nine and both fell down back into the seat from exhaustion. Naruto took the task of getting both tidied up, fixing Ino's dress and tying back her dress, and finally his clothes.

It was with his final zipping up that Naruto stood up and beckoned Ino to leave with him, movie forgotten. She was slightly confused but went along regardless; she wasn't disappointed, only happy she got to spend some time with her previous boyfriend. It brought some memories back and made new ones that had contrasting differences.

Ino caught up to his side and tilted her head a little while looking at him, earning her a smile from Naruto.

"I'm sorry Ino, I didn't realize time would fly so fast with you that I didn't realize it was time for some responsibilities in an hour" Naruto explained as they left the movie theaters, a ray of sunset hitting his eyes and barely missing Ino's.

"Ah, it's okay Naruto," Ino smiled, "I still had a good time with you but you're right it got late real quick."

"Yeah I swore we had spent like two hours in there but what'd ya know, get a little excited and phew time goes by hahaha" laughed Naruto, giving his contagious laugh to Ino who let out small giggles. Though she felt a little red in her face from the lewd memories just a couple of minutes ago resurfacing. She honestly felt proud of herself for gaining that much confidence. Happy that she got to spend time with her ex and felt genuinely nice. Maybe something could happen but she didn't want to get her hopes up. She had to escalate feelings first for him, and looked forward to more dates in the future.

Ino didn't realize they had gotten to her car, Naruto indulging in the subdued noise from the mall but relatively quiet from the late hours. He slowly stopped and Ino, being in the trance that she was bumped slightly into him. It broke her out of it and laughed it off, whilst Naruto brought her close. Ino didn't expect a hug so suddenly but wrapped her arms around his back, with her face slightly more red.

"Alright Ino, take care and drive safe okay?" Naruto slowly left the hug, smiling at the blushing blonde in front of him. All she could do was nod, and unlocked her car and slowly got in.

"H-ave a good evening Naruto" she got out audibly for him as he started walking away, and he turned to wave and smile.

"You tooooo!"

Ino felt her face hurt from all the smiling she had done today, and sank in her car seat.

'Ah what a good day, that was so great….'

Ino ran back the memories, which made her facial expressions range from nervousness, to shyness, and confidence when she flirted with Naruto. Then the excitement of talking again in person, and towards the movie. Going into the exhibitionist sex they had, Ino couldn't prevent a madly red blush from creeping up into her face and ears; holy moly that was absolutely hot.

She honestly wanted to masturbate in her car, which was relatively alone from the few cars around her. But as she got to the ending sex scene, she realized something.

'Wait.. I came but Naruto didn't? Or did he?' Ino furiously tried to remember if she felt anything but couldn't. It took her out of her sexual trance, and went through multiple emotions of confusion, haziness, and hurt. It was too late to ask Naruto, she definitely didn't want to text and ask. Calling, nope, not even in person. She couldn't be mad at him but she still felt hurt that he might've not found her enough anymore.

"Ahhhhhhhh this hurts my head" Ino rubbed her temples. She had to go home for tonight and not think about it. She backed up and left the mall away from the sunset.

Alright guys, I'm sorry it might've ended in a bad spot but I can't let myself put this off any longer. I wanted to give you guys a chapter that's honestly taken months of on and off writing. I honestly have the worst writers' block and unmotivation. But here it is and I'm gonna push myself for more chapters I hope.

I know you guys may not care about my personal life but hey, I'm almost done with my first semester of college, and it's going great. I have a wonderful girlfriend now, I couldn't be happier and a solid life now. I want to push this energy into more chapters. I hope y'all liked :)

I'm also going to write my outline down for the story so it'll go faster than just trying to remember every time. Anyways enough rambling, please review and give me criticisms about my writing style! Have a good day everyone.