Naruto fanfic

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I do not own Naruto. Hey guys this is my Naruto fic im going to make new teams starting from genin. It will be a lot different from the show, but I am going to try to make the characters as close to in the show as possible. This is my first fic and I would appreciate help send reviews giving tips and critize if you want but please don't flame offer help but if you hate my fic that much don't read it. This is a naruhina fan fiction. Oh and naruto has already found out about the fox and stopped attending school to train himself. He already talked to kyuubi and in my fic kyuubi helps him and is kind to him. When he talks to Kyuubi its italicized, thinking by other characters is bolded

It was finally here the day of the genin exams; everyone was at the school preparing to take the test. All but Uzumaki Naruto that is, Naruto was just sitting in the back of the room unnoticed, and when their sensie Umino Iruka called his name a brash loud girl with pink hair shouted out.

"Narutos not here sensei he hasn't been here for the past three months, why do you still call his name."

"Sakura," the esteemed teacher replied,"I will always check for Naruto, I actually miss him you know?"

Suddenly a voice from the back of the room in a dark corner called out,"That's good to hear Sensie."

Everyone turned around and gasped as they saw Naruto hidden by the darkness. "Naruto, where have you been?" Iruka asked shocked.

Training myself, sensei, I'm ready for the exams today. In his head the kyuubi purred (kyuubi is female btw.)"that's right Kit you've worked hard for this test you will do great."

"Thanks Kyuubi it means a lot to me thank you for all your help"

"Of course Kit I owe you for the terrible time you've had with the so called villagers."

All the kids then walked out to the training grounds to begin the tests.

Uzumaki Naruto your up you have to show mastery of the bunshin, canceling and using genjustu, a proper henge, and a substitution.

Sensei will any kind of bunshin work? Because of my high chakra capacity I cant do a proper bunshin, however I can do a kage bunshin and I am working on a wind and a fire bunshin but they aren't ready yet.

Sure Naruto, Can he really make a kage bunshin and a fire and wind bunshin no one has come close to making those.

Naruto did some hand seals and shouted Kage bunshin no jutsu and 50 narutos appeared out of thin air.

Iruka was amazed and told Naruto to go to the next test he had passed the first one. Naruto finished the rest of the tests with flyng colors and Iruka proudly handed him his Konoha head protector.

Naruto then left the training grounds without saying a word.

(End of chapter one)

Ok what do you guys think good bad let me know what you think