Okay this story is now on hold while I read back over through the chapters and figure out what more I could add to it, you might see some people disappear, and other might appear but in the end the last few chapters will most likely be taken down.
I will start a whole new story for this, and then I will post them as I read through them and rewrite them. I know most people hate these things hell even I do, but it has to happen if I want to make this story work. Now I have a favor to ask you guys and it can't just be an 'oh sorry the story is going on hold hope you get back up' not that I hate those I like those to because it tells me that some people are actually reading my story. But anyways the favor I have to ask is that you tell me the things you thought I did good and thing you thought I did wrong, AS WELL as tell me things you would like to see such as Naruko staying with female Gaara or hooking up with a female Sasuke or no pairing at all. Keep in mind though that this IS a femslash or or whatever ever you want to call it.
Thanks for reading and hope to restart posting stories.