Seem familiar? Yeah. I'm re-writing this story. Enjoy! :D

"Urgh... are we there yet?" Sora complained. They were wandering throughout the remains of The World that Never Was. There wasn't much left, just a few collapsed buildings here and there. The main castle was miraculously still intact, however. "C'mon, Your Majesty, I don't see the point in coming here!" Sora stretched and yawned as he walked down the pathway.

"Not yet, Sora!" Kairi retorted. "I don't get it either, but we've got to come, okay?" Kairi glanced down at King Mickey. "But seriously. Why did all three of us have to come?"

"Because, all three of you helped defeat Organization XIII, remember?" King Mickey answered.

"Not to mention Roxas and I!" Namine commented from the back of Kairi's mind.

"Yeah, right. Namine, Roxas barely did anything!" Riku chuckled. But no... I swear he did something before the huge battle... what did he do?

"Shut it, albino!" Roxas retorted. I was useful! I know I was! But... my memory is hazy...

"Hey! It's silver, not white!" Riku argued back. "Anyways, we're almost at the castle now, right?" Sora looked ahead. There it was, in all it's immense glory, stood The Castle that Never Was.

They eventually reached the corridor where everyone's rooms were. There were eight doors on each side of the hallway. All of them had Roman numerals, save the last two at the end of the hallway, which were bathrooms. "Alright, odds are on the left, evens on the right. Sora, you check the evens, Kairi, the odds. Riku and I will stay in the middle in case anything happens."

"Right, got it," they nodded unanimously. Sora tried all the doors, but none opened. Same went for Kairi. Only two doors were left, the two labeled "XIII" and "XIV".

"What the-?" Riku stared at the fourteenth door. "I... There were only thirteen members though..." His Majesty excused himself quietly as he left the hallway. No one else noticed.

"Hey Roxas, do you know who the fourteenth member was?" Sora thought back to his Nobody.

"I have absolutely no freaking idea!" he -mentally- shouted back. "Don't you think that if I knew, I'd tell you guys?"

"Oh yeah..." Sora realized. "huh... I still wonder what he was like..."

Riku racked his brain, trying to remember the fourteenth member. "Well... I didn't meet her at Castle Oblivion..."

"Where?" Sora and Kairi asked.

"That's a story for another time, guys. Ask Namine later..." Riku answered. "Kuso... why don't I remember her well at all?"

"HER?" Everyone exclaimed.

Yup, Chapter One's been rewritten. I hope you guys like it... If you're a new reader, I'm sorry if the quality of this one is better than the rest OTL I'm currently re-writing most of it, because the original chapters are complete and utter crap.

Also, "Kuso" is Japanese for dung. Only the worst definition for dung. Like... BS? I don't ever cuss in real life, but I will mutter this sometimes ^^;