Pain
Pain —n. 1 Any unpleasant bodily sensation produced by illness, accident, etc. 2 Mental suffering. [Latin poena penalty]
He was blinded with the pain. Sasuke's eyes were burning; they were burning so bad he felt his head was exploding with every pulse of pain. Over and over again.
He was writhing on the hard ground and he heard Karin and Suigetsu say something but it was so distorted, so very far away. He felt pressure on his wrists. Maybe Juugo was trying to stop him or something. But Sasuke didn't know why; couldn't they feel the pain? Couldn't they see he needed to remove his eyes right now?
He was dimly aware that he was screaming and he was clawing at his face. The pain had attacked so quickly. One second he was jumping from tree to tree in fear, the other second he was falling in agony, red coating his eyes in layers and the pain surrounding his head like plastic, choking him to the very point of death.
Before blacking out, he heard four very familiar voices. One of the voices that really mattered gasped and then he was spiraling into the blackness, wishing very much he wouldn't. Sasuke wanted to see her emerald green eyes and bubblegum pink hair and scream that if they didn't run, Madara would be upon them.
And the last thing Sasuke wanted was for her beautiful porcelain skin to turn red and wounded.
These are bite sizes. I've always wanted to write one of these. So this A/N of sorts will be short as well.
These are the mobile series, which I think, translates into fic that I've written in my cell. It can write about up to 2ooo characters, roughly 5oo words maximum as such, these will be below that limit.
Reviews are well appreciated. :)
PS: The plot is altered. This is after the scene were Madara took him and Itachi's body and told him the truth. This is after all that. I think you'd know what we mean after a few chapters.
EDIT: The chapters are going through minor spelling edits and etc. Shame on you readers for not telling us! D: Lol, excuse that. Anywho, sorry if this isn't available or if there is any inconveniences. Twenty one chapters are being replaced and there will be two new updates. That should compensate for the prob.
EDIIIIIT!: Kitsu3 shall be our first beta-reader! Hooray! *Claps!* And huggles. :3