DISCLAIMER

I do not own Naruto. Kishimito does, but that could be subject to change, ne?

Hey everyone this is my first time writing a Naruto fan-fiction so go easy on me. I have read many fan-fictions before so I know what to do, what not you know the basic stuff. This story takes place after Naruto fights Sasuke at the Valley of the End. All the events before this follow the cannon plot-line. So that means Naruto accepts Jiraiya's request to train him. The difference from the original cannon and my fan-fiction is that Jiraiya actually teaches Naruto something. I mean Naruto is training under Jiraiya of the fucking sannin. He should be able to do more than better taijutsu, knowledge of how to break genjutsu, a bigger rasengan, and better strategies.

WARNINGS: In this fan-fiction Naruto will be semi-god-like. I know it might seem stupid because he is only training for two-and-a-half years but you add clones in there and that two-and-a-half years of training jumps to who knows how much. Also Naruto WILL NOT act like a douche and he will still love his village. I'm saying he will still love the village because in my fanfiction he will be beaten by the villagers. Only every birthday up until he is 6 years old, by then he will have entered the academy and the villagers wouldn't be able to do anything to him, except treat him how they do in cannon.

Finally, the last thing I want to say is that there will be NO bashing in this story.

That about wraps it up, thanks for reading this even if it was insanely boring, but I felt you all needed to know this before you read this story. Now without further ado here is: "Dawn of the Lightning God"

Naruto - Normal/Human speech

Naruto - Human thinking speech/Flashback/emphasis on words

Naruto - Demon, Summon, angry jinchuuriki speech

Naruto – Human jutsu casting

Naruto - Demon, Summoning thinking speech

Naruto stood in front of the gargantuan Konoha gates with a large smile gracing his whiskered face. Beside him stood a tall man with extremely long and spiky white hair tied back into a short pony tail, with two shoulder-length bangs that framed both sides of his face. He also had red lines that ran down from his eyes and wore a horned forehead protector with the kanji for 'Oil' engraved on it. As for clothing, he wore a green short shirt kimono and matching pants; under which he wore mesh armour that peered out of the sleeves and legs of his outfit. He also wore hand guards, a simple black belt, Japanese geta (wooden sandals), a red cloak with two yellow circles, and a toad summoning scroll on his back.

Directly in front of Naruto was a fairly tall light-skinned woman with light brown eyes and straight blonde hair. Her hair was waist-length with shoulder-length bangs framing both side of her face and tied into two loose ponytails. She also had what appeared to be a violet rhombus shaped tattoo on her forehead. She was wearing a grass-green robe with the kanji for gamble written in black on the back, inside a red circle. Underneath she wore a grey, kimono-style blouse with no sleeves, held closed by a broad, dark bluish-grey obi that matched her pants. Her blouse was closed quite low, revealing her sizeable cleavage. She also wore open-toed sandals with high heels and polish on both her fingernails and toenails.

Glancing around the large and populous village for what seemed to be the final time, or at least for quite a while, the older man sighed. "Well, we should be leaving now Tsunade we have a long road ahead of us."

Choosing to remain silent, the now identified Tsunade simply sighed and closed her eyes, silently letting a single tear escape from her saddened eyes. "It's really time for you to go isn't Naruto, Jiraiya." Her voice cracked as she hurriedly wiped of the single tear that had been marring her face.

"Don't worry Baa-chan we will be back in no time dattebayo!" Naruto yelled loudly, quenching any fears the woman held for the boy, instead replacing them with irratation.

"Just stay out of trouble gaki." Tsunade replied with a tic-mark on her forehead.

Raising his thumb in a reassuring gesture, Jiraiya chuckled lightly with a smile."Don't worry I will keep him safe, but can I at least have a little gift for all my effort I'm going to put in training him?" By the end of his sentence the toad-summoner's nose had begun bleeding slightly, a clear indication of the nature of his thoughts.

"JIRAIYA!"

Tsunade's leg shot out with tremendous power, laced with huge amounts of pure chakra. The devastating blow came in contact with a certain area of Jiraiya's anatomy that he preferred to remain untouched unless under ... certain circumstances. The insanely powerful kick from Tsunade resulted in Jiraiya being blown past the gates and spiraling away from Konoha and at speeds that would make Maito Gai jealous. Kami have mercy on his family jewels because Tsunade certainly didn't. That is if they weren't already crushed by Tsunade's super powerful blow. Dully noting the interaction between Jiraiya and Tsunade, Naruto sighed and muttered under his breath "Damn Ero-sennin."

Shaking his head in annoyance, Naruto smiled and waved Tsunade goodbye. "Well Baa-chan I should follow him and make sure he's okay, so goodbye dattebayo!"

Setting his eyes on the long path before him, Naruto smiled brilliantly his eyes burning in determination.

"I swear when I come back I will be stronger than ever to protect my precious people and become Hokage!"

This thought would forever change the ninja world in ways no one would ever expect. Today a legend was born. A legend that would surpass all the Hokage's and become a man feared all over the five great nations. For today the Raiden no Kami (Thunder Lightning God) was born.

Revenge. It was so close he could almost feel it. He stared at his palm in psychotic hunger. Yes... he could see it! His fist carving into him, his sweet, sweet blood spraying out like a broken faucet... His mother praising him for cleansing his clan's name, his father finally acknowledging him as a powerful ninja...! It was all within his grasp! All he needed now was power. Before he had foolishly believed that Konoha could give him the power he so desired... but no! The tree-hugging village handicapped him; they dared to slow his progress! That fool Kakashi held on to his idiotic morals of teamwork and other such nonsense. That village did not have what he needed! However, that snake did. Infamous for his incredible skills, the snake sannin surely would be a capable teacher. After all, the sannin held no morals whatsoever. Once he was finished with him he could sever his bonds like he had done before and he would grow even more powerful! Then, than he would be ready... he would be ready to fulfill his destiny, his dream, and his life-long goal. He would be ready to kill that man... Uchiha Itachi would die by his hand!

So caught up in his brooding, he paid no attention to his surroundings. However, a powerful stench dragged him out of his trance. His eyes narrowed as he spotted the owner of the horrible odor.

"Orochimaru...!"

In a dark damp cave lit only by the blazing torches lining the walls whose entrance was blocked by a gigantic boulder with a very complex seal stuck on it, eight holographic figures stood side by side apparently waiting for something or someone. Just then a ninth figure silently flickered into existence. The figure had purple eyes with a ripple pattern extending from the pupil. The figure proceeded to stare at the other figures as if checking if everyone was there. This somewhat unnerved some of the figures, noticeable by the twitching of their arms and legs. Finished with the "roll-call' the ninth figure who seemed to be the leader noticeable by the bows he received when it flickered into existence said "I have called you all here today to tell you something that may interfere with our plans."

"Oh, what might that be?" A figure said in a shark-like voice.

His eyes bored into the figure, betraying no emotion. "The Kyuubi (Nine-tailed Fox) has left Konoha and is traveling on a training trip with Jiraiya of the sannin."

"So what are we going to do, hmm?" A figure with long hair said.

"We wait until the Kyuubi (Nine-tailed Fox) returns to Konoha." The leader said in monotone.

"When may that be?" A figure with crimson eyes questioned.

"Two-and-a-half years." The leader replied.

"Why not just take action now when he is not being protected by Konoha?" A figure said in a harsh whisper.

"We need time to increase our funds and prepare to capture the other Biju (Tailed-beasts) as well. Oh and Itachi it seems that your brother has abandoned Konoha and is now being trained by the traitor Orochimaru." The leader said to the red-eyed figure. The figure now identified as Itachi showed no response to his leader's statement except a slight twitch of his index finger which went by unnoticed by the other figures.

"Oh cold as ever eh, Itachi?" The figure with the shark-like voice said. Once again Itachi showed no response to the figure's statement except a slight twitch of his eyebrow which once again went unnoticed by the other figures.

"Alright, meeting adjourned everyone." The leader said as he flickered out of existence.

"Hai Leader-sama." The figures said in chorus even though their leader had already left the cave. One by one the figures slowly flickered out of existence until the gloomy cave was empty save for one small tadpole which was submerged in a small pond in the dark recesses of the cave. Sensing that the figures had left the tiny tadpole vanished into a cloud of smoke…

EDIT: Revamped