Plot.

What if the big battle at the end of eclipse has all in vain. what if Bella died. What would happen if Edward Cullen got the chance to do it all again what would be done differently and more impotently would he let his family in on it.

authors note

Just to let you know I was planning on doing a chapter for every chapter in the book plus a chapter on how Edward finds his way back in time. However While writing all the stuff for the first chapter of twilight I realised that I had done 5 chapters already so ye this is probs going to be a really really long story. So don't be surprised if it takes me a wile to up loud. Chapters are going to be pretty long. Just a quick not on the whole nessi issue, my sister wonted me to make it so even the males can't have kids(couse she doesn't like nessi) but I don't want to mess with SM universe of vamp mythology two much so to sort it out I've decided to not have Bella get pregnant but in order to keep the possibility of righting something to do with the half breed Children iv made it so Bella was in an accident when she was younger so it made it so she couldn't have kids. sorry nessi lovers. I love nessi two but I promised my sis there would be no vamp babies in this story. oh well.

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a big thank you to who helped me with writing Victoria attack on Bella. Thank you so much.

p.s Also im a bad speller and I only have note pad which doesn't have a spell checker. I did have my friend read through and check it but just in case she missed something I have spelt wrong just let me no and ill correct it. oh and italics is what edwerd heares in peoples heads.

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chapter 1

Victoria's eyes darted at the small distance between her and safety she looked Back at the hateful man who killed her beloved James. Deciding on safety first she bolted toward the small woods feeling the snow blow behind her at her speed. His voice cried out behind her "you won't get another chance like this again" she stopped dead in her tracks open hearing the spiteful words of the human loving vampire that destroyed her only reason for being. She whipped around causing another small flurry of snow to stir, and listened in complete agony as he continued to taunt her with his words. "You want her... you want me to fill the pain that you felt when I killed James" he continued and Victoria felt the anger building in her chest at the same time a vicious hiss came through her lips. "when I tor him to peace's" she screamed at him in her head shut up shut up shut up. But he only continued "when I turned him into ash" his eyes locked on hers and a Pain exploded somewhere in her heart at his words. But he continued. "When I turned him into nothing" The anger building in her chest reached the surface and she snapped. Before she could register what was happening she somehow managed to get the puny girl Bella in her grasp. In one cwick movement she pit into her neck "NO!" she heard the vile cry of that simpering moron. As he threw her away from his precious little pet human but that only made things worse as she ripped half of her neck out whilst being thrown back. She could hear the cries of riley as he was screaming for her to help him but she did not care all that mattered to her was she did it. She finally won. She watched in complete joy as the girls life blood spilled from her neck like a river of read. Mixing with the snow and turning it a shade of pink. The moron vampire sobbing for his beloved. Holding her body in his arms. Somewhere in the distance a wolf howled.

Apov

What is he doing over protective fool. I can't believe he's trying to take on all the new born's that come near me. As if they could catch me.

Jb pov

we were winning. Finally it looked like we were almost done the small one with the black spiky hear started to talk very meanly to the tall blond one. What the hell aren't they together. Not that a care. "Your an over protective fool. I was doing perfectly fine jazz. Don't expect any sympathy from me about that damn bite its your own fault" the blond one was looking at her whilst trying to keep an eye on one of the red eyed leech that they let live. What did they call them new borns. "Sorry Alice but can we talk about this later." The spiky heard one smiled slightly. "Jazz I can look after my self you no" the new born just had a confused look on her face. Her eyes were closed. Just as we started to put the pieces in of the filthy leaches in the pier Leah so a new born we missed and went for it. Leah no. we all thought as one but it was two late she was already lunging for it. I was the closest and went to help her. I managed to tair the leach away from her but as I was killing it I saw something threw the pack mind link that was the worst thing that could ever happen. The read head and some other leach had found Bella. At that moment nothing matered but saving Bella. I took of like a lightning bolt. I had to get there but before I could get there in time I saw something that will haunt me for the rest of my life. It was too late. Bella was dead I let out a howl. One thing was for serton that bitch was going to die. Apov "no no no. it cant be. I god it c-c-can't be true" "Alice darlin what did you see. Dam it Alice talk to me" jazz looked so worried. "i-its bel-Bella" I sobbed. "she ki-killed her. Bella's g-gone" "no" Esma whispered in disbelief Carlisle rap'd his arms around her in confurt at the same time jazz grabbed me into a hug of his own. "that red headed bitch is dead if I see her" Rosalie spat whilst conferting emit. "how can bell b-be d- dead" emit sobbed dropping to his nease "my little sister my poor little sister. Oh god Edward we have to go find him he must be so u-up set." "shh emit hunny." Rosalie whispered whilst nealing in front of him.

rpov

I may have shown very little love towards Bella sisterly wise. But I never wanted her dead. That was the furvist thing from what I wanted. OK maby in the beginning but I thought she was a threat to the family then. That she could expose us. And after that ...well I just couldn't understand how she wanted to be like us. To never be able to have children or grow old. And I hate to admit it but in the beginning I was jealous. She had everything I could never have and she was throwing it away on my moron of a brother. But over time I grew to kind of like her. Though id never admit it. Not even to Edward(which was hard to keep secret considering his talent). In fact I almost loved her. Like a sister. No I new I loved her like a sister. the only reason I was ever mean to her was because I thought she was making the wrong choice. That bitch was going to die for killing her and destroying my family.

jpov

oh god she's dead. I no I never really talked to Bella much. And I may have wanted to kill her once or twice but I loved her like a sister. The only reason I didn't talk to her that much was my blood lust. Alice couldn't stop crying no one could. Even Rosalie was upset. Maby even more so than emit. Though she didn't show it. I pushed wave after wave of calm out to everyone but it had no affect. I could only Imagen how Edward felt. Oh god Edward. "we should go find Edward. Hell need us right now. Carlyle what should we do with the new born."

coming soon

Chapter 2

edwords pov then some time travil. te he. :)