5D'S Ramen

Chapter 1: Ramen

It was a beautiful day in Neo Domino city. The kind of day where people like to kick back, relax and enjoy the sunshine. In the heart of Neo Domino city, there was a very calm atmosphere, which was very different from the usual rush hour feeling that got everyone stressed.

On one particular street everything was quiet and peaceful.

"JACK ATLAS!"

Well mostly peaceful.

"JACK ATLAS, GET OUT OF THE KITCHEN!" A young woman with short silver hair and light hazel eyes yelled.

"Jack Atlas takes orders from no one." Jack said calmly.

"HE WILL IF THERE'S A LADLE INVOLVED!" The young woman replied as she hit him on the head.


Elsewhere… (The living room upstairs)

A faint crashing sound could be heard from the kitchen.

"What's going on?" Yusei asked

"I don't know, but I've got a bad feeling about this," Crow replied as Akiza got up and stretched.

"Let's go check it out," she said. They left the room, clueless of what was waiting for them downstairs…


As they entered the kitchen they came across a truly monumental sight.

Yusei, Crow and Akiza stared in amazement.

"Its official, Jack Atlas is being beaten up by a girl." said Yusei.

"Ghost, why are you beating him up?" Crow said to the young woman.

"I've told him time and time again, don't come into the kitchen when I'm cooking, but does he listen to me? No!" Ghost sighed.

She was wearing a plain white shirt with denim shorts and knee high boots. She was also wearing a white, ninja-like bandana, which held back her fringe.

"You know Jack, she does have a point," said Akiza.

"Why is everyone ganging up on me?" asked Jack.

"Because you tried to steal some extra lunch," Ghost replied.

"Guys we need to get ready, service starts in an hour," said Yusei.

1 hour later…

"Ghost are you all set?" Yusei asked.

"Yep, ready to go." Ghost replied.

"Guys, the customers are arriving!" Leo exclaimed. (The twins had arrived half an hour ago)

"Well what are we waiting for? Let's start serving!" said Akiza who had changed into a black maids outfit. "And Jack, get out of the kitchen and start taking orders!"

"Fine" said Jack, who had changed into a white shirt, black bow tie and black trousers, Yusei was wearing the same.

Akiza and Yusei walked out of the kitchen, ready to start taking the customers' orders, they saw Jack standing in the middle of the restaurant looking confused. When they realized no one had opened the restaurant door and they could see people trying to open the door.

They ran back into the kitchen.

"No one has opened the door yet," said Yusei.

"Well whose turn is it?" asked Luna.

"I did it last time," said Crow.

"I'm head chef," said Ghost.

"No way," said Jack.

"Get Yusei to do it," said Akiza.

"WHAT! There's no way I'm doing it!" Yusei exclaimed.

Everyone glared at him, especially Ghost who gave him an 'I'm gonna hit you if you don't open the door' look.

"Okay I'll do it," said a slightly nervous Yusei. He looked out the kitchen window overlooking the restaurant, and saw all the angry customers trying to get in.

"Do I have to do it?" he asked.

"Just open the door," said Jack. He pushed Yusei out of the kitchen.

Yusei was now face to face with the door and all the people behind it, he took out the key from his pocket and slowly unlocked the door. He then moved on to letting everyone inside, carefully he placed his hand on the handle and began to turn it.

Once the door was open about an inch wide, Yusei ran for his life from the stampede of customers, pouring in through the door.

He staggered back into the kitchen, a little bit breathless.

"Okay I am not doing that again," Yusei panted.

"You won't have to do it again, not for a while anyway," said Ghost.

"Why?" Yusei asked.

"Because it's Jack's turn tomorrow," said Crow.

Everyone laughed, except Jack who had the look of impending doom.

"Come on guys, let's get to work!" said Akiza.

"Right!" everyone else said in unison.


Two and a half hours later… (In Akiza and Ghosts room)

"I'm so tired," Akiza yawned.

"Me too," said Ghost.

"I think we should go to bed," said Akiza.

"Yeah so do I, but don't turn off the light yet," said Ghost, who was taking her bandana off.

"Finished?" asked Akiza.

"Yeah," Ghost replied.

"Okay, night," said Akiza.

"Night," said Ghost.

They fell straight to sleep.

Two hours later…

A loud crash could be heard from downstairs, Akiza and Ghost woke up with an instant.

"What was that?" asked Ghost.

"Let's go see," Akiza replied.

They crept downstairs as silent as they could until they reached the kitchen door, Ghost and Akiza could just make out the figure of a person. Akiza turned on the light.

She and Ghost didn't like what they found…

"JACK ATLAS!"


Thank you for reading chapter 1, I'm so happy that I have my first story on Fanfic. Thanks for the revews even though I only have 1 at the moment... I hope you enjoyed it and I will try to update soon! :)