Hey, this is the Prologue to Least Expected. I've gone back and edited some of the story and when it's ready I'll post it.
Thankyou so much for all of the incouragement and please don't be afraid to point out mistakes or give positive criticism.
Hope you enjoy the new and improved version of Least Expected.
~ MC
Prologue
It was what one considered to be happy. It loved going back. This time it would be a girl. Just as it was a girl during the civil war. It gave up on being a man centuries ago
It slowly descended, waiting for the right moment. There. It slid down, unnoticed by all. The process had started. It was going back. It started to slip in. It started to split. No! This can't be happening! It was too late, the process had already started. It couldn't back out now without the consequence of death.
It had heard of things like this happening, it was rare and some backed out of the process to keep their halves together but it couldn't condemn a living creature to death.
It couldn't really feel emotions but being so close, it could feel itself panicking and a slight ach – pain. It was amazing. It had never really felt before. It was ripping up the middle until it had completely split two. Its other half drifted off to start the process all over again with another body. The two halves were now completely independent. It could no longer concentrate on its other half, it had to start to erase its' memory or it will be blocked from continuing the process. Of course, once it returns it will remember.
It knew it was going to forget everything, including its' other half but it also knew it would find it and recognised it no matter what. After all they were one; it would be physically painful to walk away from one another – but not impossible.
It finally finished the process, it no longer remembered anything, but it was flawed, without its' other half it couldn't completely forget. It was done. It silently slipped into the unconsciousness of the baby girl in its mother's womb. However the child was cursed, it would have nightmares of being torn in two as her soul had done moments before.
Ever so slightly, the baby moved. At last, she had a soul.
On the 25th of June, a cute baby blond girl was born
So, How was it? R&R ~ MC