Disclaimer: I am not Jane Austen. (Just in case someone mistook me for that lady with the bonnet who has been dead for the past two centuries.)
This is a very short story, just a parody of Darcy's first proposal to Elizabeth. The next one will be from Mansfield Park and I plan it to be longer.
Also, I'm new.
Storyline: Darcy is in Longbourn, and he tries his success with Miss Elizabeth Bennet...
DARCY:
Marry me, you commoner.
LIZZY:
No. And, just to make my point clear, I will not even thank you, in spite of my conduct book's persistent instructions to the contrary.
DARCY:
But… why?
LIZZY:
You wronged Wickam, and you separated Bingley and my sister.
DARCY:
(aside)
Wtf, she and Wickam?
(to LIZZY)
Wickam is a big crybaby, and your sister didn't really love Bingley, according to my observations, which were totally objective.
LIZZY:
The nerve!
DARCY:
Perhaps, Miss Bennet, you would have been willing to overlook these perceived injustices if I have been more guarded in my language towards your family.
LIZZY:
I would never marry you. Ever. Ev-HAR. I would rather have my teeth uprooted- no, all my limps amputated- no, marry Mr Collins…
DARCY:
Alright, I get your point.
LIZZY:
Because you're a stuck-up, rude, misanthropic, insufferable prig.
DARCY:
… woof?
(recollecting himself)
Very well, madam! I shall now say something melodramatic about my feelings and depart forever.
DARCY storms out. LIZZY swoons pathetically on a chair.
Reviews are appreciated.