Hey guys! So I have gone trough and edited this whole story. I realized a lot of if it was kind of cheesy...well some of it still is but that's beside the point. I took out a lot of the song lyric stuff since I hate reading that myself. I also thought it would be a good idea to go back through the whole thing with a fine tooth comb before sitting back down and working on the sequel. I have a plan as far as the characters and their relationships are concerned, but I have yet to figure out who the main antagonist should be. If you have any suggestion, let me know. I love having your input. I think my writing skills have improved so hopefully the sequel is a bit more mature in its writing.

Lots of love

Katie