Note: Ok I'm warning you I'm trying to write in third person this first chapter which I have never done, so be prepared. I have written before and the story did pretty good, but it was in first person and I was constantly switching P.O.V's. Anyways, this is my story, give it a chance it will get better this chapter's rough thought so grin and bare it! If you can't I can rewrite it.
Disclaimer: I do not own Inuyasha.
'it's cold.' The girl looked around, she was alone. There was snow falling knocking the temperature lower, Kagome Higurashi pulled her coat closed and turned into an alley. Her eyes lit up as they landed on a small mattress. 'Yes! My lucky day!' She walked over and climbed onto the bed which was a slight problem because she was still so small. She jumped up and down a couple times before getting on her knees and folding her hands together. Kagome lifted her head and looked up to the stars.
Dear Mommy, Daddy, Sota, and Grandpa
I hope you can hear me, I wanted to say that I'm sorry and to wish you a good night.
She closed her eyes tight before opening them. A lone star shot across the sky and she smiled sadly.
'good, they heard me.' with that thought Kagome laid down and fell asleep.
"Kagome!" she turned and saw her mother running towards her.
"Mommy!" Kagome ran towards her and gave her a hug.
"I take it you had fun out here," her mother looked at her clothes and laughed. "in the mud!" with that she turned and walked towards the house. Kagome ran slightly to catch up and grab her mothers hand.
"Mommy is it time to eat?" her mother smiled and nodded
"yes but you need to wash up first" Kagome grinned and ran into the house.
"OK! I'll be right down!" she heard her mother's laughter as the color began to fade.
Kagome opened her eyes and looked up. She saw a woman's face and looked around groggily.
"Oh, you're up!" Kagome looked up at the woman to see her smiling down at her.
"Can you tell me your name?" Kagome just stared at her. She could trust this woman, she just knew she could. Kagome opened her mouth but no noise came out. The woman frowned slightly before her smile returned.
"It's ok! I'm taking you to my house, you don't seem to have a place to stay." Kagome shook her head, confirming the woman. Finally, she would get to stay in a warm house! After a month by herself she would have someone to care for her.
"I have a daughter and son so you'll have someone to play with…actually I think she's about your age! How old are you?" once again she opened her mouth but nothing came out instead she held up both of her fingers. The woman smiled.
"That's great! My daughters 10 also, and my little boy's 6." She smiled at the lady and nodded.
The rest of the walk was silent but when they finally reached the house the woman smiled and put Kagome down. She looked around, the house was a light blue and two stories high.
"Now I'm going to warn you my daughter is going to love you so get ready." She gave a wink while Kagome jumped up and down slightly. The lady opened the door and shouts were heard from the other side.
"MOMMY!" The lady walked in and Kagome followed. She suddenly felt nervous. What if they didn't like her? Would the lady send her back? Kagome walked along the shadows; she didn't want to go back. She was happy, even if she just met the lady, she seemed just like her mother.
"Hello Sango, Kohaku! There's someone I want you to meet." She moved out of the way so the kids could see Kagome fully. She waved.
'please like me! I don't want to go back to being alone' The girl squealed before running up to hug her. Kagome breathed a sigh of relief and relaxed. She was safe.
"Oh, mommy! Is she staying! What's her name!" Sango said in a rush before turning towards her mother. Her mom smiled, then frowned.
"She's staying but…I don't know her name." Kagome panicked slightly and looked around.
"But, mommy how could you not know her name!" Kagome saw a pad and pencil and walked over. She smiled before writing her name. Sango walked over and read it before turning to her mother.
"Her name's Kagome mother, Isn't that a pretty name!" her mother nodded and wished Kagome good luck before walking into the kitchen.
"Oh, Kagome! Let's go play with my dolls!" Sango said as she turned on Kagome and started dragging her up the stairs. Kagome followed with a smile; she had a home.
Note: *cringes* ok that was bad, so the next chapter will definitely be in first person! Please keep reading I'll do better I promise, maybe I'll even have the next chapter out today so you can see how a point of view can really affect my writing!
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~Archery-Lover~