This is my first story J please review and tell me what needs to be changed and such!

And sorry about a short chapter one .

I'll try and make longer ones

Enjoy!

Chapter 1 : Heart Broken

A lone Jellicle cat sat upon the highest junk pile he could find, staring up at the moon as it shone through the clouds. He didn't care about the rain that started to fall. He didn't care that his usually fluffed mane was drenched in rain. All he cared about was his brother.

He sadly looked away from the moon and towards the junkyard gate, hoping that he would walk through unharmed…

But no one came.

He sighed heavily and made his was down the junk pile, looking back at the gate, still hoping that his brother would walk through. Still, no one came through.

He slowly waked back to his den, head hung low, ears pressed against his head, defeated. He entered his den and shook he body sending water flying everywhere. He groomed himself dry and fluffed his mane back into place.

He walked over to where his mate, Bombalurina rested. He laid down next to her as quiet as possible and sighed.

"Oh Tugs," Bomba said soothingly, "You worry to much. Munkus will be fine. He's a fighter and I know for sure he won't give in without a fight."

"How do you know for sure Bomba? What if they really hurt him this time? It's always him they're after. Why not someone else? Why him?" Tugger whispered as the tears he held back for so long, began to fall.

Bomba took Tugger's chin and turned his head to face hers.

"Now you listen to me you stubborn big-headed fool, your brother would give up everything in the world to the safety of you and this tribe. Munk will fight until the end. Don't you dare doubt him one second. Every decision nd every move he makes, is for a reason. He has never given up on any one of us. You better not give up on him. He loves you Tugger."

Tugger stared at Bomba's eyes and sniffled. He sighed and laid down beside her and put his arm over her waist and waited for sleep to take over. Before he fell asleep, one last though came to his head:

I hope your alright Munku…Stay strong, I'm coming for you soon.

Again…sorry for the short chapter. I hoped you liked it

I'll try and get the next chapter up A.S.A.P..

And please review J

It would help me a lot!

Beware….next chapter Macavity and Munkus…and maybe even Growltiger….might come in