Hey hey Everyone! You might've seen a common occurrence in other stories I've gone through where there is 2 notes, one on top the other! Don't panic, its just something I do to let you guys know and myself know which chapters have already been re-edited. So, enjoy the fixed-ness!

This is a little something I had decided to write in the back of my school agenda and it turned out to be like, this ten page story. So I decided to type it up on the poll and a lot of people *cough* 4 votes, but that's a lot compared to all the polls *cough* wanted to read this story! So now I'm type'n it up! I hope you enjoy it!

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FOREVER disclaimer!: I do not own the ppgs. a forever disclaimer is when I forever disclaim, for this story and all chapters thereafter, that I do not own so and such. So ya. Enjoy.

Chapter one: Getting to the Sub-Conscious

Brick's POV

"What?" I asked, beyond annoyed.

Right now, I was in my reading hall, which is an actually hall, and my dad's closest servant Butch was bothering me. No doubt thanks to my "Dad".

"Your dad wants you to go torture some demons." he said nervously. Ah, the punishment for being sinful. Problem is, I was born here. Not one chance on heavenly Earth. I picked up my rather large pitchfork. My tail whipped excitedly. I put down my book, the one I've been reading my whole life. It doesn't have a beginning (anymore), doesn't have an end. I went to the main room. It was a big rock-filled room, and I mean big, some areas on fire, and many rock platforms with many things that the demons can work at.

Spinning a big, heavy, wheel that does nothing. Pull on a big, heavy, chain that does nothing. Shove ashes and coal into a big heaping fire that does nothing...ect. And not one thing given to them for their troubles. They don't rest, they don't eat and they are certainly don't drink. I floated down to the Wheel spinning platform.

I watched them anxiously go by, trying their hardest to spin the wheel faster when they reached in front of me. I watched a couple of people go by before, without warning, grabbed someone and threw them over the edge into the fire. Did I mention the platforms are surrounded by a sea of fire? Anyhow, he'd come falling from the black abyss called a sky a couple hours from now anyway. I listened to his blood-curling screams as I floated to another platform.

After burning up a few people on the spot, I went to the Dark Mines. Workers' cries rose above the echoing clanks of pickaxes against indestructible rock. They continued chipping away at the walls, the heat for being in a confined space constantly getting to them, sweat dripping forever off their brow. I looked angrily at the moaning workers. I threw one closest to the entrance of the caves into the fire below. Sadly, that one will be back. I sighed. Then I suddenly realized I could easily go to the Sub-Conscious.

Sub-Conscious is a place not many get to go to. It's where people, who is innocent enough to go to heaven but have done the limit to go to hell, go to try and redeem themselves. If they refuse, I go to meet them. If they do the things that they were sent down to earth for, they go to heaven. I went to my Dad's office door. The only time I saw him was when I was first born, and I don't even remember. No one goes into my dad's office.

"Dad?" I called.

"Yes?"

"I'm going to the Sub-Conscious." I said cautiously.

"Why?" I scoffed. Cuz I wanna...

"Cause someone is up there."

How would he know if I lied? He couldn't know even if he wanted. I get the memos, not him.

"ok."

I got out of there. Real quick. You can easily go to earth from the Sub-Conscious. I don't know why I didn't think of it before. I stopped and hit my head with my hand.

I left my book.

I turned around and went back.

Blossom's POV

"Ok, now everyone, go have fun!" I announced and all the kids I had been reading to ran away to have fun like I told. I walked down the cloudy pathway.

'All these kids came from Earth?'

My dad, known as God, had told me that Earth is like hell, but much closer. Well, not hell. I implied that. He said, people come and go, like a flower in the wind, then disappear without a trace. His "messengers" go down to spread his word, but they also go through sufferings, temptations, joyous things too, but too many negatives for me not to call it hell. So I never really wanted to go down there.

never. Nada. Not once.

Ok, once or twice, but not much more... than three. I just want to see what it's like but daddy said I'm treated like a queen compared to all these angels. And they are treated pretty good. why am I thinking about this? Does it really matter? I would never be able to go.

I walked by the park where all the kids were playing joyfully.

Most- Well, all the kids here don't remember their life on earth. But they seem healthy enough. They don't come with like, scars ripping up their faces, or just gunshot wounds on their chest or a slash. Otherwise, we healed it up for them. I walked into the infirmary. The babies cooed. One out burst in a bout of happiness. I sighed when I realized how bored I was in heaven. I was born in heaven and the light has gotten dim. I wanted to experience life.

Then I was shocked at myself.

'what's wrong with me?'

I'm an angel, lucky- no, blessed to be born in heaven rather than having to go through the dreaded, action packed, exciting, ROMANTIC, TENSE, LIFESTYLE of a HUMAN! I put down the baby I subconsciously picked up. Sub-Conscious? I could go to the Sub-Conscious and go to Earth! Of course I'll already be sorta grown up, but at least I'll get to go! I began to rush away when I realized where I was and where I was going.

I'm in heaven and I'm going to Earth.

My dad. The angels. Me... as a Goddess.... Oh, well. If you don't say anything your not lying or telling the truth. Let the adventure go on! I quickly and quietly opened the door to the Sub-Conscious.

X3. I'm soo silly. This chapter is called "Getting to the Sub-Conscious", but they didn't get there! Tee hee. Well I guess there were getting there...

Sooo plz review and I hope that you like this story and that this story will get popular cuz I worked really hard on it and if you guy could help by like letting other people know of it too if you like it!

PLZ R&R!

Hey! So, anyone re-reading may have noticed I changed it up quite a bit around Brick's part, because I realized babies don't go to hell... they can't. They don't know the difference between right and wrong, and they haven't learned of God to accept or deny him so yea. Had to fix that.

BTW, it is a lie if you don't tell the truth because you're still not telling the truth.

Well I'n done preaching ya'll! Go 'head and R&R!