This is my first fanfic so please be honest and tell me what I need to improve.
Disclaimer:sadly I don't own PJO and any of the characters, I wish. Rick Riordan does.
I was laying on my couch of my cabin, so bored that i start to think about how to don't be bored.
See, Mr. D and Chiron give us the rest of the week as a reward for save Olympus and defeat
Kronos. So there i was in my cabin so bored. When someone knock on my door i was to tired
and bored that i didn't want to get up and see who it was so just shout "come in!" and my only
and beautiful girlfriend enter my cabin.
"hey, seaweed brain!" she said "hi, wise girl" I answer. She lay in to give me a kiss in the cheeks which make me blush a little, Annabeth noticed that and said
"still with the blush problem, seaweed brain?" she tease
"only when i'm around you wise girl" and now was her turn to blush which I couldn't help smile.
" so what's up, Annabeth? What brings you to my bored and lonely cabin?" I ask
"what now I need a excuse to come and see my boyfriend?" she reply with a fake hurt voice. I couldn't help but laugh.
"OK, sorry pretty" I said which make Annabeth blush...again.
"so what are you doing seaweed brain?" Annabeth ask
"not much just here in my cabin bored, tired and lonely" I reply "why do yo want to do something, wise
girl?" i ask.
"well, we are going to play truth and dare at Thalia's cabin. do you want to come?"
she ask.
"yeah why not? it's not like i got a better offer" i said
"OK, we are going to Thalia's cabin after dinner, see you there then?" she ask
" yeah why not? she you there wise girl" I answer and with that Annabeth give me a quick kiss and left my cabin. The time for dinner pass so slow, that i went to Nico's cabin to hang out with him and Grover for a while. I was in the door from Hades cabin and knock, no answer I knock again and still noanswer.
So I open the door slowly and see Nico laying in his bed hearing his Ipod at full volume. He hadn't notice me yet, so i walk slowly to him and scare the Hades out of him. Which end up with him falling from his bed with a big "AAAAAHHH!" and puff Nico hit the floor.
"what my father Percy? you scare me, man" Nico said punching me in the arm, which i found useless,
because of my bath in the Styx. Nico got up and sat on the edge of the bed.
"so 'sup cuz?" he said
"not much, cuz and you?" i ask
"ah not much just here hearing music and chilling, you know the usual" he reply
" yeah i can see that, so you want to do something?" i ask him
"yeah, what you got in mind?" Nico reply
" I was thinking" i was cut off by Nico
"so now you think, gods is the world going to end soon or what?" he said
"hahaha look who decide to start a career as comedian" i said which get me a dead glare from Nico, and believe me there's dead glares and Hades' sons dead glares, and believe me you don't want one from a son of Hades.
"anyways, I was thinking in a prank to ares cabin, if you feel fearless and brave?" i tease him
"yeah, well what the Hades let's do this!" Nico shout, which i found him kind of funny cursing in his dad name.
"OK let's find Grover and start our prank, OK?" i ask Nico
"OK, let's go"
I know it short, but please review and tell me what you think plz and I also accept opinions and ideas. PLEASE REVIEW