So what happens if Fang kidnaps Max? Why? READ AND FIND OUT MY LOVELIES :D

Okay, So I was having a great time with Angel and Nudge at the mall. So. Not. True. My lovely sisters were running around the store squealing while I sat on a bench listening to music.
"MAX! COME TRY THIS ON." Nudge screamed, I sighed and pulled an earphone out from one side of my ear.

"Nudge, I'm gonna go to the toilet for a second, I'll meet you back here alright? Don't go anywhere." I smiled, ruffling her hair before leaving the store. FREEDOM. Hallelujah. I walked around the mall aimlessly. No, I didn't actually have to pee. You try sitting in a store like that. I plugged my earphones back in and blasted my music, ignoring the world, but I had this weird tingly feeling running down my spine. I realized and had come to a pretty much deserted part of the mall, they were rebuilding this section. I turned around and started to walk back when I slammed into something hard, wearing a shirt, that was black, and was tall. And hot.
"Sorry baby." He grinned and his hand flew to my face, covering my mouth. I gasped and smelt the heavy chloroform smell. I swayed on my feet, fighting for pure air. I elbowed him hard and he winced slightly but I could tell I would have a bruise from that either. Funny how I could still think about that while I was being strangled and was gasping for air.

I felt my eyes roll back into my head and hard arms caught me before I fell, damn.

FANGS POV

I had been following her since she set foot in the mall, she matched the description. I had my hood up and kept my distance. She was walking to a deserted part of the mall, You're making it too easy, Maximum Ride. I grinned, following her with ease. Her music was blasting so loud, I could have been riding on an elephant and she wouldn't have noticed me. She reached a dead end and I closed in on her, watching her turn and slam into me. She took in my appearance and I smirked down at her.

"Sorry baby." I grinned and wrapped one arm around her while my other hand held the handkerchief doused in chloroform up to her nose and mouth. She elbowed me hard and I winced, biting back any other signs of weakness and she frowned momentarily. If only I knew what was going on in that head. I watched as she swayed and her eyes rolled back into her head. She fell limp into my arms and I kicked into action. Pulling sunglasses on to her eyes and propping her arm naturally around me so we looked like a regular couple. No biggie. Just a dude with a limp girlfriend. I towed her out the back door of the mall and strapped her into the back seat of my Chevy.

Easy as pie.

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