So why am I updating a story that was finished over a year ago? Well, I consider this my best story, but I went through it and revised it because I'm submitting it for a college program. I've already replaced all the chapters with the revised version, so just go back and read them if you want, and tell me what you think. The only thing I'm sure will be annoying is the unnecessary introductions, such as how I explain the setting in the prologue- well you can't submit fanfiction, so after I updated all the chapters, I changed the characters names and turned it into original fiction.
I hope you all enjoy the revisions, but no, I'm not going through any of my other stories and fixing them up- just this one, my little fanfiction baby! Please, enjoy.