Full Metal Alchemist Fanfiction

Rin: Hi, this is my first fanfiction so please don't blame me if something is wrong I will try to fix it as soon as possible. Arigato!

Ed:Ya or else she'll end up doing something similar to what I would do if you called me...the...the 's' word.

Winry:You mean short?

Ed:WHO ARE YOU CALLING A SPECK WHO CAN'T BEEN SEEN BY A MICROSCOPE!

Winry:(holds up wrench)

Ed:...uh ya...ok never mind...(hides behind Al)

Rin: Thanks Winry

Winry:No problem

Prologe:Bleeding Rain

Edward Elric was kneeling on the wet ground, rain drizzling down smudging the drawing in front of him. Also a limp figure was sprawled out in front of him, ragged breaths came from it's
barly rising chest. Dark liquid slowly spread out from the the person, mixing with the rain.

"P...please Ed...ward, go...he...he'll be back," the figure made an weak attempt to move.
"Don't, please don't talk or move," Ed said softly.

"Don't, I don't care about him I'll just kill him again, and again," Ed took his coat and covered the person, the red fabric torn and bloodied.

"Oh will you runt?" a cold voice rang against the brick walls. "Envy," Edward said, his voice hard and filled with uncontrolled rage. Every part of his being wanting to destroy the figure behind him.

"Killing me won't help your girlfriend Elric, even if you do succeed what will you do after?" the hommunculus cackled evily.

"It may not help her but it can sure as Hell help me!" the blonde boy whipped around and charged at Envy his face scewed up in pure hatred.

He kicked, punched, and lashed out at the hommunculus not even aware at what he was doing, only one though rang in his mind 'kill Envy'. Envy doged and jumped avoiding the meager attacks. An evil smirk plastered on his face, he flipped off the wall and landed a roundhouse on Ed's chest. He slammed into the opposite wall, knocking the breath out of him and leaving him hacking on the concrete.

"This doesn't seem to be doing you much good runt, quite the opposite. To bad, guess I'm going to have to do this without much fun," Envy stalked towards Edward.
"Shut the heck up!" Ed lashed out a sweep that caught the hommunculus in the leg by surprise and he went down. He was on top of Envy in a second punching and kneeing every part of him Ed could reach.

Finally Envy was able to throw Ed off, now both of them were breathing heavily now and blood seeped from the corner of Envy's mouth.

"Not bad, you're getting better but not good enough," the hommonculus snarled they lept at Edward this time, kicking and punching at his head and chest. Slowly Ed was getting pushed back.

"Ha I told you not good enough, now what are you going to do?" Envy had Ed by the throat pinned against the wall.
He struggled against the iron grip, but to no avail, his vision started getting blurry and it felt his an elephant was sitting on his chest.
"No..." Ed's vison go dimmer and dimmer.

"To bad your idiot brother isn't here to watch you fail, oh well you can't get everything you want," Envy cackled again, his hand going back, ready to hit one last time.

"Say good night Elric,".