Hey guys!
Sooo this is my first actual story in english (I usually write in french) I'm actually excited to share it with you even though I am quite scared to hear the critics :S However I'm all open to them and I hope to get many good reviews as well as bad ones :)
So this is just the Prologue to the story and if you guys like it I will start posting the next chapters at a regular pace (I already have 4 chapters written!) So for now I just want some sincere opinions! Also, if anybody can tell me of a very good Beta Reader that would be willing to read and correct my chapters before I post them PLEASE do tell me about them. I desperately need the help as I want the chapters I post to be mistake-less lol (I don't like reading stories with millions of mistakes in them so I don't want to post anything of that taste!) Well! With that said, Lets start with the storyyyy :) (I'm actually scared to read reviews but h*ll i'll give it a chance :) )
EnjOy!
Disclaimer : Most of the characters as you already know belong to the lovely J.K. Rowling. And the ones you don't know are from my little head as well as the story!
Summary : They don't work for the same people... And yet they are partnered up!/ "I'm special agent Malfoy... this is my partner special agent Granger" "Can I drive on the way back?" "No... Oh common Granger you'll get used to my driving eventually" "Would that be before or after we die?"/ They have a mission and no matter their differences they have to bring it to terms. But will they get used to each other eventually before or after one kills the other... OR can they work together after all? DM & HG
PrOlOgue
Her legs crossed in a lady-like manner, Hermione Granger sat on a retired seat near the designed gate for her flight, a book between her long and thin fingers.
As her eyes flickered quickly past the words, she smiled, picturing the scene from the book mentally.
For a minute, her smile widen as she got sucked into this fantasy world where her prince charming would come and take her far away to a beautiful island where they would make love all day long. But she was quickly brought back to reality as a tall figure came to stand right in front of her, causing her to wrinkle her nose as her smile faded away.
"Why Granger if it isn't a pleasure to see you …" said a sarcastic voice belonging to no one else but…
"Malfoy…" Hermione whispered in shock.
For a few seconds, they stared straight into each other's eyes.
"Please tell me you're not going to sit next to me…" she said in an annoyed voice, closing her book quickly and putting it away as he put down what looked like a computer bag on the floor and took a seat right next to her indeed.
"Of course I am Granger… I haven't seen you in about five awful long years I have got to reconnect with you…"
"We never bonded or anything like it Malfoy if I recall…"
"Unnecessary details" he said with a hand gesture, crossing his legs elegantly.
"What do you want…?" she snarled.
"I always knew you were a very slow child…"
He shook his head, much to Hermione's dislike.
"If you're going to sit next to me I'll move it's as simple as that. I don't want anything to do with you…"
"Oh don't be so mean Granger" he smiled. "Aren't you happy to see me?"
"Well… let me think here for a minute… NO!"
With all the arrogance associated to his person, he smirked, taking a moment to stare at her long, skinny legs ending into black classic heels.
"So how have you been?" he asked, taking a magazine and turning the pages without really looking at them.
"Perfectly fine until you decided to ruin my day and come sit next to me" she responded sharply, analyzing him from the corner of her eye.
"Good to know… Where are you going?"
"It's none of your business Malfoy…"
"Always so feisty Granger why oh why…?"
"Because you're an annoying arrogant spoiled little brat maybe?"
"You forgot ridiculously beautiful and irresistible!"
She rolled her eyes, grabbing a magazine and flipping through the pages quite furiously.
"So where are you headed…?"
"I believe I answered that question already."
"You are so stuck up at times Granger" he said in a sigh.
"And you are such an annoyance yourself at times it's sickening. Now Malfoy if you don't mind I want to read my book…"
"Oh… Well go ahead I am not stopping you from what I know… What book were you reading again?"
With a frustrated groan, she closed the magazine sharply.
"Why are you here?"
"Because I want to catch up with you I guess… I don't have anything better to do…" he said pensively.
"Your meaning of catch up more likely means to annoy me and I meant why are you here… in a muggle airport?"
"Gosh Granger be a little bit smarter already! I'm here to take a plane isn't it obvious!"
Narrowing her eyes, Hermione clenched her teeth.
"This I a muggle place Malfoy… you don't belong here!"
"It doesn't say so anywhere Granger and besides since you haven't answered any of my questions so far I most definitely don't see why I should answer yours…"
"Ugh! I forgot how much I hated you Malfoy!"
He lifted his head from the magazine he was holding, a grin on his close to inexistent lips.
"It hurts to see how easily you forgot about me Granger…"
"Yes and I intend to forget about you again as soon as you leave!
"Who said I was leaving?"
"UGH! You Idiotic slytherin!"
"Teacher's pet…"
"Ugly ferret!"
"Bookworm…"
"Elephant face!"
At that, Draco couldn't help but laugh. Who else but Hermione Granger could come up with such ridiculous insults?
Crossing her arms across her chest, she frowned, giving him a severe look.
"You know Granger I've missed our little fights! No one else is better at this than you" he said calming down a bit.
"I most definitely have not missed you Malfoy and with that I shall leave now. Your company sickens me!" She stood up, indeed grateful that the boarding of the plane had started. "Goodbye Malfoy and I hope it'll be another 10 years before I see you again!" she muttered as she walked away, not leaving him the time to respond.
"See you in a few minutes Granger" Draco whispered to himself, smirking as he watched her walk down the aisle in a funny but graceful way.
When she disappeared into the plane, he walked down to the front desk and approached the flight attendant.
"My fiancée is on this plane. Her name is Hermione Granger… Switch her seat to the one next to me in first class" he said handing her his ticket.
"Sir it's going to cost you a lot of money…"
"Money is not an issue. Now do what I asked and have her seated in the next couple minutes… I have very little patience and I could get you fired in the blink of an eye so don't make me wait. Oh and put the extra amount on my account and simply tell her that her ticket has been upgraded or something… no need to mention me it's a surprise…"
"Very well Mr. Malfoy, have a nice flight" the flight attendant said with a petrified look.
"Oh I most certainly will" he answered with a typical 'evil-Malfoy' grin.
Soooo.... :$
What did you think? Is it worth it? Should I keep writing or should I give up? I really just want some honest comments so please let me know what you thought. I know it wasn't much but let me know still I'd appreciate it. And don't forget... If you know of a good Beta Reader that wouldn't mind correcting my chapters (if of course we decide I can keep posting) let me know! So I hope you guys review and tell me what you really think!
Well... That's all for now... Hopefully I'll be back with the first chapter! :)
Smooches,
MrsMalfoy14.