This is not an update but a public apology.
About two weeks before I started writing this story I read the only story with a 11th DoctorxBella pairing and it was amazing. That story is called "Vanilla Twilight" and is written by LaLaLoveIt13.
It was (and still is) so beautiful that I HAD to read more. I was also inspired to write this story. I sent them an email asking for permission to write a similar story with parts of their first chapters. As time passed and got no reply or an update to the story I made the mistake to assume that LaLaLoveIt13 was done with and instead of mailing them again I went ahead and posted my story.
Yesterday night I found out that my email had never been recieved or maybe never sent (as some of my pms have a tendency to do) and LaLaLoveIt13 was in fact NOT okay with my actions and really hurt by it. I cannot blame them.
We have talked and reached a peace between us but I couldn't live with myself if I didn't give them proper credit and a 'thank you' actually because I would propbably have never written this story if it wasn't for them and 'Vanilla Twilight'.
Below are the parts that I used that belong to LaLaLoveIt13 that I either kept as they were or tweaked around and they are part of the the first two chapters of this story.
"The two teenagers let the man down on the floor by the entrance and looked around gaping like landed fish. "Its...it's - its it's its it's" the boy mambled
"Bigger on the inside, yes! Please leave!" The man shouted, pointing to the door.
"What the hell is it?" The girl demanded. The man's face contorted in agony as he leant against a control panel, tapping his fingers against the screen.
"It's a TARDIS - Time And Relative Dimensions In Space.. Why am I telling you this? Leave!" he snarled. The boy reached for the door but then stopped as the girl reached for the man again.
"Are you in pain? Shouldn't you go to a Doc-"
"Listen to me, if you do not get out, RIGHT NOW-" And the, the um... TARDIS,
rolled violently and the man grunted in pain. "Oh, why didn't you leave?" the hissed at the teenagers "Now you're stuck!"
"What do you mean, we're stuck?" The girl asked shrilly. But he did not answer. There was anguish in his eyes as he lifted up his right hand. His hand was once again radiant, small fibers of golden light shimmering around it. He looked into the girl's face suddenly, like he was looking right into her soul and there were tears in his eyes and his whole body began to glow. "I don't want to go" he whimpered. The teenagers looked at each other as the man frowned slightly, took in a shuddering breath and then... He exploded. His limbs shot straight out and bright golden light beamed from his arms and head.
It was so bright that the teenagers had to shield their eyes and there were suddenly tears streaming down their faces in horror. Then there was the sound of shattering glass as the windows of the TARDIS imploded and the pillars shook and one came crashing down. The girl had to leap out the way as fire swelled from the whirling police box. The TARDIS was throwing the teens around like ragdolls but they couldn't tear their eyes away from the sight before them. The shining man collapsed against the control panel and then let out a yell of pain as his body began to change. Change?"
Once again I really am sorry for acting like that and I will do what ever is asked of me in order to fix this.
Kind regards
T1gerCat