Ciao…! ;P

This is my new story, basically where Shane and Mitchie meet over MSN, and you know the rest… if you don't, I'm still not telling… so read and figure it out.

Also this is my first one, so please tell me what you think. I also accept criticism; just don't be too harsh!

Cheers

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My life is dreadfully imperceptible. You'd depart this life just trying to live it. Trust me, from having only two friends at school, Caitlyn Gellar and Sierra Johnson. Parents that cater and own a hardware store, that'd be my mom and my dad. Okay now don't take me the wrong way, I love my parents no matter what. What about my friends? Well they're just like my siblings. They can read me like a book. We stand by each other no matter what we go through. They are just amazing, Caitlyn being the sarcastic, tom boy, and Sierra the geeky kind of. But the intimidators at school can make your life so miserable, that there is no way to portray it.

Okay now that I was done with that I decided to log into MSN, apart from having a few close family and friends there was no other associates. I was getting kind of bored, and was deciding to call Cait, when I received a request.

RockStar33 has added you – ACCEPT / DECLINE

Who was that? I wondered. Nevertheless I accepted.

RockStar33 – hi

This-is-Me – urm, hi… do I know you?

RockStar33 – not really, I just decided to add you? What's your name?

This-is-Me – okay, but how do I know you're not a stalker?

RockStar33 – because I'm not one. BTW you can call me Joseph, but it's not my real name

This-is-Me – okay, well then you can call me Demetria

RockStar33 – nah, I'd rather call you Mitchie ;)

This-is-Me – yeah you just proved yourself a stalker…

RockStar33 – nope, look at your screen name, its Mitchie, Mitchie Torres :D

This-is-me – well, ok!

We chatted for a bit, he told me how old he was, 18, he was from Los Angeles, way across the country, I'm in New York, he had a band with his brothers. The older one 20 was obsessed with birds, and the youngest, who was 16, my age even though I'm turning 17 next month, will be America's next president, in like about 2040. He asked me about my invisibility and why and whatnot. I told him about how Ashley was my best friend, and then she went to some fashion camp called 'Fab Fashion Camp' and came back completely changed.

We conversed a bit more, and subsequently he said he needed to go rehearse with his brothers and we would chat later. He then logged off followed by myself.

"Darling, dinner's ready" my mom called from the kitchen.

"Coming" I yelled and ran down the stairs?

"What we having?" I asked whilst sitting down

"Our world famous Torres burgers."

"Great" I replied sarcastically, but apparently she dint get my sarcasm.

It's not that I don't like the burgers, but working at a burger joint can make you pretty sick of them.

She dished out the food and we began eating silently.

"Honey! Sierra and Caitlyn are coming over tomorrow for a sleep over. They could not get though to you."

"Great mom, Can you please call them, I got no credits in my phone. I'm off to bed. Goodnight!"

"Night darling."

I entered my room, got into my pajamas, and into bed. As soon as I hit the pillow, I fell into deep slumber, dreaming about Joseph, and how he would be like. Hazel eyes, Soft hair and an amazing personality…

And that's the first chapter. How'd you like it so far?

Tell me what you think… Should I keep going? And follow me on twitter if you want spoilers' peeps… ;) twitter = HmSafiya … send in your ideas and I'll surely use them…

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Till the next chappiee…

Love,

Safss

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