Race against time. Max & Fang.

Hey guys, so this is my first fic!

*mini happy dance*

And since I'm a MASSIVE fan of maximum ride… I decided to write a fic on that! Basically if you're a fan you will know that Fang (being an idiot) just left Max and the flock because of the all too perfect Dylan *gives evils*

Yes I know he is cute. But shhh. Anyway, I don't own any of the characters. But I do keep fang and Iggy in my wardrobe

Fang: HELP!

Iggy: LET US OUT

Bwahhahahaha

Fly On.

X

Max.

I have lost him.

He left me here, with only a fricking note to say goodbye. Not a kiss or an explanation. I sit on my messed up bed listening to songs that remind me of him.

But darlin,

You are the only exception

My wings are wrapped around me to stop my insides (mainly my heart of course). My cheeks are stained with the tears I'm crying for that stupid amazing boy. I know it was stupid, I look at the cuts on my arm- I just didn't know what else to do.

Was I not good enough for him? Did he leave because he found someone else, someone who could make better cookies than me? Someone who had more beautiful wings? More tears fall. I keep thinking of him, his perfect figure, and his amazing mysterious, dazzling eyes. The cute little smile which makes my heart beat a thousand times. I don't think I have a reason to live anymore.

The flock would survive without me; they have Angel in my place now. Fang would live, everyone would just move on without me. They are already leaving me behind. Why would they care if I disappeared? You know what; I think I might do it. Something I thought I would never even consider.

I think I'm going to end my life.

Fang.

I left. I can't believe I managed to. I just want to turn around and see her, chasing after me looking beautiful – like an angel. But she has no clue where I am. I've never felt so alone. I just want to turn around and fly back home to her, my one true beautiful love. Who cares if we die soon? At least we will be together when the apocalypse happens. We can hug each other and tell the other that it'll be ok.

You know what?

Screw Dylan – I'm going back.

Max

Thank god they all went flying. Otherwise Angel would know my plan. I can't believe I'm picking up the knife we usually use to carve a chicken and I'm going to use it to kill me. Tears keep falling- I'm scared. But the pain will go. I head for Fangs room. I open the all too familiar door. It creaks like it always did, his room is still covered in posters of random bands I've never heard of. I sit on his bed. I take a breath and hold the knife up and close my eyes. I'm ready.

Fang

I fly back, quicker than I ever have before. I suddenly hear Nudge;

"IGGY THAT HURT!" Nudge shouts at Iggy who I can see coming towards to me. He grins a little smile realising it's me.

"FANG!"

I smile, it's my family. They are all here… or are they?

"Hey Iggy, where's Max?" I ask. Not that I don't want to see him, I just need to find her. To make sure she's safe.

"Back at the house, we left her crying to music."

That stung. How will I make up for the hurt I've caused? I say thanks and head home, 2 more minutes to go. I will see her.

Suddenly I hear a scream- coming from the house, MAX!

Max

I push the knife into my stomach. I scream out in pain. God that hurts like hell! WHY DID I DO THIS STUPID THING? I lie on the bed, in pain- more pain than before, I cry wishing Fang was here. Then you never guess what…He was standing right in front of me.

"Max, Why?"

Silent tears fall down his cheek whilst he takes out the knife from my stomach. He kissed my dry lips and I looked up at him.

"Because there was no point of life without you."

I reply softly since I'm loosing my strength, fast. What do I do? He came back. Why couldn't he have been 2minutes early?

He takes hold of my hand.

"I'm going to call an ambulance."

He took out his phone; he explained what was going on to a random person on the other end of the phone. They were on their way It was a race against time, my time was nearly over.

The flock returned a minute later. They headed for the room all excited. Then they saw me. I never felt so bad and selfish. Their faces made me cry harder. Fang held onto me, murmuring that everything was going to be ok. But I didn't know whether to believe him this time. The ambulance turned up as I closed my eyes.

Fang

"DON'T YOU DARE CLOSE YOUR EYES MAXIMUM RIDE!"

I screamed at her, I kissed her on the lips and started CPR. One, Two, Three breathe. The paramedics rushed in, she was still alive, barely though. They put her on the weird moving bed and took her to the ambulance. I jumped in with her. The machine went quiet. She was gone.

Max

It is weird. I'm looking down to see Fang cry, why is he crying? Look I'm here HELLO?

Then I see what he is crying next to, it's me. Well a pale dead me that is. Guess I had been a right darn idiot. I saw my family- my flock come out and hug fang. All in tears. Why had I been so stupid?

Why had I let my emotions over rule me?

God Fang- I'm so sorry.

The end.

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