Heres the story now revised.! The plot is completely different now tell me what you think of it.!
7 Years...
A year since Shes been in a coma.
2 Years since They took her from his base.
3 years Hes been training.
4 years since he talked to her.
5 and 6 years since hes killed him.
7 years since hes found out his brothers true purpose, and they were born..
All together His life has been nothing but grief and hell all in one. A now 20 year old Sasuke Uchiha sat in the corner of a room.
'Madara Uchiha..' Ran through his mind. 'Itachi didnt mean the things he said.. He had no other choice..' His words rang through Sasukes head. For the tenth time today he looked over to a bed. 'The Elders ordered him to kill them..' 'Our clan lived a lie in the Leaf..' Sasuke shook the words from his head when he heard the door open. It was no one but the usual Karin coming to bother him. Karin was a woman with red hair glasses and a bad attitude. She was recruited on his team 6 years ago.
"Sasuke-kun.! Come on.! Shes not going to wake up anytime soon. Lets go.! We have another assignment.!" She exclaimed. Sasuke glared at her for her choice of words. Karin swallowed.
"First you should keep your mouth shut about things you dont know. Two ill come when im ready." He growled angrily.
"A-alright but dont say shit when he comes to bother you." She walked out with an attitude. Ever since she came along, Sasukes been colder to her. She hated it.
"Hey move.!"
"No you move.!"
"Shutup stupid.!"
3 Figures ran past Karin pushing her out of the way. 'Lousy brats..' She thought with much hatred toward the three children. She huffed and walked back to the rest of Team Hebi.
"You guys know we have to be quiet when we come and visit." A young girl with Carrot top hair said. She had red eyes and was very smart.
"Yeah i know Jun." Said another girl with gold hair that was in pigtails. She had blue eyes and was very sweet.
"Hn. Whatever." Said another girl with black hair. She had green eyes and was very tough.
All girls looked to be seven years of age. But dont be fooled. They come from two powerful clans.
Sasuke sighed.
Wait Sasuke sighed.
Yeah.! He did and smiled.?!
Yeah he did.!
Why.?
Because his children were entering...
Yeah Children.
"Hey dad." They said in a union while walking to there mothers bed. Sasuke nodded to them and watched as they prayed for the mother. The memory was still fresh in his mind..
FlashBack
"Sasuke.." A feminine voice whispered. She was tall with beautiful blue eyes and long raven hair. She stood in front of him with tears that she hasn't shed in 5 years.
"Kagome.. What is it.?" He asked in concern. Over the past years since shes been with Wise man Sasuke has managed to slip away from training and visit her secretly.
She backed away from him slightly. Afraid of his reaction.
"Hes ready for the body transfer.." He was about to say something when she continued. "I can take care of it but.. we have another problem.."
Sasuke focused on her answer. What could the problem be.?
"I-im P-pregnant..." She stuttered. Sasuke eyes widened in shock.
End of Flash Back
A few days later word spread out that Naraku was killed by his apprentice and her and some friends were traveling looking for Sasuke Uchiha. A few days after he found she carried his children.
9 months later Jun, Juna, and Junene came along.
A year after that Kagome went into a coma from a blow to the head while killing her sister. She was due to wake up soon.. But some doubted her ability to wake. He didnt give up though neither did his children.
"Dad. Madara Sent us to tell you that we are suppose to attend a mission with you." Jun said. She was the Carrot top.
Juna, the blond, and Junene, The raven haired nodded. Sasuke snapped his head toward them.
"When did he say that.?"
"After he knew sending Karin wouldnt work." Juna said.
"No." He said.
"Hn. (Dont blame us when he comes in making racked when moms asleep.)" Junene said.
"Hn. (I wont let that happen.)" Sasuke said back smirking at his youngest daughters attitude.
"Hn. (Whatever.)" She said smiling.
"I really wish you guys wouldnt do that.!" Jun and Juna said. There conversation was getting irritating. Sasuke laughed a little and walked out with his kids. Not before glancing at Kagome one more time..
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