Me: It's my first fic so be nice. I accept critics.

Fang: You smell bad.

Me: shut up fang.

Fang: you said you accepted critics

Me: I meant on the Fic

Fang: oh okay I'm going to get some juice

Me: can you bring me some?

Fang: No

Me: if you don't bring me some I'll poke you with a pencil all day.

Fang: okay I'll get you some. Just say the disclaimer.

Me: alright, I don't own Max ride JP does. Okay, now I said it so go get me some juice.

Fang: *shrugs*

----MAX POV----

"Bye Ella see you in a week" I shouted out the front window of the car to my half sister "miss you already"

"bye " she shouted back just as Jeb was pulling away.

Okay yeah for those that don't know me, my names Maximum Ride, Max for short, I'm 14 and my parents just got a divorce and for that I can only visit my mom and half sister on the weekends. For now I get to go live with Jeb (my biological father- he doesn't deserve to be called that) in Calsville (A/N don't really know if it exists it just a fic) a little town in the middle of nowhere.

"Cheer up Maximum and look at the bright side" Jeb smiled at me "you'll get to meet new friends"

"Easy for you to say" I muttered. "Where's Ari?" Ari is my 7 year old half brother.

"He's at the neighbors playing with Gabriel Kendall" (A/N Gabriel is Gazzy)

"Oh" was all I could say.

We didn't talk the rest of the way to my new life so I thought about home. I had broken up with Sam even though I was planning to do that months ago. I had left my puppy Total at home and I left my best friends to face school alone. Life sucks.

I slept the other half of the ride and when I woke we were entering the small town of Calsville, yeah the town was small but it had its mall and it was close to a beach suddenly I had a bit of hope. Living here wouldn't be that bad.

Wait for it, wait for it.

We turned a few blocks later and entered a privet area for snotty rich people and guess what Jeb is a scientist so he is rich that's why we live here. We rounded another corner till we got to a mansion that looked like a miniature white house.

"That's the house" Jeb said "The top floor is all yours so decorate it however you want" he said as he parked in front of the house.

I got out and took my bags from the back. I didn't have much but I liked it that way. I got to the front door and there was a little girl playing with a bear dressed like an angel. She looked up making her curls jump up and down.

"You must be Maximum" she smiled angelically taking her and out for me to shake. "I'm Ariel Kendall but call me Angel"

I shuck hands "Call me Max"

"Mommy wanted to ask you to have dinner with us" she smiled "the Stevens and the Johnson's will be there to"

"We'd love to go" Jeb answered before I could say no "Wouldn't we Maximum"

"Yeah sure" I smiled at Angel.

"See you in a few hours" Angel said and skipped off home.

When she was out of sight I glared at Jeb "why did you say yes? You know I'm not going"

"It'll be fun so go unpack take a quick shower and put on a dress" my mouth opened in shock did he just say dress. "Don't look at me with that face, its formal so you have to wear a dress"

"One problem I don't own a dress" I muttered entering the house.

"Monique Johnson wanted you to be welcome here so she bought you a dress" he smirked "the box is on your bed"

"Ugh" I grumbled running up to my room and shutting the door whit a loud thud. I ran to my queen sized bed and fell face first. "Why me?" I grumbled.

A few minutes later I got of the bed and unpacked putting pictures on the desk and setting my laptop on the bed, I didn't bother to look at the dress. I was planning to escape when I had the chance. There was a knock on the door.

"Max it's me" I knew that voice anywhere. I ran to the door and picked Ari up. "Max put me down" he laughed. I kissed both his cheeks and put him down.

"I missed you so much" I hugged him. "What have you been up to?"

"Playing X-Box 360 with Gazzy and Iggy" he smiled at me. He had grown so much since the last time I saw him. "You ready yet?"

"Let me guess Jeb sent you to make sure I didn't run off. Didn't he" I asked a little annoyed ruffling his brown hair. He nodded "Well I'm not going" I crossed my arms.

He looked at me with his green bambi eyes "Come on Max it'll be fun" why did Ella have to show him how to use the bambi eyes. "Please"

"Fine I'll go" I pushed him out of my room "I need to take a shower so leave." I closed the door "I'll be out in a few minutes"

I sighed and went to open the box hoping at least that it wasn't pink. Inside was a black knee high strapless dress, it hand a white belt at the waist. I didn't want to admit it but it was okay. I took a quick shower and put the dress on.

I combed my hair and brushed my teeth. I didn't have heels or pretty shoes, so I put on my black converse and it looked nice.

"Max time to go" Jeb shouted from downstairs "We don't want to be late"

"Coming" I yelled.

I grabbed my cell and ran down the stairs two by two. Ari was wearing formal pants and a nice white dress shirt and Jeb looked exactly alike. Jeb went to the door and opened it. "Let's go"

It was only a few houses away so we walked. The house looked like ours but it was much bigger and it had a great view to the beach. Ari ran and rang the door bell waiting for them to answer.