Poem I wrote to describe how Chad feels....please read and review!

Sunshine

When days are rough when skies are gray

When pain and anguish won't go away

When times are hard and smiles are fake

May your heart be there for me to take

When the sunshine comes the sky instantly clears

When hopes are insight, gone are the fears

Someone to count on, someone who cares

Someone to lean on and wipe away tears

I'll be waiting when you need a shoulder to cry on

I'll be here when your sunshine is gone

I'll be the one who stays with you through thick and through thin

I'll be cheering you up when someone gets under your skin

I'll give you a hand when you fall on your face

I'll be lifting you up, when you've fallen from grace

I'll be the one praying that you open your eyes

I'll be your sun when you're shining in someone else's sky.

My english teacher gave me a c+ T.T

She said it was unoriginal....but then again she's a grade 12 teacher and I'm in grade 8 so who cares

Anyway please review and tell me what you think!