Well my other story went down the drain, sadly, but heres a new story that came to me. I hope you guys like this, talks bout light and dark jak coming out of jak everytime Jak falls asleep.

The winds were calm in the wasteland, a rare sight indeed. All around the sand sat still, reflecting the green sun that shone out tonight; it was a new moon. Out, deep into the wasteland right near the city ruins, a dark void appeared out of nowhere. Taking a humanoid shape, a creature of pure dark eco began to emerge. Dark eco began to crackle around the still night emitting from the creature as another void of pure light appeared not to far away. The dark eco started to disperse, and the creature started to move, at first cracking its neck, then cracking its back. The white void began to take shape too into a humanoid shape, light eco emitting from it casting long shadows against the wastelands.

The dark eco stopped stretching and stared at the light eco with disgust. It stood and waited for the light eco to stop shining as the creature of pure light eco began to move and walk forward. The dark eco creature watched as the light eco creature stretched and turned to dark eco creature, a hint of confusion on his face.

"Is, is this what it's like?" the light eco creature asked in a holy voice. The dark eco creature nodded.

"Every time our host, he who calls himself Jak, falls asleep, we are free to escape his body and become our own entities, free to do what we want without having Jak control us." Dark Jak explained with a raspy voice as Light Jak checked his body out.

"When did you figure out you can achieve this?" Light Jak asked.

"The very night they created me. I remember finding myself stuck inside that young boys mind, and wanting out. So when they threw him in his cell and he knocked out, I remember trying and found myself outside his cell, watching him as he slept. I decided to have a little fun and run amuck around the prison, beating up guards and sabotaging anything in my wake. But I found, a disadvantage to all my fun. Every time the boy woke, I was sent back into the recesses of his mind. But every time he fell asleep I escaped again, enjoying whatever sweet liberty I had, even though it was just for a handful of hours at a time."

"So we have till sunrise until we are sent back to him?" Light Jak asked as he spread out his wings and flapped them a bit.

"Maybe even less," Dark Jak said as he cracked his fingers, letting some dark eco crackle out, "all I know is, enjoy this limited freedom, just don't do anything to hurt yourself. Whatever wound you suffer now will appear on our host."

He turned to walk away, only to stop at the sight of a few red cars driving strait at them. He sighed and shook his head, telling Light Jak over his shoulder, "Also, watch out for these idiots, they mess with you any chance they get,"

Dark Jak leaped into the air, dark eco crackling from his fist as he pounded the ground, letting a dark shock wave strait towards the cars, destroying them on impact. He stood up, panting a bit as he turned to Light Jak.

"And when ever your eco starts to deplete, head over to the monk temple, there they'll treat you like a Deity and help you," he said walking toward the beach. Light Jak stood there confused. He shook his head and flapped his wings, calling out to him, "Wait!"

Dark Jak stopped as Light Jak landed in front of him, looking at him with suspicion. "All these months you've been against me inside Jaks head, but now you're willing to help me get out, even give me some pointers on what to do out here, why the sudden change of heart?"

"Because the difference between inside Jaks head and out here is that out here I don't have to be stuck with you everywhere I go!" Dark Jak snarled as he took a few steps forward, causing Light Jak to put up his Light Shield in defense. Dark Jak smirked, "I see you don't even trust me out here,"

"And how can I trust a creature of pure dark eco? You defy what the Precursors, my creators, wanted for this world!" Light Jak retorted as Dark Jak began to walk past him. Dark Jak stopped in his tracks; dark eco began to spark out of his body as he turned quickly and rushed toward Light Jak in a flash, knocking him back into a sand dune as he stared at him.

"Don't you dare mention those worthless gods you all your creators! They created me too if you haven't noticed, their very essence runs through me as through you!" he snarled taking a few steps forward to Light Jak who got up quickly. Wasting no time, Light Jak got on one knee and clapped his hands, sending out a flash of white eco around him. Dark Jak watched as Light Jak got up and quickly made his way toward him. He dodged the kick he tried to land on him but was quickly met with faster punches, each coming from a different direction. Getting angry, he crouched and jumped up, spinning and letting put dark eco arks toward Light Jak, who stopped and let up his eco shield, stopping the arks.

Dark Jak stopped and landed, his eyes locked onto Lights. He snarled at him as he rushed forward, dark eco crackling from his hand. Light eco did the same, light eco shining from a sphere in his hand as he rushed toward Dark Jak. Their attacks collided, causing a shock wave of dark and light eco to go out into the still wastelands. Sands whipped up along with the shock wave, causing a small sandstorm to go out. In the middle of the mess stood Light and Dark Jak, both of them panting but eyes locked on each other, glaring into each other's essence. Dark Jak stood up, clearly exhausted.

"I forgot how powerful you really were," he said, turning around and walking away, calling out behind him, "but I will get more powerful,"

"Wait!" Light Jak called out to him, making him stop in his tracks again, "all this fighting and I don't even know your name,"

Dark Jak smirked, turning around and stating simply, "I'd like you to call me Gol, It is a name that Jak deeply regrets for some reason and through his memories, and I find him just like me. What is yours?"

"I'd like you to call me Mar, for he is the Light savior of our planet." Light Jak said standing proudly. Dark Jak smirked again.

"Very well Mar, I shall see you back at Jaks once he wakes up, until then, have fun,"

Yea, I wanted to end with a cliffhanger but I couldn't think of anything, haha
but I hope you like this new Idea I got going,