HI!!!

This is my first official fanfic, so DON'T BE RUDE AND FLAME!!!!

Okay, this fic was written by The Beautiful Namine13, animalluver107, and me on Gaia Online. We'd love comments on our story; criticism too. Just NO FLAMING!!!

Enjoy!!!

Holly ran through the darkness again, trying to find an exit. She had been there ever since her world was destroyed. Her homeland was a peaceful place, but when the Heartless got onto it, everything just faded. Even though in the confusion, Holly had somehow gotten an odd key-shaped weapon, she herself had faded from her world, and ended up in this place, where there only seemed to be eternal black. She didn't know how long she had been in there. It felt like only a couple of days.
"Damn it...where's the light?" Holly yelled again. Of course, no one answered her. She sat down to rest, and drew out her blade. It was silver, with a black chain around the base. She had no idea what the real name of the key-shaped weapon was, but she had given it a name of her own: Lost Hope.

After a moment, Holly started walking again. She knew that if she didn't the Heartless would be upon her again. They usually followed her, and on the first day they had swarmed around her, and she had barely defeated them.
Holly then caught a gleam of light in the corner of her eye, and raced toward it, not caring where it led. "An exit!!" She yelled happily.

She passed through the light, and her next sensation was one of falling. She closed her eyes, happy to feel the wind on her face. She then felt the cold sting of water. She opened her eyes, and went to the surface, gasping for air. She looked around.

It seemed that she was on a small tropical island, and some people were standing on the shore.

There were two men, one had brown hair, and wore black clothes, the other had silver hair, and wore a white and yellow jacket, with blue jeans. There was also a girl with them, with red hair, and a pink dress, and three animal-like companions. One looked like a duck, and was dressed in blue, the one looking like a dog was clad in green, and the mouse-like figure was dressed in red. "Um..who are you, and where am I?" She asked.

Jesse turned to see that more heartless were chasing her. "What the hell do you want with me?" Jesse screamed. Jesse stopped. She looked back to the weapon, which had appeared in her hand, like Jesse owned it. Jesse looked up and walked backwards, not even realizing that light was behind her, and fell through.

Why does everything bad happen to me? My parents are gone, my best friend is missing, and now I'm being chased by heartless. And what the heck is this thing?

Jesse looked to the weapon that was pure black, only with the small white gemstone at the top. Jesse named it Dark Abyss, thinking about her own friends and her family.

She closed her eyes. Everything will be fine, as long as I find Holly. Maybe, just maybe she could help me. Jesse opened her eyes, and she was lying on a dark beach. Water splashed on her arm, and the feeling of warmth washed over her.

"Am I dead?" Jesse asked aloud.

"If you're dead, then so am I." She turned to see a figure in all black.

Maria was growing tired of all the dark creatures that were attacking her.

They were annoying, but dangerous at the same time. They were the same creatures that had attacked her home, her family, and her friends. She missed her family and friends and running through swarm after swarm of those creatures didn't help her situation. But she knew she couldn't go home until it came back.

And she wanted answers to why everything happened.
She saw another group coming toward her and saw the strange, key-shaped weapon that popped into her hand every time the little black creatures came near her come to her. It was a dark blue blade with little silver dots on the blade and a silver handle and chain. She started to call it Nightfall, thinking of the night sky every time she looked at it. Maria swung the blade at every little creature she could see, feeling great when she made contact with one.
Suddenly, a bright light appeared in front of her. All the little creatures disappeared at the sight of it. What a relief,she thought as she stepped into it. It was a warm and welcoming light. Maybe I can find the reason for why my home disappeared.She then let herself fall asleep in it.
When Maria woke up, she found herself sleeping in the middle of a town. There were people watching her, probably worrying about her. She got up and dusted herself off. Time to look around,she thought as she sighed.

Today is not going so great.

So, What do you think?

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