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After a few years Ino and Naruto continued dating, they broke up a few times but always managed to get back together. During Mougi and Konohamaru wedding Naruto realized that it would be a good idea to propose to Ino, especially when Ino caught the bouquet.

One week Ino left on a mission to deliver a scroll with Shikamaru, Choji, and Yamato. Naruto and Ino had been dating for a few years and their anniversary was coming up. Naruto thought this would be the perfect time to pop the question.

Naruto decided to go to the ring shop. With him he brought one of Sakura's rings. Naruto knew she and Ino wore the same size in most everything and that included rings.

Once Naruto entered the store he handed the ring to the clerk, "Um I'm looking for an engagement ring in this size."

The clerk examined the ring, "Sizes ten, alright, follow me." The clerk walked down the sections of rings. "Here are the size ten engagement rings." The clerk pointed to a section in the glass containing rings each one different from the one next to it.

Naruto eyes widened, "Wow look at all the rings."

The clerk looked at him. "Just tell me when your ready." He set Sakura's ring on the counter and went back to the cash register.

"Now which one would Ino like best?" Naruto mumbled to him. Each ring looked brilliant.

Naruto sighed. "I should have brought Sakura with me she would know" Then Naruto's eye caught sight of a platinum in the corner. It had a purple diamond (yes there are purple diamonds in this story) in between two small diamonds. "THATS IT!"

The clerk walked over to Naruto. "Have you found the one you like?"

Naruto nodded with a grin. "Can I see that one in the corner." Naruto pointed to the one he knew was perfect. The clerk smiled and handed the ring to Naruto. Naruto examined the ring and smiled. "How much is this one?" The clerk walked back to the register and punched in some numbers. He came back with a slip of paper while taking the ring back. Naruto looked at the small sheet. "WHAT YOU CAN'T BE SERIOUS!"

Tsunade walked by the ring shop on her way back to the office, after picking up some more sake, and stopped hearing Naruto's voice. "Naruto?"

Shinzune followed behind. "Tsunade-sama where are you going?"

Tsunade entered the shop to see Naruto sulking on the counter while the clerk tried to get him to stop leaning on the it. "Naruto what are you doing?"

The clerk turned to the hokage. "Hokage-sama!"

Naruto looked up. "Baa-chan."

The clerk instantly bowed. "It's an honor to have you here." Tsunade nodded.

Tsunade walked up to Naruto. "Naruto what are you doing here?"

Naruto looked at her. "Well I came here to buy Ino an engagement ring for Ino."

Shizune face lit up and Tsunade smiled. "Which one where you thinking?" Naruto pointed to the small ring that was protected by the glass.

"Are you going to get it for her?" Tsunade asked.

Naruto shook his head. "I cant its too expensive."

Tsunade smiled and set her hand on Naruto's shoulder. "I think its perfect for her." Naruto smiled as Tsunade turned to the clerk. "He'll be taking this ring." All three, Naruto the clerk and Shizune, looked at Tsunade with confused faces. "Just go ahead and put it on my bill."

Naruto looked up at her. "Wait, but I can't if you bought it I-"

"It's the least I can do after all you have done for this village and myself." The Hokage said cutting him off.

She smiled at him, and Naruto smiled back at her. The clerk took the ring gave it a quick polish before setting it in a small purple velvet box.

"Thanks." Naruto said as he was given the box. Naruto gratefully took the small box. Naruto walked out of the shop with a giant ear to ear grin on his face.

Shizune smiled then her smile faded as she turned to Tsunade. "Tsunade do you realize you just increased your debt?"

Tsunade smiled as they left the store. "Yes." Shizune stared at Tsunade as she continued speaking. "But it's the least I can do for him." Shizune smiled until Tsunade got an devious smirk on her face. "And besides I just take him out gambling with me." Shizune rolled her eyes as Tsunade laughed. "You remember what happened last time? I came out with twice as much as I came in with. Thanks to that boy I'm almost out of debt." Shizune continued listening as Tsunade's smile became soft as she stared at Naruto as he walked down the road. "And he's done a greater job of protected this village then I have...he's going to make one hell of a hokage." The Hokage and her assistant continued back to their first destination.

The next day Naruto woke up to the sound of his alarm. "Ah stupid alarm I was having such a good dream." Naruto sat up and turned off the alarm. "Ino and I were sitting at Ichiraku's and we were the only ones there and Ino told me she couldn't wait another second and told me that she would make my wildest fantasies come true and then we...wait who am I even talking to?" The blonde boy stood up. "Why did I set my alarm again... oh right I need to go talk to Yamanaka-san about proposing to Ino."

Naruto then took a shower got dressed and when he was about to leave he stopped at the door. "The ring." He ran back to his bedroom and grabbed the velvet box that sat on the table. He opened it giving it one last look before placing the box in his pocket and running out the door.

Naruto walked up to the Yamanaka house he swallowed hard. Inoichi was not someone you wanted to get mad. and even now, after knowing him all these years, Naruto still got freaked out when he saw the older blonde. He was unsure of how Inoichi would react to Naruto's news.

*******NARUTO'S DAYDREAM*******

The blonde knocked on the door and swollowed hard. Inoichi came to the door with a half smile on his face. "Uzumaki."

Naruto looked at the tall man. "Hello Yamanaka-san I wanted to ask you something."

Inoichi nodded and let Naruto in his house. Naruto sat on their couch Inoichi sat across from him. "So what did you want to ask me?"

Naruto smiled and made eye contact with the sandy blonde, trying to get on his good side, but even staring in his eyes Naruto felt like his was in an endless pit of torture.

Naruto then broke the silence and the tension. "I would like to have your blessing to marry your daughter Ino."

Inoichi looked calm, "Marry Ino?" He said it with disgust in his voice.

Naruto nodded becoming nervous. "Yes sir."

Inoichi then ran over and grabbed Naruto by his collar and threw him against the wall. Naruto tried to recover but before he could Inoichi began pounding him and beating the crap out of him. Naruto couldn't fight back he was going so quick, not even Kuuybi would help him. Inoichi made replications of himself and all of them began punching and kicking Naruto to the ground until he was dead. "NO YOU ARE NOT GOING TO MARRY MY PRINCESS!"

Naruto then saw his funeral. Everyone was crying, Ino wore no make up as she sobbed for her love Naruto. Inoichi set his hand on his crying daughters shoulder. "Its ok Ino no body could stop him from eating all those bowls of ramen. And no one knew his stomach would explode." Inoichi lied.

Ino began to stop sobbing. "You're right, thank you father." Everyone else stopped crying as well then left his funeral to go have free ramen.

*******FIN*******

Naruto shook his head at the thought. "I can't do this."

His thoughts fought back, "Oh yes you can, and you are."

"No I can't he will kill me."

"Do it for Ino."

"No I'm telling you I can't."

"Yes you can."

"Can't."

"Can."

"CAN'T!"

"CAN!"

Naruto turned away form the house about to leave until he heard some on call his name. "Uzumaki." Naruto turned around to see Inoichi standing at the door. "Naruto I thought I heard your voice. What are you doing here? At this time in the morning I would think you would be asleep."

Inoichi laughed and Naruto gave a fake laugh before answering, "Actually I came to ask you something."

Inoichi looked at Naruto as he nodding. "Sure come on in." Naruto walked and entered the house he had been in so many times.

Inoichi slapped his back. "So naruto my boy, how have you been?" Naruto felt the pain from Inoichi's five star begin to throb.

Naruto held in the pain though "G-good sir."

"Why don't you go have a seat in the living room so we can talk."

Naruto nodded as he walked towards the room. He had been inside Inoichi's house plenty of times but he began to take notice of all the different weapons and items Inoichi had lying around. "Oh crap does he know what I'm going to ask?! He could kill me with any of these!" Naruto walked in the living room and sat on the couch.

Inoichi looked into the room where Naruto sat. "Hey Naruto you want anything to drink?"

"No thanks I'm good."

Inoichi came back in the room carrying a small cup of tea. "So Naruto what did you want to ask me?"

Naruto stared at the large man as he set down his tea "Well..." Inoichi began cracking his knuckles Naruto learned that that had become a habit of his. "Is this really the best time?" Naruto swallowed a hard lump in his throat before continuing. "Ino and I have been together for a while now and I know I'm in love with her..." Naruto felt Inoichi's eyes glare at him. He didn't want to see those torturing eyes before he sighed and continued. "And I know this is a huge life changing commitment that I can never go back on...but I would like to marry Ino."

Inoichi stared at Naruto for a minute he paused and inhaled. "Alright-"

Naruto expecting him to say 'no' continued to talk and tell that he understood what he was doing. "I know that this is a huge decision and I'm ready and I know Ino is the one for me and I want to spend the rest of my life with her and I understand it wont be easy but I'm willing to accept that because I really love her-"

"Naruto I said it was alright if you marry her."

Naruto stared wide eyed at him. "Huh?"

Inoichi chuckled at Naruto's confused face. "I trust you Naruto and I can tell that Ino is happy with you."

Inoichi stood up Naruto became nervous. Inoichi walked over to the younger blonde and sat down next to him. "Naruto I trust you. And I've seen how much you care for the people in this village...and your friends... especially Ino. I can tell that she's never been happier with anyone in her life. I also know that you will and do make my daughter happy."

Naruto looked at the man with confused yet happy eyes Inoichi stared at him with confused eyes as well. "What is it son?" Inoichi had called Naruto 'son' plenty of times before but the way he said it this time was with fatherly love different from the past times.

"I just wasn't expecting you to say yes that quickly."

Inoichi glared at Naruto. "Well would you rather I say 'no' and pulverize you for even thinking that?" Naruto swallowed hard Inoichi laughed before slapping Naruto's back again, Naruto was in pain but he tried to hide it.

"Well honestly I had been thinking of this day and what would happen I tried to think of how I would react and who it might be. Its safe to say I bet neither of us expected this to happen...and just last year until this year I thought of how I would react with you asking...and thinking of all that has happened with this village and with you I couldn't have been happier with my daughters choice and I couldn't have asked for a better son-in-law." Naruto smiled with no confusion just joy.

Naruto thought of his happy life with Ino their engagement their wedding their-Inoichi's hand slapped the blondes back again nearly causing him to fall over. "NARUTO!" Naruto looked at him with startled eyes. "You may want to pay attention." Naruto knew he was going to be sore by the end of the day but it was worth it.

"So when where you planning on asking her?" Inoichi continued.

Naruto's hand reached inside his pocket and stroked the velvet box. "Next week during our anniversary." Inoichi smiled as Naruto continued, "I brought you the ring so you could see it."

Naruto took out the purple velvet box and handed it to the Yamanaka. Inoichi opened the box and smiled. "She'll love it Naruto." Naruto smiled as Inoichi took one last look at his daughter's engagement ring before shutting the box and handing it back to Naruto.

Inoichi stood up again, Naruto stood up as well. "Well goodbye Yamanaka-s-" "Inoichi, call me Inoichi."

Naruto smiled and nodded as he stuck out his hand to shake Inoichi's. "Alright goodbye Inoichi."

Inoichi shook Naruto's hand. "Goodbye son. Ill see you around. And Ill keep this a secret from Ino." Inoichi slapped Naruto's back.

"Ow how many times it that? Four?" Naruto thought.

Naruto left Inoichi's house and began to walk towards his own. Once he was a while away he slumped over and began rubbing his back as he walked. "Ow I know Inoichi didn't mean to but my back is killing me." Naruto continued walking until he walked passed the hospital. "Maybe Sakura can do something to stop my back from hurting."

Naruto walked up right into the hospital. The nurse at the counter looked up. "Oh Naruto-sama its you."

Naruto gave the nurse a warm smile. "Do you know if Sakura is here?"

The nurse nodded and looked at a clip board. "Yes Sakura-sempai here she's in her office she should be free."

"Thanks." Naruto said before he began to walk to his friend's office.

Naruto walked to the pink haired medic's office. Once he got there he opened the door while knocking. ''Hey Sakura-chan do you think you can help me?"

Naruto walked in as Sakura looked up from a file. "Oh sure Naruto. What's up?"

He shut the door. He sat on the sterol table. "I just got back from visiting Inoichi and my back is killing me."

The pink haired woman sighed. "Ok Naruto let me see."

Naruto removed his orange jacket and threw it on a near by chair. Naruto then removed his netted shirt revealing his well toned body. Sakura saw the four large prints on her blonde friends back she sighed, "Alright Naruto what did you do this time. Did you tell him your fed up with Ino and you were breaking up with her?"

Naruto laughed. "No. Do think I would still be alive if I did?"

Sakura laughed with him, "No but you could have gone Kuuybi on him and gotten out of there before he could do any real damage."

They both cracked up at the thought. Once Naruto managed to catch his breath he responded. "No I would never do that. I love Ino."

Sakura knew this and had seen how happy they were together. "Ok then what Ill bite."

Naruto smiled and looked over at his jacket. "I went to ask Inoichi if I could marry Ino." Sakura froze and tried to remember how to breath. "Sakura? SAKURA-CHAN!"

Sakura snapped back to reality and breathed a deep breath. "You what?!" "I went to-" Sakura slapped his back. "NARUTO THAT'S GREAT! WHAT DID HE SAY? DO YOU HAVE THE RING? CAN I SEE IT?"

Naruto winced and let out a whimper in pain. Sakura's slap was twice as hard as Inoichi's. Sakura began asking Naruto questions but stopped him before he could answer with another. Naruto just let his green eyed friend ramble on.

Sakura ended up calming down from the excitement. "Ok...ok so when are you going to ask her?"

"I was planning on next week during our anniversary." Naruto smiled.

"And how where you planning on doing it?"

"I hadn't really thought of the best way. I've had a few ideas, but I thought you might be able to help." Naruto smiled at his friend who had a large grin on her face. Sakura began thinking of ways as Naruto sat on the table. His back was feeling better. They sat there in silence as Sakura thought out different ways to help her friend.

Suddenly the door flew open showing Shikamaru and Choji standing at the door. Naruto looked up at his two friends. "Hey guys are you already back from the mission."

Choji nodded as Shikamaru spoke. "Ya...what a drag it was a c-rank mission...Ino's at her house if you're wond-" Shikamaru couldn't finish his sentence before Sakura butted in. "NARUTOS GOING TO PROPOSE TO INO NEXT WEEK!" Naruto glared at his teammate before looking at the two men, who stood at the door in shock.

Naruto decided to speak to wake them out of it. "Ya...I was kind of hoping to tell her on our anniversary...if SOMEBODY doesn't spill the news first."

Naruto glared at Sakura. "WHAT it slipped out...I was excited."

Choji and Shikamaru stared at the two then at each other then at Naruto. Shikamaru was the first to speak. "P-propose to Ino?"

Naruto looked at them before answering, "Ya I really love her and want to spend the rest of my life with her."

The two men looked at the blonde man. Ino had become a sister to Shikamaru and Choji, and they looked after her like brothers. The two looked at each other, and before anyone could say anything they tackled Naruto to the ground. Naruto tried to fight back but Shikamaru had him pinned and Choji was sitting on top of him. Shikamaru had his arms pinned back naruto tried to get up but Choji's weight was preventing it.

"WHAT THE HELL?!" Shikamaru pulled his arm back more a few 'ow's and 'ouch's escaped Naruto's mouth.

Sakura stood in front of the dog pile, "WHAT ARE YOU TWO DOING?"

Choji looked up at his green eyed friend. "We don't think this is Naruto."

"WHAT OF COURSE ITS- OW!"

"Shut up!" Shikamaru pulled his arm further behind his back.

Sakura sighed, "Why don't you believe its Naruto?"

Shikamaru answered first "Naruto wouldn't just spring this a week before. He would have told someone before. He's a big mouth."

Choji continued. "And he's acting different."

Sakura rubbed her temples. "Naruto's unpredictable and in love and..." She looked at her friends sighed and said. "Ok so how are you going to prove he's a fake?"

The two looked at each other. "Well quiz him." Choji stated.

Sakura sighed as Naruto continued to try and fight free, eventually giving up. "Go ahead quiz me but I'm the real Narut-oh OH OW!"

Shikamaru pulled his arm stopping him from speaking. Shikamaru began his questioning, "Question number one: name all of your senseis."

"Kakashi, Ebisu, Jaryia, Yamato and Tsunade's show me some stuff too."

Shikamaru smirked before Choji asked the next question. "What's your favorite food?"

"That's easy. Ramen from Ichirak-ew OW!" Naruto answered.

He was cut off by Shikamaru. "Who are you trying to bring back to the village?"

The room became silent along with Naruto as a greater pain over took him. "Sasuke Uchiha." Naruto answered with sadness in his voice.

Shikamaru released his grip on Naruto as Choji stood up. Once his two friends were off of him he stood up as well. "Ah sorry about that Naruto-" Shikamaru began.

Naruto cut him off, "No problem, I know you two were just looking out for Ino. If it makes you feel any better I would have done the same for Sakura."

Sakura laughed silently at what her friends had just done before asking, "Naruto do you have the ring?"

Naruto's eyes lit up before running over to his jacket. "Ya Sakura-chan but I left your ring at home."

Naruto pulled out the small box and opened it to show his friends. They all looked in amazement for a while before Naruto shut the box and placed it back in his pocket.

"Ya but I still need to figure out a way to propose to her." Sakura eyes widened as an idea came to mind.

"I've got it!" All three looked at the pink haired medic. Sakura began telling them of her plan.

Naruto's face lit up as well, "SAKURA-CHAN THAT BRILLANT!" Sakura nodded 'modestly' at the blondes comment.

The next week Naruto walked up to Ino's house to pick her up for dinner. He had everything planned out for tonight. He looked at the window to get a reflection of himself one last time. He wore a black suit and his hair was its usual spike but a little more tamed. He checked himself before knocking on the door. After a minute Ino came to the door. Her hair was down from its usual pony tail and flowed down her back. She wore an elegant dark purple strapless dress that went to her knees. She also wore black heels and a silver necklace that Naruto knew once belonged to her mother. Naruto stared at Ino as she clutched a black purse. Naruto held out a bouquet of roses. Ino smelled the roses and thanked Naruto before setting them inside. Naruto still couldn't help but stare at how beautiful Ino looked.

Ino smiled. "Naruto are you ready?"

Naruto snapped out of his daze and responded, "Ya let's go."

Naruto offered Ino his arm, which she gladly accepted as they walked to the restaurant.

As they entered the restaurant Naruto held the door open for Ino.

Once they were in Naruto walked up to the counter, "We have reservations for two under Uzumaki."

The man looked at the list before replying, "Yes Uzumaki, if you will just follow me I will show you to your table."

The couple followed the man until they came to a small table in the corner by the window. The man held out the seat for Ino then for naruto. The couple began to look at the menu. Something inside told Ino that tonight would be THE night. She waited in anticipation, but being a good kunoichi was able to hide it. After a few minutes the waiter came over to ask for their drink orders, Naruto ordered top shelf sake for both of them. One the drink came the waiter poured them both a cup in small elegant glasses. Ino inspected her glass thinking there might be a ring in it, but sadly there wasn't, so she took a small sip in disappointment.

Once they ordered the food, which was steak curi and rice with dangos. When Ino got hers she began poking around looking for the ring, no luck. Naruto saw this and smirked, knowing what Ino was doing.

While they ate Naruto 'accidentally' hit his class with his knife. Naruto loved seeing Ino's face light up when she thought he was going to propose.

But instead of proposing he said, "Woops sorry."

Also during their dinner Naruto stood up, Ino froze thinking he was about to propose, but instead he went to the bathroom. Ino sat there a bit disappointed, really disappointed, and blew some hair out of her face before continuing eating. After Naruto came back, and they both finished eating Naruto paid the bill and they left the restaurant.

As they walked back Naruto stopped Ino. "Ino hold on."

Ino stopped the setting was perfect. They were in the middle of a park the moon was shining, they were surrounded by flowers and fireflies flew about.

Naruto got down on one knee. "My shoe is untied."

Naruto 'tied' his shoe and gave his fox smile as Ino glared at him. Naruto stood up. "Shall we continue?" Naruto said taking Ino's hand.

Ino nodded and continued. Ino decided to give up thinking he was going to propose tonight.

Naruto walked Ino to her door. "Alright Naruto if you're going to propose do it now." Ino thought to herself.

Sadly for Ino, he didn't, but he did give her a passionate kiss before heading back to his house.

Ino smiled as she walked into her house and thought, "Well tonight did go well."

Ino began heading up to her room. Naruto leapt up to her room and entered through her window. He looked at her room one last time before she entered, seeing Sakura Choji and Shikamaru had set it up perfectly. Naruto heard the door opening and hid.

Ino walked in her room, carrying her heels and her purse. As she entered the room Ino saw how it was decorated. There were flower petals everywhere and candles were lit on the sides there was a small bottle of champagne angled in a silver bucket of ice next to her table which had two champagne glasses sitting on it.

Ino gasped and dropped her heels and her purse at the sight. She walked up to her bed, where there was a small card. Ino opened the small card which had an arrow pointing up. Ino looked up to see Naruto standing on the ceiling above her. He flipped down and landed next to her. He pulled her in to a deep kiss before releasing.

He stepped one step back. "Ino I love you and want to spend the rest of my life with you."

Naruto reached in his pocket as Ino was on the brink of tears. Naruto pulled out the small velvet box.

The blonde male got down on one knee as Ino tried not to cry. "Ino Yamanaka, will you marry me?"

Ino nodded. "Yes. YES!"

He slipped the ring on her finger. She stared at it for a second before looking back at her new fiancé before she tackled him to the ground and kissed him. After they broke off to breathe, laid there staring into each others eyes, until they heard a sound coming from Ino's closet.

They both sat up Naruto had his arm around Ino. They both stood up they could hear mumbled words and frequent shushes, as they walked over to the closet. Ino opened it as Naruto stood behind her ready to attack. All of their friends fell out of the closet on top of each other. Naruto pulled Ino back to him so she wouldn't get covered by their spying friends.

They all looked up at the couple and smiled.

"H-hey guys what's up?" Sakura said.

"Forehead, Shikamaru, Choji, Hinata..." Ino began.

"What are you doing?" Naruto finished.

"WE WANTED TO SEE THE YOUTHFUL FLAMES OF-" Lee began before Tenten slapped him.

"I told you this would happen...huh what a drag." Shikamaru said.

Their friends began to get up.

The couple stood staring at them, "Alright what happened?" Naruto asked.

"Well Shikamaru Choji and I went to go get everything for tonight then we saw Tenten Lee and Neji and-" Sakura began.

"Ya and we wanted to know what they were doing and they made up some lame excuse and Neji busted them and after we figured out what really happened we decided to help until we saw Hinata Kiba and Shino-" Tenten continued Sakura's story.

"A-and we wanted to s-see what they were d-doing-" Hinata said before Tenten cut her off,

"Then Lee told what we were doing and they wanted to help so we all came to Ino's to set everything up-"

Sakura cut Tenten off. "And then we wanted to see how it happened and then...ya."

The blondes looked at each other. The friends looked at them Naruto looked pissed and Ino looked like she was about to beat them up.

"OUT!" Ino yelled pointing at her door.

Their friends got up and began to leave. Ino huffed as her friends began leaving saying their congrats on their way out.

Ino sighed as Naruto wrapped his arms around her once all of their friends were gone.

Ino leaned in to kiss Naruto, "Forget about them. Come on." Naruto pulled Ino to her bed.

Ino stopped realizing she was still in her dress. "Hold on."

Naruto looked at her with a confused face. "What is it?"

Ino smiled, "I'm still in my dress let me change."

Naruto smiled and nodded as Ino went into her closet and changed Ino a purple laced top with shorts. Naruto smiled and grabbed Ino. Naruto sat on her bed Ino sat down as well. Naruto poured both of them a glass of champagne. Ino took the glass and leaned back to rest on Naruto's chest. Naruto smiled as Ino took a sip of her drink.

"So how did you do it?" Ino asked looking up at Naruto.

"Hm? What are you talking about?" Naruto asked looking down at Ino.

"Get Sakura Choji and Shikamaru to help you...and does my father know?"

Naruto laughed. "Yes Inoichi knows."

"Inoichi? Since when have you called him Inoichi?"

Ino knew Naruto never called him anything besides Ino's father or Yamanaka-san. Naruto then told Ino the story of how he told Inoichi and Sakura and how Shikamaru and Choji found out. Ino laughed at some parts and was about to go pound Choji and Shikamaru for attacking Naruto like that, but Naruto calmed her down. They continued talking and thinking about their future until Ino fell asleep on Naruto. He tucked Ino into her bed and picked up the proposal stuff before kissing her and leaving.

Yes to those who have already read AES it's not that different, but hey I dont make huge changes until Inaru comes into the story, but I am making some minor changes.

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