Hey, this is my first FF, please go easy on me, but I will take kritik as well xD - Traveling soldier, Dixie chicks

I'd just finished the shower, and again Edward asked if I needed any help; I had broken my right wrist two weeks ago because I've been a little too eager to see Edward and my wrist slammed into Edwards ribs. It didn't hurt Edward but let just say I've had to visit Carlisle at the ER.

I of curse had assured Edward that I could take a shower on my one, but that I would call if I needed any help. He had helped me wrap in my hand so it didn't get wet.

Edward waited patiently on my bed as I came in to my room, handsome and perfect as always. His perfect marble skin, his onyx eyes, defined jaw and high cheekbones. I could tell he had been hunting because his beautiful bronze hair was wilder than it used to be.

"Hello, sweet girl, did you have a nice shower?" Edward asked sweetly.

"Why yes, I did. But I can't brush my hair with my wrist. Alice have been doing it for me, would you mind help me?" I Asked.

He didn't say anything but patted the space on the bed between his legs. There was a twinkle in his eyes I couldn't read so I just did as he asked.

He took the comb from me and started from my skull, it felt so good and he just worked his way out, and started from my skull again. I almost fell asleep. Suddenly he stopped and I could feel his cool breath in my hair. He reached down and began to kiss my neck up to the spot under my ear and back to my shoulder. I let out a moan.

"Bella you smell so delicious" He said with emotion in his voice and I giggled.

I turned around so we were face to face; He took a grab in my hair and crushed his lips to mine. I was surprised when the kiss turned greedier and I decided to be bold and swirled my tongue over his bottom lip. Suddenly he stopped and placed his forehead on mine and breathes rasped.

"Bella my Beautiful Bella" He said

"I'm sorry" I said

"Don't be, you should sleep now, we have school tomorrow"

With that he laid me under the covers and I fell asleep to him humming my lullaby.