Coming Back chapter 3

And by the way, I think this all takes place instead of Phantom Planet. You know how the movie kinda reveals everything yet leaves us hanging? Well instead of all that, this happens. It took me awhile to think of all this. Lol. And I think I'll change that instead of his parents knowing everything, they'll be clueless to and think he just ran away. But--

anyway....

Danny started.
"So you remember when I went into the ghost zone to talk to Danni? Well instead of finding her Walker found me.
"I thought I could have easily escaped like I usually do, but he had an upgrade. Nothing, and I mean nothing,could get through the walls, not even humans. It was hard at first since all the ghosts there hated me. But it got easier when we realized we needed all the friends we could get. And that's how we all escaped.
"It was kind of like last time only we killed all the guards we could. Not all of them but we got most. I don't know if they're technical dead, but they never came back and seemed to be in terrible pain."
"So, wait," Tucker interrupted. "How did you do it? Kill them I mean?"
Danny seemed to ponder this, then gave up. "I honestly don't know," he sighed, defeated. "We just went at them in a bloodied rage, not really wondering or stopping to think what we were doing."
Tucker nods and I tell him to continue.
"So...umm...We got out of the prison but we couldn't get out of the shield thing. So Skulker did something that had such a massive explosion it took down the shield but shot is all over the place,and I'm pretty sure it killed the weaker ones.
"I was trap somewhere in a deserted part of the Ghost Zone. No one there to help me and the occasional ghost were no help. So I just fought them all off and since I didn't need to eat when in ghost form I just slept. It was terribly boring."
He takes a break to look at us, seeming to be waiting for questions. And when none came he went on.
"It went on for days and soon I lost track of time. It never showed if it was night or day so I couldn't tell weather or not it was one day, half a day or two.
"So it went on like that for awhile. Fighting, sleeping, then the notes you guys sent me brought me back to life in a way. I was so lonely lifeless I didn't care about anything. Not even living. But when I found out I wasn't forgotten and hadn't lost touch in the world completely."
This time it was me who interrupted. "So you got them." It wasn't a question but a simple statement.
Danny nods. I smile and tell him to keep on speaking.
"Eventually I found a portal and went though. I came out around where Clock Work was. He showed me the way back and a quick glace at what you've been doing. Like at lunch, what you do after school, when your in the bathroom...--"
"What?!" we shout at the same time. He laughs and a smile lights up his handsome features.
"And that," He concludes, "is pretty much it."
I ask, "What happened when you got home?" I pause. "You did go home, right?"
"Yes," he answers. "I went home."
"Well," I press. "What happened?"
He seems to think into this. "Umm... When I knocked on the door my mom answered the door but it seemed that she didn't recognize me. When she asked me what I was selling I started to cry and little. So I told her that it was me and she looked shocked at first then after she just looked at me for awhile then she started crying and was hugging me like you did," he looked at me as he said this. "When my dad came out and saw me, and by judging by my moms reaction, actually recognized me. There was this whole group hug. Only Jazz wasn't there." He looked disappointed when he mentioned this.
"You mean you didn't see Jazz?" Tucker asks.
He chuckles at this. "Oh, did I see her." he stretches. "Let me tell you. When I got up that morning and was starving, I went down to the kitchen in only the boxers that I slept in. After I poured myself a bowl of cereal and just leaned against the counter eating Jazz walked in.
"Only she was wearing some over sized guys t-shirt and had smeared make-up all over her face. And when she saw me she looked so surprised to see me I thought she knew who I was. But when she asked me if I was one of the guys she slept with last night I started to laugh and laugh like a mad man on crack."
"So wait," I stop him. "Jazz is, like, a slut now?"
He nods. "Yeah, after I stopped laughing and looked her up and down I was like 'Uh I'm not into incest, sorry'. Then she says 'Wait, what?' so I ask her why she doesn't remember me but kind of different from the way I asked you guys. When she figured it out she gave me a hug like everyone did but the think that was different from this one was some huge random guy came down stairs and glared at me. But that all ended when she introduced me as her brother and I went to get dresses for school."
He finishes and we just sit there. In a lighter mood but still shocked by all that's happened.
All of a sudden the bell rings and we jump.
As I get up I tell them to meet me at the park after school. We all walk together like we used to. Only this time Danny, instead of being close to our height, stands a full head and a half over me and a half over Tucker.
We had got a lot of catching up to do. I think as we head off to class.

okay so I did this in 3 hours while watching fire proof for the 5th time with my dad and his girlfriend. So tell me what you think, some suggestions and critizim.

~Kelsey

P.S. don't google images incest please. If you do, just plain GOOGLE it, 'kay?

thanks!